Hello Physco Amanda and welcome to WDC. This is very good, you are right a bully calls others what he/she sees in themselves. I like the way you have expressed this in the last verse. A very thought provoking poem with an excellent message.
Hello and welcome to WDC. I am a group mentor in"Invalid Item" . I am not much good in helping with stories as poetry is my thing, but M.A.GEORGE is also a mentor and I am sure can help with your stories. Would you like me to put your name forward to him? Or if you like you can just join the group.
Hello, I have just read your very beautiful letter. How sweet and sad at the same time. But you are right, you must move on and I am sure it is what your wife would have wanted.
Hello Tyler C, I have just been reading your interesting essay. I actually believe in this. I think we all had it and some lost it when gtown up, some did not. I remember a few events of my childhood that still have me baffled now.
Hello Ever, this is an excellent story, very mysterious. I was engrossed from start to finish. I look forward to reading more of it and would not change a thing.
Hello Isola, this a beautiful story. I admire anyone who can do this sort of thing and still keep strong. Although I imagine at times it can be very difficult, I am sure also it must be very rewarding to know you have comforted these people in their time of need.
Hello, I like the message in this poem. It is sad that people aim to please others instead of themselves. That is a pity because then they will never be themselves,
I liked the rhythm of the poem. I did find the rhyming went off in the fourth verse " Facade and shod."
Hello, I like this, I like the way you have described yourself as all of these things. My favourite I think is the misunderstood weed, because they are. I quite like the Vodka bit too!
Hello Aidan, thoughtful little poem. I note you say you do no want to write a description. You will find that people will maybe not read your writing if you do not give a small description.
Hello and I believe a late welcome to WDC. I have just read your poem and I think it is beautiful. The imagery is excellent , I could almost see the couple, her with her wine, him stroking back her hair.
Hello, I am not sure these tips are a good idea! lol I know they just for fun. But I think the best way to lose weight is to eat less junk and exercise!
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