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Review of Fiore--Language  
Review by Sanita
Rated: 13+ | (2.0)
Hello and welcome to WDC. I have not read the story yet, but looking at this, I imagine it would be difficult to understand.

The reader would have to keep coming back here to translate, they may find it a little tedious. Just my opinion.

Good luck with your story.

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello,what a lovely little story. Memories of childhood christmas and your very own Santa!

However, I do think it would read better if separated in to paragraphs. But that is just my opnion.

Lovely memories, I enjoyed the read.

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Vanessa, a lot of reasons to love someone, but no doubt the list is endless really.

My favourite is " I love you because you always accept me and everything I am."

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review of Lost  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello, perhaps your place in the world, is to write lovely little verses such as this.

Best wishes. Sanita
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Review of Elastic Devotion  
Review by Sanita
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello Francis, A delicate subject indeed. But it happens, we all assume domestic violence is only aimed at women, but men suffer as much.

The titile is very apt, "Elastic Devotion." No matter how much abuse, something always draws them back.

A really good poem.

Best wishes. Sanita
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Review of The Veil of Grey  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Ladyabstract, I have just read your poem. We all tend to have those moments of doubt, but a little faith goes a long way.

My favourite line, "His Majesty shows in the strangest places. He shows up with all kinds of faces." We never know who we are talking to.

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review of The Day I Left  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, this is beautiful, it takes a very couragous person to walk away from abuse.

I love the way you have, not only described the feeling of freedom from the one who walked away, but also how the abuser felt.

Really good poem.

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review of The Silent Walk  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello, I just finished reading your story. I did find it a little muddled as it seemed to jump from one thing to another with nothing in between, that left a lot questions.

However, the last paragraph was intriguing, and I thinking with a little editing you could make a good story out of this.

Keep writing.

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review of Something Good  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, well I would say, after reading your poem, you have written something good!

Really enjoyed it and great rhythm and rhyme.

Keep writing comedy.

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review of Sounds  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Mari, welcome to WDC. A lovely poem, I like to believe that loved ones passed over can still communicate with us in some way.

Lovely poem, keep writing.

Best wishes.

Sanita.

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Review by Sanita
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello Vagabond, I have just read your little story. I never find it easy to react to a prompt, but you have done it well here.

Keep writing.

Best wishes.

Sanita.

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Review of Homecoming  
Review by Sanita
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello LOT, thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  . I was pleased to see an entry from you.

Title got my attention and imagery is good.

Plot was very good, I enjoyed the read. I am not sure about the rating though, it may need to be higher than E.

Good luck in the contest!

Best wishes. Sanita
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Review of Life of Teenager  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello and welcome to WDC. A good essay and the subject an interesting one. However it is a little too spaced out.

Also the word cos is not really a word, it should read, because teenage life only comes once.

Good topic.

Best wishes.

Sanita

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Review of Key for happiness  
Review by Sanita
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello, very wise words and very true.Good luck in the conest!

Best wishes. Sanita
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Review of Loss Of A Child  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello bikergirl35, your poem is absolutely beautiful, no wonder it is your favourite.

It ended just as beautiful as it started, with all the lovely bits in between.

Loved it, there is nothing I would change.

Keep writing.

Best wishes. Sanita
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Review of Roaming  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, leaving home is always very sad, but then a new life to look forward to.

I like the rhythm and rhyme you have here, although I think it may read better in verses. But that is just my preference.

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review of Remember When  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello and welcome to WDC. Lovely poem, remembering days gone by. I think this time of year always brings back memories, good and bad.

One typo, I think you meant Brother in verse three.

Keep writing.

Best wishes.

Sanita

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Review of Broken  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Quill, interesting poem. I think we are easy pray if broken.

I like the line, "For once broken, you are beyond ownership."

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review of Monsters  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello again Holden, you are right monsters do live inside the head. Bu mine make me eat chocolate and do things I did not ought to do!

Nothing as dark as the monsters in your poem.

Good poem.

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review of My Grandmother  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Alba. a lovely little poem for your grandmother.

I like the first line best, "The woman with the most heart and soul."

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Holden, I think we have all at sometime in our lives felt the words in your poem.

Good, yet sad little poem.

Sanita
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Review of Solder Boy  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello , a very beautiful poem, it is such a shame that it is true.

All of it is lovely, I would not change a thing.

Best wishes. Sanita
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Review of We never know  
Review by Sanita
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello nightly, your handle reminds me of Mr Nightly in Jane Autins' Emma.

This is a good story and the message is clear, we never who we are talking to.

The only thing I found was that it seemed to move on too quickly. One minute he was unloading boxes and the next he had started the new school, then before we could blink he had left home. A little more in between would have been good. But that is just my opinion.

Best wishes and keep writing. Sanita
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Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Ani, reading this it brought back memories. I do not think it I would like to go through it again as beautiful as it is.

You described the whole giving birth so well, I was actually in pain!

Lovely little note to your Mother too.

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review of A Dream  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello Kavi, welcome to WDC. A mixture of different scenes in your dream. I think my favourite is poetry floating through the skies.

I think this would read better put in to verses, rather than one long poem. But that is just my thoughts.

Nice poem.

Keep writing.

Best wishes. Sanita

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