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Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello, I think late night is the best time to write, so many thoughts that we do not have time for in the day.

Nice little poem.

Sanita
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Review of I Love You Lilly  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello, this a lovely little poem. I allways enjoy reading poems for children.

I would not change a thing.

Best wishes. Santa
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Review of Devan  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello KittyCat, a poem of confusion and love.

You have poured out your heart in your words. I allways think if a person is unhappy, they should walk away.

Nice but sad poem.

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review of Ups and downs  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello, I like this poem, I think many can relate to it. It is said we allways hurt the one we love.

I think my favourite line is "We made love and shared pain."

Lovely poem.

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review of The Message  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello, wow that is a bit extreme for a surprise party, I would have been screaming the place down thinking I was about to be brought to my death.

Seriously though, a good read, but why'm? Is there such a word?

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, I have read this poem a few times and while it is very lovely, I do not understand the last verse.

Has the poet found a new love or did the old one come back?

Best wishes. Sanita
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Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello and welcome to WDC. I have just read your children's story.

Lovely imagery and although I enjoyed it very much, I feel there could be more. You brought in the evil queen at the end and I want to know whether her plot to take over the island works! *Smile*.

In the line, "That could only be reached by your wildest imagine," should be, your wildest imagination.

Great story.

Best wishes. Sanita

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Review by Sanita
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello, what a lovely little story. These things really happen and it is good to know some one is happy to adopt a child.

The story would read better if paragraphs were separated.

Great story.

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello, this is a good poem, I like the message it gives. We do ignore natures course.

My favourite line "Avoiding the rain with a shield of synthetic that they feel protects them."

Typos, sheild should be shield and comeout should be spaced, come out.

Keep writing.

Best wishes. Sanita

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Review by Sanita
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello , this is fabulous! Did you get inspired by the two word tuesday?

Shorten it and enter in "Invalid Item" 

Sanita
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Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Tonewolf, I love the way you have described the butterflies life.

My favourite lines "Strange how you so small, changed the world I live in."

Nature is beautiful.

Lovely poem.

Sanita
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Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello Cristal, I have just been reading your poem. I thought it very good, with a nice rhythm and rhyme.

A couple of typos "Dont you See?" Not" Don't u see?" and "disbelief," not "disbaliefe," also always a capitol I,

Good poem.

Best wishes. Sanita
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Review of Sold on Chimes  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Avid Learner, thank you for your entry in the "Invalid Item"  .

I enjoyed reading your story, I love the sound of wind chimes too.

Good imagery, I can imagine someone riding along on their bike, happy with the thought of the beautiful sound of the wind chimes.

Well done and good luck in the contest.

Sanita
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Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello EmJay, welcome to WDC. I think this little story is great and so typical. There had been many a time I found a little hiding place for a few moments when my children were young.

Great story.

Keep writing!

Best wishes. Sanita.

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Review of From Prompt  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Beth, I thought your story was very good. Although I would never get out of my car to check on a supicious looking figure.

Great story, keep writing.

Best wishes. Sanita
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Review of Special K  
Review by Sanita
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello, A lovely poem to your brother. Drug addiction, like all addictions, ruin the lives of so many bright and talented people.

Best wishes. Sanita
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Review of Bin the Bar  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Kellie, I am not sure chocolate is the culprit of obesity. Rather I would say fast foods are. A little chocolate would not harm. Besides, I like chocolate!

I know it is meant as humour, and very good too. Now where did I put my Mars Bar *Smile*

Sanita
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Review of Kylie  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello, what a very sad poem. The other girl may be pretty, but does she have the qualities that the poet has?

Lovely poem. Sanita
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Review of Forest Green  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, I have been reading your poem. I thought it beautiful and very sad.

I would not change any of it, lovely poem.

Best wishes. Sanita
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Review of Over  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello, I have just been reading your poem. I liked it, but I think it would be better without the "Hah!" at the start.

As you have " Peaceful, amicable and eternal farewell," the Hah, sounds more like a sneer than a peaceful farewell. Just my thoughts.

Keep writing.

Sanita.

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Review of Mirror, Mirror  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Em, welcome to WDC. Eating disorders are a terrible thing and it is sad that so many young people get caught up in them.

The desire to be thin and never contented with themselves.

A very sad poem, well written.

Best wishes. Sanita

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Review of Life is......  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello, welcome to WDC. I like your little poem, very true words.


Keep writing. Sanita

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Review of Worthless  
Review by Sanita
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello, I have just been reading your poem. I think you have talent and special quality, it shows in your poem.

Nicely written.

Keep writing!

Sanita
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Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello, I have just finished reading your poem and had to comment.

I think it is very good, I love the title and your word a frienemy.

Lovely poem.
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Review of Eternity  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello Daizy, sweet little story, almost magical.

You have missed out lots of comma's which made it a little difficult to read. For example, in the line,"One of the days I was watching her fight the treatment she begged me to let her, walk around outside," would read better as "One of the days I was watching her fight the treatment, she begged me to let her walk around outside."

Nice story, keep writing!

Sanita.

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