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Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello, very wise words. We should never judge anyone by appearances.


Well said.

Best wishes.

Sanita

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Review of colorfull fall  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello, lovely imagery in your poem. Not enough people appreciate what is all around us.

Lovely poem, the only error I see is, always use a capital I .

Keep writing.

Best wishes.

Sanita

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Review by Sanita
Rated: 18+ | (2.5)
Hello and welcome to WDC. I have just been trying to read your story. But, I do not know if you are aware, the sentences are not lined up properly. It can be difficult when you are new to the site and unsure.

I am happy to help if needed. Please fell free to e-mail me.

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review of Unlikely Friends  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Jessica , I have just finished reading your story. I think children always enjoy a dragon story and this would be no exception.

I do think it would read better if you start a new line each time a character speaks. It makes a lot of difference to how it is read.

A good children's story.

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review of It's All Good  
Review by Sanita
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello, very true, it is "All Good," as long a we are happy in ourselves.

I realy enjoyed the little poem, but also felt it is unfinished. I think a lot more could be added to it, to make it more than it already is. But that is just my opinion.

I see no errors.

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review of just leaves...  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Gemma, I like this, Very clever how you have reversed the last part.

An enjoyable read.

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review of Two Little Leaves  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Whitemorn, what a cute little tale of a leaf. I loved it! There are lots of poems and tales about leaves out there at the moment, I suppose that is the Autumn thing, but none so cute as this.

Loved the rhythm and rhyme.

Keep writing them.

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review of Insecurities  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello and welcome to WDC. This is very good advice, as often we do tend to blame others for our own insecurities. We cannot expect our partners/husbands /wives. or even children, to need the same things we do.

Good piece or writing and advice.

Bet wishes.

Sanita.

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Review of Never enough  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (5.0)
HI LOT, this a great little story. You are good at short stories.

Sanita
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Review of Heat Exchange  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is cool, (if you will pardon the pun) . Wishing your life away is not good and I like the heat! But it is still a really good 55 word story.

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review of A Dog's Life  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, I love this poem, very funny but naughty dog.

Great read, I enjoyed it.

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review of Notes to Self....  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, your poem is beautiful. I think many people can relate to this. Lots of notebooks full of our innermost thoughts, tucked away with pretty ribbons.

Beautiful poem and I would not change any of it.

I really enjoyed the read.

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review of Autumn  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, what a beautiful, emotional poem of the life of a leaf. I do not think I will ever look at a leaf in quite the same way.

A lovely read, thank you for sharing.

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello, funny little conversation with your Guinea Pig. One day he will shock you and say something other than Squeak!

Best wishes.

Sanita.

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Review of When Sylvie Sang  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, what a beautiful story and so well written. I actually felt like it was real and could not stop reading.

A lovely story and I see no error.

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review of I lost  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello, welcome to WDC I have just read your thoughts and feelings. This is jusr my opinion, not criticsim.

It sounds like a lack of confidence, when the right one comes along you will know. But remember, nobody belongs to another person.

Best wishes.

Sanita.

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Review of My Angel  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Vanessa, this is a lovely poem. I love reading personal poetry as I know it comes from the heart.

Two typos, In the first line fourth verse you have a capital t in the, and last line "I know your watching me," should be, "I know you're watching me."

Lovely poem.

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review of Midlife Burning  
Review by Sanita
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Hello, I have just read your poem about the london riots. Your writing is very good, but I must admit I have mixed feelings over the riots. I can see why the young felt rebelious, but I cannot see why violence needed to be the answer.


Well written poem though.

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review of A Love So True  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello, I have just read your poem. Lovely words to the love of your life.


Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review of Solitude  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello welcome to WDC. What a lovley little poem. You are right we think are fine in our solitude but deep sown there is something missing.

Lovely poem.

Best wishes.

Sanita.

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Review of My shed.  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (5.0)
HI Toni, I know, I have seen your shed lol. This is funny though and typical of you!


Sanita
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Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Toni, this is a lovely poem for becki. Great rhythm and rhyme.

Sanita
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Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello, this is so sweet, but I am glad you admit it. lol Only joking, lovely little poem.

Sanita
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Review of In His Arms  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello, a lovely inspirational poem. I think we should all faith in something, it does help.

Two typos, i should be I and warped I think you meant wrapped?

Good poem.

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review of Playground  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello, I like this poem. Likening life to a merry go round, it is so true, full of ups and downs.

Great poem.

Best wishes.

Sanita
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