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Review of Big Day For Goose  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Okemo, that was quite intense, poor Rhonda. I have never eaten Goose and doubt I ever will. So traumatised.


Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review by Sanita
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello J Stanley, how true the customer is not always right. Is this a true story? I would have been afraid to confront him I think.

Thank you for sharing this.

Sanita

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Review of Squad Room Humor  
Review by Sanita
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hello brin, I liked the VIagra story, very funny, but I am not sure I would want to find a head down the toilet!

Thank you for sharing.

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review of Angelita  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Nellafantasia welcome to WDC. I have just read your poem "Angelita"  .

What a pretty poem about a crush on your friend.

I really loved loved the last few lines, "I dream of you more,
Te quiero Angelita Linda
Mi amor.!

Very nice, only one suggestion and that is to use capital letters for the first letter of her name.
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Review of 4am  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello devlin, I have just read your poem "4.am." I like it, I think there is no better time to write poetry than in the midst of the night when all else is quite.

I can almost smell that rose scented incence.

Good poem.

Best wishes.

Sanita

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Review of Linger  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello nakialambert, Welcome to WDC. I have just read your poem "Linger."

Although I am not a great lover of non rhyming poems, I must say I thought this very good.

Your description is very good as misery has taken over what was once happy and no matter what you do it will not go away. Although I am not sure why you should thank someone for creating tragedy?

I like the poem.

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review of Why Me  
Review by Sanita
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Hello and welcome to WDC. I have just read your poem, "Why Me?"

Is'nt it strange how everything seems to go wrong for a while and then suddenly one little thing happens to change it all? Like your $600 in the bank.

A good poem of emotions and expressions.

The only thing I would suggest, I know you have not used punctuation, but I feel a Question mark would be better after "why me?".

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review of The Final Breath  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Patrece, thank you for your entry in the "Invalid Item"  .

You have put this together very well. So intense for such a short story.

I thought it very good and good imagery too.

Best wishes and good luck in the contest.

Sanita
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Review of TAKING A CHANCE  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello love and trust, I have just read your poem, "Taking Chances." I imagine this happens a lot, niether party wants to admit they like the other, or are afraid to say.

Great way you built it up into giving the person in question your number.

Suggestions. I did find the rhythm a little wobbly and feel it would read well in verses rather than all in one.

But that is just my opinion, others may feel different.

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review of Bare  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello M.H. Stiles, welcome to WDC. What a great poem and so true, we do tend to write what we would not say aloud.

Great work.

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review of Weep  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello cthilking, welcome to WDC what a lovely piece of inspirational writing.

Keep writing.

Sanita

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Review of The Hunch  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Dory, A lovely poem about your feelings and relationship. Perhaps it is better that life will not be the same.

I think in line two verse two you might have meant Pawn not Porn?

Lovley poem.

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Patrece and congratulations! A great little quote.

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review of Poverty  
Review by Sanita
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Solace, I have just read your poem, "Poverty." Poverty is a dreadful thing but, no matter how hard it gets, I think we always have something someone else does not.

Good poem.

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review of Silent hill.  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello Alicks, I have just read your story "Silent Hill," I know it is still in progress, but it looks like it will be an interesting story.

The only thing I would say is the," Left, Right, Left, Right," does not seem to fit, I realise that is to emphasise the walking, but I feel it would be better without it. But that is just my opinion.

Best wishes.

Keep writing.

Sanita
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Review of Eyes  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello hell _raiser, I have just read your poem "Eyes." The poet looks at his eyes in the mirror and no longer recognises himself.

I thought it very good, I see no errors and would not change any of it.

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review by Sanita
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello Sohum. I have just read your very sad poem. Alzheimers is such a terrible thing and so heartbreaking for the family.

Lovely poem

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review of Christmas Pears  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Elenawrites, I have a read a few poems about pears today and all delicious, this one is no exception.


Nice poem, with a Christmas feel.

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review by Sanita
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
HI Storiable, thank you for your entry in "Invalid Item"  .

A lovely story of a Grandmothers passing. You made it sound so calm a peaceful.

Thank you for sharing your story and good luck in the contest.

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello, it must be hard to have grown up like this. To see your Mother not really happy.

Thank you for sharing.

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Fillmyeyes, just three lines of perfection. beautiful lines.

Sanita
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Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Rob, welcome to WDC, I have just been reading your poem. Funny poem about your sleep walking adventures. I do not think I would like to go shopping in my sleep!

I think it would look nicer if written in smaller letters for presentation.

Good poem.

Best wishes.

Sanita

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Review of Worthless  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello M.Y. Rose, I absolutely love this story. So emotional, great imagery , it drew me in from the beginning.

A great read I really enjoyed it.

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review of Lonesome Pain  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello GroovyStella, it is never a nice feeling when you have be around people and all you really want is to be alone. Suffer in silence as it were.

Good rhythm and rhyme except the last verse went off a bit.

Good poem of emotions.

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Mallori, some very good points in your essay. You are right we do not need to be religious to do good or help those less fortunate than us.

A great and well written essay.

My only suggestion would be to separate the paragraphs rather than indents. I know it is a preference, but I always find separated paragraphs easier to read.

Best wishes.

Sanita
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