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Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Ruth, I have just read your story, "Shrub The Christmas Tree."

What a beautiful story! I love the message it gives, that always the right person that suits you will come along.

I think children and adults will love this, I certainly did.

I have no suggestions, I would not change any of it.

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review by Sanita
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Steve, I have just read your poem, "Steve's Christmas Poem." So many Christmas stories and poems on the site lately! I wonder why. I have enjoyed reading them all, this one is no exception.

Very funny.

Sanita
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Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Maggie and welcome to WDC, I have just read your poem, "A Whisper Of A tear."

Overall impression: The poet has found their lover with another and hides their tears. A sad poem, but the poet knows she has to go on.

My favourite line, " And I finally saw you under the surface." We can know people for a long time and yet not actually know them.

Good poem.

Best wishes.

Sanita.

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Review of Hangmen  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Sam, I have just read your poem, "Hangmen."

Overall Impression: I read it as someone who has been bullied, hurt and betrayed so much they have taken their own life.

Very emotional poem, especailly the last few lines.

I have no suggestions to make.

Well written piece.

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review by Sanita
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Joe, I have just read your story,"Christmas Died At Logan."

I found it a facinating read, you have managed to mix fantasy and reality together, perfectly, with a spoonful of sarcasm.

Although I found it funny, I also found it a reminder of the bad things that happen in the world.

An amazing Story.

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review of to my ex  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello dkjj, I have just read our item,"To My Ex." In my experience, once an Ex they are best left an Ex.

I liked the first, "Monster," it is always best to close the door on a Monster, and start a new life.

Suggestions: There is no such word as U, it is you.

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review of Rhythm  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello BinaryHedgehog and welcome to WDC. I have just read your poem, "Rhythm."

What a great little poem and so true, there is rhythm in everything, even my fridge makes a rhythmic sound!


Best wishes

Sanita
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Review by Sanita
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Whitemorn, I had to come and read this after you posted in update.

I love it! Although I had never thought of Santa as an Elf before, but I quite like the idea.

Great rhyming and rhythm

Sanita
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Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Elizabeth, I am so glad I visited your port and found this poem. What a lovely Christmas poem. I love the excitement in children this time of year,

My favourite lines, "They cannot wait untill the next day, Santa Claus is on his way." So true.

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Quiltingmama, I have just read your story, "Christmas Surprises."

I realyl enjoyed this, had me interested from start to finish. I thought for a moment there was an intruder in the house, but relieved when it turned out to be Dylan.

The imagery is very good.

A great little read and I should be very surprised if it does not win.

No suggestions.

Sanita
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Review of She Exists  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello tayla, I have just read your poem, "She Exists."

I love the opening line, "She exists in breeze kissed curtains on a Sunday morning."

The whole poem is so good, what a way to describe someone. I would be so flattererd if someone wrote this for me.

It is beautiful.

Sanita
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Review of Evil men  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello chank12, I have just read your entry. "Evil Men." I thought it very good, also very sad to think these things actually happenend.

The imagery is really good.

I have no suggestions.

Best wishes and good luck in the contest.

Sanita
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Review of Follow the Thread  
Review by Sanita
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hello acceptthemystery, I must say you made really good use of the required words.

A lovely story, and it is true, we do not always have to believe in God to go to the church. Church can help in other ways too.

The only suggestion I have is I think the use of the word," And," was too much in the end lines.

A great little story.

Sanita
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Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello CTG, what a lovely yet sad Christmas story. For some children, this sort of thing is really happening, it reminds us not to take everything for granted. So a very good message in your story too.

The imagery is good and I thought it well written.

No suggestions.

Sanita
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Review of Ind'n Grandpa  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Hello Turtlemoon, I have just read your poem "Ind'n Grandpa."

Actually it was the title that captivated me first and I am so glad it did.

What a lovely poem, and what lovely childhood memories, I would have loved to meet some Indian people, I love their ways, so caring of the land.

I love the lines, "He always wore a white shirt, a hat and a curious smile on his chiseled face," great imagery.

I have no suggestions, I loved it all.

Sanita
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Review of Telephone Lover  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Soh, I have just read your poem, "Telephone Lover." I thought it very cleverly written. Was this true?

My favourite lines were "I had forgotten my name, but could not let her feel as if this was a game." So you just said the first name that came to mind, even thouigh it was a girls name. It is funny how we get tounge tied just at the sound of another's voice.

I loved the whole poem, but then it ended with that dreaded "Click." She must have had her reasons.

Best wishes.

Sanita
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Review by Sanita
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello AJane, I have just read your Essay on "Cheating In School."

I have to say I agree with the teacher, homework is homework and not meant to be copied from someone eles in the last five minutes before class starts. I do not feel the person is going to learn much by copying from someone else. Also if whoever they copied from has the work wrong or is poorly done, then that makes it even worse for the cheater.

Never the less a good essay and some really good points mentioned.

The only suggestion I have is to separate paragraphs.

Sanita
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Review of Without  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello CPaigeR, I have just read your poem, "Without." I think the message is really good. The poet is on a journey for life, fighting for what is theirs and going it alone.

My favourite lines were the last two "All these things I am going through, I hope you know, it's all for you."

The rhyming is good and I have no suggestions.

Sanita
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Review of First Christmas  
Review by Sanita
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello MJK, this all sounds very apetizing. A lovely little story and a very lucky Lady.

Sanita
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Review of The Walk  
Review by Sanita
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello acceptthemystery and welcome to WDC. I have just read your story."The Walk."

I thought it a beautiful story, I was engrossed from start to finish. but I am so glad Anna did not do it.

The imagery is really good, I think they are a little in love with each other.

Beautiful story and I have no suggestions.

I have no idea why someone would rate 3.5 it surely deserves a five.

Sanita.

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Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Jellyfish, I am a judge in the "Invalid Item"  , thank you for your entry.

Well your day dreaming certainly came true!

I thought it so good, the imagery is great and made me laugh at the end. Imagine if we really could switch to alternative reality?

You packed so much into such a short story, I loved it and wanted to read more.

Good luck in the contest!

Sanita
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Review of Broken  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Kittykat, welcome to WDC. I have just read your poem, "Broken."

We truely are broken when we lose a loved one, especially a sibling.

You describe how you feel very well in your poem and know that one day you will meet again.

Lovely poem for your sister.

Suggestions, always use a capital I.

Best wishes.

Sanita.

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Review of The Suicide Tree  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello Courtney, I have just your draft.

I would say you have the makings of a good story here with some work. There is something magical and yet dark about trees.

Suggestions.

First the writing is too big, it puts the reader off. Also you have no capital letters.

Keep writing it!

Sanita
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Review of Broken  
Review by Sanita
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Stephanie, thank you for your entry in the "Invalid Item"  .

This is a really good little story, you packed so much into such few words. Very intense and the imagery is very good.

I thought the ended very thought provoking, monsters disguised as men.

Best wishes and good luck in the contest.

Sanita
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Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello MRS. Whatsit, I love your handle. I have just been reading through your list of books and I must say my favourite is The Hobbit. I still pick it up every now and then to read again. Matilda is another favourite, but I think anything Roald Dahl writes is good. Of course C.S. Lewis is brilliant too.

Great choice of books.

Sanita
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