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Author: Bryce Kenn  [Jul 1, 2020] Genre(s): Religious :: Drama :: Other Details: I am looking for some feedback on the believability of the dialogue. Also, if you see stylistic issues, please point them out too. [Fiction]
Author: Wicked.Threat  [Jun 30, 2020] Genre(s): Psychology :: Paranormal :: Gothic Details: Any help will be greatly appreciated and rewarded. Thank you in advance. [Chapter]
Author: ruwth  [Jun 29, 2020] Genre(s): Fanfiction :: Mystery :: Detective Details: Are you a "Murder She Wrote" fan? I would love your feedback on this piece of fan-fiction. [Fiction]
Author: Sammy [Jun 29, 2020] Genre(s): Relationship :: None :: None Details: Read it and tell me what you think. [Poetry]
Author: Joto-Kai  [Jun 29, 2020] Genre(s): Fantasy :: Occult :: Tragedy Details: A tragic story. Heroic Sigrun makes a bad decision and everybody suffers--even the She-devil that planned the debacle. Good guys survive to recover. Two parter, each worth 1000 gp for thoughtful reviews. (Link to part ii at end of piece.)[Fiction]
Author: Wicked.Threat [Jun 28, 2020] Genre(s): Thriller/Suspense :: Other :: Other Details: I will greatly appreciate any reviews! Please and thank you. Young Adult Supernatural. [Novella]
Author: Somik Bandopadhyay [Jun 28, 2020] Genre(s): Emotional :: Activity :: Opinion Details: It is a bit emotional letter. Please, review this. [Letter/Memo]
Author: lezismore-with 2020 vision [Jun 26, 2020] Genre(s): Environment :: Family :: Nature Details: Any feed back on this would be much appreciated, positive or otherwise. Thanks [Other]
Author: CrisMiss [Jun 24, 2020] Genre(s): Children's :: Religious :: Parenting Details: Hi!I'm seeking feedback on believability of my characters, substance, and whether it touches on the heart. What can be improved upon? Thx! [Short Story]
Author: Icanterbareback [Jun 24, 2020] Genre(s): Emotional :: Experience :: Technology Details: Please let me know your initial thoughts when you read this piece. [Poetry]
Author: deatheater42 [Jun 24, 2020] Genre(s): Horror/Scary :: Fantasy :: Thriller/Suspense Details: Chapter 16 of my YA horror book. I don't expect you to understand EVERYTHING, but I included a brief recap. This is an important chapter because it introduces the monsters in my book, and i want it to be as effective as possible. any help would be great! [Fiction]
Author: Steven [Jun 24, 2020] Genre(s): Horror/Scary :: Fantasy :: Other Details: Does it capture the reader?The editing (spelling, punctuation, etc.) is done to Australian English standards. [Chapter]
Author: Icanterbareback [Jun 23, 2020] Genre(s): Experience :: Emotional :: None Details: I had this idea for a poem, but I'm not sure if it's complete or not. Please tell me if you like the poem and/or think it's complete or needs a little more added to it. Thanks! [Poetry]
Author: Jreese  [Jun 23, 2020] Genre(s): Comedy :: Comedy :: Comedy Details: This isn't a funny poem, is it?[Poetry]
Author: David Layman [Jun 21, 2020] Genre(s): Crime/Gangster :: None :: None Details: Over all writing quality. Do I need more or less descriptions? Was it boring? Grammar ok? [Short Story]
Author: willy [Jun 18, 2020] Genre(s): Romance/Love :: Experience :: Other Details: I wanted to convey my meaning by sounds, images rather than words. [Poetry]
Author: Sz, the Poet [Jun 17, 2020] Genre(s): Personal :: Occult :: Fantasy Details: Looking for critiques of the book as a whole, as opposed to critiques on the details of the poems. Flow, voice, and consistent quality are my goals. This is intended for publication as a chapbook. [Handbook]
Author: Cat Carroll [Jun 16, 2020] Genre(s): Horror/Scary :: Gothic :: Emotional Details: I've been working on my horror writing skills. Please tell me if I've improved and how this story sounds to you as I wish to become a horror author. Thank you very much! Please note it contains graphic elements such as blood, corpses, etc. [Short Story]
Author: Allie Gal [Jun 15, 2020] Genre(s): Religious :: Fantasy :: Personal Details: An essay like blog post I've written based on my considerations during a recent reading of The Hobbit. Does the formatting look okay? Does the flow of ideas make sense? [Essay]
Author: Redtowrite [Jun 14, 2020] Genre(s): Cultural :: History :: Political Details: Just wrote this poem and would love an opinion. Are there too many stanzas? Does the title make sense? Thanks for giving it a look. Stay safe and creative. 1500 gift points per review.Kat [Poetry]
Author: John Yossarian [Jun 13, 2020] Genre(s): Drama :: Emotional :: Dark Details: A little flash fiction <1000 words.What do you think? [Fiction]
Author: Sammy [Jun 11, 2020] Genre(s): Philosophy :: None :: None Details: Feel free to come and have a look at this piece and tell me what you think of it. [Monologue]
Author: chicochica [Jun 10, 2020] Genre(s): Personal :: Gay/Lesbian :: Romance/Love Details: This is a poem I wrote some eight years ago for my creative writing class in college. I've since edited it and am hoping to get some feedback on it. The ending was the issue, mostly, but I'm also concerned about imagery. Thank you so much! [Poetry]
Author: Ari Lox [Jun 9, 2020] Genre(s): Scientific :: Psychology :: Relationship Details: A nicknames can led to unexpected actions. [Fiction]
Author: writerchuck [Jun 9, 2020] Genre(s): Cultural :: Community :: Political Details: What it is like to be locked in because of the virus and freed for a short time with no place to go. Ten days so far of riots. Our state still recovering. [Poetry]
Author: Redtowrite [Jun 8, 2020] Genre(s): Biographical :: Emotional :: Relationship Details: I just edited this poem and would like some feedback please. Thanks so much. [Poetry]
Author: jonnigrl1 [Jun 7, 2020] Genre(s): Dark :: Dark :: Dark Details: I would appreciate an honest review of my work. Thank you. [Fiction]
Author: Brae [Jun 6, 2020] Genre(s): Emotional :: Experience :: Nature Details: It's been a while since I've written any poetry, so feedback on this new piece is appreciated! I've been feeling reflective lately, and a lot of good childhood memories are resurfacing. This poem explores themes of nature, domesticity, and spirituality. [Poetry]
Author: jonnigrl1 [Jun 6, 2020] Genre(s): Death :: Dark :: Drama Details: I would like to have my static item Death's World reviewed in an honest and hopefully timely fashion. Thank you [Fiction]
Author: John Yossarian [Jun 5, 2020] Genre(s): Crime/Gangster :: Drama :: Other Details: Looking for reviews on anything...grammar, plot, etc. [Fiction]
Author: Robert Edward Baker  [Jun 5, 2020] Genre(s): Fanfiction :: Fantasy :: Action/Adventure Details: Hello! I have recently returned to WDC after a long absence. I'd love to hear what you think about my story. It is a fanfiction piece written for the current round of Journey Through Genres. It's set in the Twilight universe and features Leah Clearwater. [Short Story]
Author: Joyous [Jun 3, 2020] Genre(s): Inspirational :: Action/Adventure :: Contest Details: I wrote this in high school, and am hoping to use the same story as a personal essay for a college application. If I could please get some help or ideas on how to improve in voice and maturity, it would be greatly appreciated. Thank you in advance! [Essay]
Author: Wrath.of.Khan [Jun 2, 2020] Genre(s): Young Adult :: Sports :: Friendship Details: A homage to high school. Please review! GP included. [Short Story]
Author: A E Willcox  [May 31, 2020] Genre(s): Fantasy :: Mythology :: Contest Entry Details: Comments of all sorts welcome. [Short Story]
Author: MatildaRose [May 31, 2020] Genre(s): Educational :: None :: None Details: We stand with you. [Poetry]
Author: Ezekiel Stephens [May 30, 2020] Genre(s): Nature :: Inspirational :: Experience Details: Please review my short poem. I am new to poetry and would really appreciate detailed and critical reviews helping me perfect my style. Personally, I really like this poem - so my own critique concerning it is deeply flawed. [Poetry]
Author: Ezekiel Stephens [May 30, 2020] Genre(s): Death :: Writing :: Drama Details: Please review my short story. Genre: Fictional realism. Topic: WritingThanks! [Short Story]
Author: Lori J [May 29, 2020] Genre(s): Sci-fi :: Young Adult :: Drama Details: This is the beginning of my si-fi. Jaz, in my portfolio, is the prologue to my story and gives a brief look at the beginning of the planet. Laresn is the story of a girl that has grown up on Celem and wants to leave. Thank you for your honest review. [Column]
Author: betsie [May 28, 2020] Genre(s): Fantasy :: Young Adult :: None Details: GOLIAD, EARTH’S HIDDEN REALM BOOK 1by Betsie Rated: E · Fiction · Fantasy · #2222976 Details: Just about every realm has some mysterious magical accident in its history. I Genres: Fantasy, Young Adult Access: No Restrictions [Fiction]
Author: George Adams [May 27, 2020] Genre(s): Thriller/Suspense :: Action/Adventure :: History Details: If you love suspense, and historical fiction, you will enjoy. It’s part of a draft novel that takes place during the final days of the American Revolution. Warning: draft! Expect to find errors / craft issues. Critique setting, dialogue, characters. [Chapter]
Author: M J Lewis [May 26, 2020] Genre(s): Fantasy :: Other :: Other Details: I am editing a book I have already submitted and been offered a publishing contract. this is the revised prologue. If anyone would like to review book 1 as a work in progress please contact me and I will send it too you direct. [Novel]
Author: willy [May 25, 2020] Genre(s): Death :: Experience :: Other Details: Any suggestions for a better title and other improvements would be most welcomed [Poetry]
Author: Aussie1 [May 25, 2020] Genre(s): Other :: Military :: Other Details: Looking for honest review. [Fiction]
Author: MatildaRose [May 24, 2020] Genre(s): Dark :: Crime/Gangster :: None Details: Let me know what you think :) [Poetry]
Author: kjo just groovin' [May 23, 2020] Genre(s): Travel :: Tribute :: Experience Details: Two weeks ago I wrote this poem. It is the first poem I've written in over 6 years! Today, I edited it a lot and would appreciate any feedback! A Review for a Review! Thank You [Poetry]
Author: kjo just groovin' [May 23, 2020] Genre(s): Drama :: Family :: Friendship Details: After being absent for a few years, I finally did a thorough edit of this short story. Feedback would be Amazing! Review for Review-that's my style. [Short Story]
Author: Peter Stafford [May 20, 2020] Genre(s): Animal :: None :: None Details: Someone has asked me to write this for them so I would like to make it as good as possible. Please feel free to tear apart and let me know what you think. [Poetry]
Author: Becca Winchester [May 20, 2020] Genre(s): Drama :: Family :: Detective Details: Looking for honest opinions [Fiction]
Author: chantelle [May 19, 2020] Genre(s): Other :: Other :: Other Details: I need to know everything wrong with this. Please. I'm dying. [Fiction]
Author: A E Willcox [May 16, 2020] Genre(s): Fantasy :: Sci-fi :: Other Details: I'd love some feedback on my two bar scenes. Thank you. [Fiction]
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