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Author: IreneNotAdler  [Jan 22, 2020] Genre(s): Romance/Love :: Melodrama :: Death Details: I've been simmering this poem for a few weeks and would appreciate some fresh eyes. Which phrases are working and which are dragging the piece, etc. Thank you :) [Draft]
Author: bettyready2write ;-) [Jan 21, 2020] Genre(s): Biographical :: Other :: Other Details: A beginning. I am adding as ideas spark me and hoping it makes sense as well as urge the reader's curiosity... [Poetry]
Author: Joto-Kai  [Jan 19, 2020] Genre(s): Fantasy :: Other :: Other Details: Newly revised to go directly back into the purpose, this poem has stayed with me for decades. I think it finally says what I intended. [Poetry]
Author: lezismore-with 2020 vision [Jan 18, 2020] Genre(s): Drama :: Family :: Tragedy Details: This is the second instalment of a story I am working on. Any feedback would be appreciated. Prior reading of part one could be of an advantage but not vital. [Short Story]
Author: Kirby Ray [Jan 18, 2020] Genre(s): Young Adult :: Fantasy :: Sci-fi Details: It's finally here--the next chapter in my YA novella! This is the penultimate chapter before the big blowout, and I'd love to know what you all think. I wanted to make an homage to the TV I grew up with--I hope I nailed it for you! [Chapter]
Author: Jolanh  [Jan 18, 2020] Genre(s): Romance/Love :: Action/Adventure :: Other Details: Check it out let me know what you think [Fiction]
Author: Cat Carroll [Jan 18, 2020] Genre(s): Environment :: Emotional :: Fantasy Details: Hello! This is an environmental short story, which defends nature and children with a touch of mystery and darkness. I hope to give it for free on my Web site, so any comment or feedback is highly welcomed! I also hope you enjoy it. Thank you! [Short Story]
Author: Robert Rene [Jan 18, 2020] Genre(s): Relationship :: Friendship :: Other Details: I would love some feedback on this piece. It would aid greatly in my self development. [Poetry]
Author: Ruff-urns [Jan 17, 2020] Genre(s): Mystery :: Romance/Love :: None Details: Your feedback would be greatly appreciated [Chapter]
Author: Ruff-urns [Jan 17, 2020] Genre(s): Mystery :: Emotional :: Romance/Love Details: I'd love an honest feedback. Does it keep your attention? How is the grammar flow? [Chapter]
Author: safire_diaz [Jan 17, 2020] Genre(s): Crime/Gangster :: Occult :: Detective Details: I would like a honest and detailed critique of my noir story (up to three paragraphs is fine). [Other]
Author: thesuperpapagai [Jan 15, 2020] Genre(s): Action/Adventure :: Comedy :: Fantasy Details: Would like to know what your emotions are reading this and whether it serves as a good TV Pilot. [Script/Play]
Author: Jolanh [Jan 11, 2020] Genre(s): Romance/Love :: Supernatural :: Action/Adventure Details: Take a look could be fun [Fiction]
Author: Julian Lee [Jan 11, 2020] Genre(s): Mystery :: Drama :: Paranormal Details: all honest, constructive critiques appreciated [Fiction]
Author: S.z.kamoonpuri [Jan 8, 2020] Genre(s): Tribute :: Death :: Scientific Details: 2209615 [Poetry]
Author: Blimprider [Jan 5, 2020] Genre(s): Crime/Gangster :: Dark :: Supernatural Details: My first attempt at writing from prompts, and the first time I've pantsed a story in decades. Wondering if anyone has any opinions, and also knows of any contests where I might test-fly it. Thanks, and I'll reward up to 1000 GP for useful commentary. [Short Story]
Author: Slam [Jan 4, 2020] Genre(s): Legal :: None :: None Details: Would appreciate a review of this. Written after a hiatus, I want to see if I've gotten rusty. This one's about a faux trial in an Irish pub, I had a lot of fun writing it. [Short Story]
Author: willy [Jan 2, 2020] Genre(s): Spiritual :: Other :: Other Details: I like to share this Buddhist meditation at the start of this year, I will recite this every day of 2020. [Prose]
Author: Mick 7 [Dec 31, 2019] Genre(s): Biographical :: Experience :: Emotional Details: I have been writing a biographical trilogy, this is the second part and could really use honest critique and positive input, THANKS [Short Story]
Author: Brian 2020 Focus  [Dec 30, 2019] Genre(s): Children's :: Family :: Spiritual Details: Subtle attempt at underlying themes and metaphors about boy who struggles with peers and where to place his love. None of WDC judges seem clued in. Not sure they actually read, but excerpted a few lines in attempt to show they gave consideration. Anyone? [Fiction]
Author: Wrath.of.Khan [Dec 28, 2019] Genre(s): Thriller/Suspense :: Dark :: Horror/Scary Details: Please review. Horror story. Thanks [Short Story]
Author: lezismore-with 2020 vision [Dec 27, 2019] Genre(s): Drama :: Family :: Tragedy Details: This is the start to a new story I am working on at present. Any feedback would be appreciated. [Short Story]
Author: John Yossarian [Dec 24, 2019] Genre(s): Crime/Gangster :: Action/Adventure :: Sci-fi Details: A new take on an old story.ALL reviews MUCH welcomed! [Fiction]
Author: Joto-Kai [Dec 24, 2019] Genre(s): Relationship :: Other :: Other Details: Just a small piece, a relationship problem. If you checked it out before, I have added some resolution. Still in the feeling of it, so lemme know how it hits you. [Prose]
Author: Cat Carroll [Dec 23, 2019] Genre(s): Horror/Scary :: Dark :: Death Details: Hello! This is my latest horror short story, though it's more creepy and unsettling than horror per se. Please do tell me what you think of it! Also, what I could improve in the genre and what I do right. Thank you! [Short Story]
Author: Somik Bandopadhyay [Dec 21, 2019] Genre(s): Emotional :: Writing :: None Details: My favourite writer returns again after a very long gap. [Poetry]
Author: Amelia Janet  [Dec 19, 2019] Genre(s): Sci-fi :: Crime/Gangster :: Thriller/Suspense Details: Hey! This is for a friend, this is NOT my story. I'm just sharing it with the general public. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated! I hope ya'll enjoy it! ~Amelia [Fiction]
Author: C.N. Greer [Dec 17, 2019] Genre(s): Young Adult :: Fantasy :: Mythology Details: This is the first chapter of the novel I've been writing (and rewriting) for ages. It's a YA fantasy and I'm hoping it's not entirely horrible. Any feedback is appreciated! [Novel]
Author: Hamburger Helper [Dec 17, 2019] Genre(s): Sci-fi :: Horror/Scary :: Other Details: A short story written about a week ago as hypothetical of sorts. Severed feet are washing up on the shores of Puget Sound. This story answers the why in a fantastical if not quite authentic fashion. [Short Story]
Author: Istvan Janos [Dec 15, 2019] Genre(s): Fantasy :: News :: Spiritual Details: This is my novel so far. I have more written but I need to type it up before I can post it here. Anyways, I am looking for someone to critique this and tell me what's good about it and what I should change. I hope you enjoy it. [Chapter]
Author: Istvan Janos [Dec 15, 2019] Genre(s): Sports :: Psychology :: Fantasy Details: I am looking for someone to critique this piece of work because I want to use it in my novel. I hope you like it. [Chapter]
Author: MatildaRose [Dec 15, 2019] Genre(s): Death :: Dark :: None Details: Let me know what you think :) [Poetry]
Author: MatildaRose [Dec 15, 2019] Genre(s): Emotional :: Dark :: Relationship Details: Please let me know what you think, similar pieces on my page :) [Poetry]
Author: SS-Diamond Dust! [Dec 15, 2019] Genre(s): Contest Entry :: Horror/Scary :: Dark Details: I have never written a children's story before, and I want to know if this is any good. Please be honest in your reviews, I want to improve this story! [Short Story]
Author: Hamburger Helper [Dec 13, 2019] Genre(s): Death :: Drama :: Emotional Details: So, I used to write fairly extensively when I was in my early twenties. Life got in the way and it's been a good ten years or so since I've worked on anything. This narrative has been eating away for quite some time. Would love any feedback! [Prose]
Author: willy [Dec 13, 2019] Genre(s): Death :: Romance/Love :: Other Details: I came across this item and I would like you comments. I think the title could use a little work. [Short Story]
Author: Sorji is at it again!  [Dec 12, 2019] Genre(s): Contest Entry :: Holiday :: Emotional Details: This is a contest entry for the 12/2019 Short Shots contest. Any feedback I can get would be greatly appreciated. [Short Story]
Author: kzn [Dec 4, 2019] Genre(s): Action/Adventure :: Romance/Love :: Western Details: Please Review (1000 Gp's per review ) [Draft]
Author: Somik Bandopadhyay [Dec 3, 2019] Genre(s): Nature :: Environment :: Emotional Details: A Tanka for welcoming the Winter season. [Poetry]
Author: Bhaskar [Dec 2, 2019] Genre(s): Nature :: Spiritual :: Action/Adventure Details: Looking for a review for this piece of Nature/Travel poetry. [Poetry]
Author: Kirby Ray [Dec 1, 2019] Genre(s): Young Adult :: Fantasy :: Sci-fi Details: This is the newest chapter in my Y/A serial. It's setting up for the climax in the next two chapters, but still has plenty of character. How did I do? Let me know what you think, and if you haven't, check out the other chapters in my portfolio! [Chapter]
Author: KD Miller  [Nov 29, 2019] Genre(s): Dark :: Drama :: Mystery Details: Chapter one of my latest book. I'm looking for spelling, grammar, punctuation mistakes. Does the story draw you in? All literary agents say the first three chapters must draw the reader in. [Chapter]
Author: BIG BAD WOLF Is Merry!  [Nov 28, 2019] Genre(s): Food/Cooking :: Holiday :: Spiritual Details: Since today is Turkey Day, might as well share this. [Poetry]
Author: Lee Vance [Nov 27, 2019] Genre(s): Entertainment :: Religious :: Other Details: Please review this for clarity and flow. Specifically, I want to make sure my points are coming across and whether or not it's consistent. Grammar and structure input is of course always appreciated. Will offer points and a review in return. [Essay]
Author: SL Davis [Nov 26, 2019] Genre(s): Family :: Death :: Personal Details: This poem for the most part rhymes but has no set meter. It was written about my Dad's old tractor and how it sat after he passed away. I tried to imagine what it would be like if the tractor had memories, feelings, and emotions. [Poetry]
Author: Sorji is at it again! [Nov 25, 2019] Genre(s): Contest Entry :: Drama :: Family Details: This is a contest entry for the Quotation Inspiration contest this month. I would really appreciate some feedback on it. Thanks! [Short Story]
Author: cheshire [Nov 24, 2019] Genre(s): Inspirational :: Spiritual :: Drama Details: I wrote this while listening to music. I think I did a fair job. [Poetry]
Author: RobPeters39 [Nov 21, 2019] Genre(s): Romance/Love :: None :: None Details: Please review for content, style, grammar, voice, any strengths or weaknesses in characters [Draft]
Author: free writer [Nov 21, 2019] Genre(s): Tragedy :: Transportation :: Other Details: Hey! This is actually an edited version of a story I posted a while ago. Now that it has gone through one phase of editing, I would like to see other improvements it may need. Please give your honest opinions about this story! [Short Story]
Author: Roseille ♥  [Nov 21, 2019] Genre(s): Fantasy :: Dark :: Drama Details: I'd love honest feedback on this short story—written for a prompt that asked for an antihero. My hope is that the protagonist's motives are clear and understandable (and, if I'm lucky, even evoke a shred of sympathy), even if his methods are unsavory. [Short Story]
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