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Author: K5Rakitan  [May 23, 2019] Genre(s): Fanfiction :: Romance/Love :: Relationship Details: This is Yu-Gi-Oh! fan fiction, so if you're at least somewhat familiar with the show, then great. My story deals with adult topics, but graphic details are kept to a minimum. [Fiction]
Author: J. Robert Kane  [May 22, 2019] Genre(s): Thriller/Suspense :: Mystery :: Psychology Details: I could use some feedback on this first chapter of my new project. Thanks in advance! [Short Story]
Author: sielie [May 22, 2019] Genre(s): Drama :: None :: None Details: Would like specific critique on my story, please. Thanks. [Fiction]
Author: Sorji  [May 21, 2019] Genre(s): Contest Entry :: Other :: Other Details: This is a contest entry that I am working on for What a Character, the 24 hours leading up to a new life or something like that. I am still a little over on words, but I would appreciate some reads so that I can tweak it while I trim. Thanks in advance! [Fiction]
Author: willy [May 20, 2019] Genre(s): Drama :: Inspirational :: Other Details: I read through this item again, correcting the odd error, and think it's worthy of your comments. An angry man is transformed by a photograph of his mother and thus begins a miracle in this small Welsh housing estate. [Fiction]
Author: anxious geek - weird poet  [May 18, 2019] Genre(s): Experience :: How-To/Advice :: Other Details: I've been writing poetry for twenty years and learnt some stuff. Seemed appropriate for my birthday month. [Article]
Author: Wrath.of.Khan [May 17, 2019] Genre(s): Sci-fi :: Action/Adventure :: Mystery Details: Please lmk if I am on right track with this story. What works, what needs polishing. Do the characters make you care about them? Does the twist work, or is it too obvious? Thank you. GP autorewarded [Short Story]
Author: Wrath.of.Khan [May 17, 2019] Genre(s): Young Adult :: Sports :: Friendship Details: Please review. In honor of schools closing for the summer. Coming of age type story revolving around high school track. Thanks. GP auto reward [Short Story]
Author: Joe Nelson [May 17, 2019] Genre(s): Dark :: Fantasy :: Action/Adventure Details: Hello. This is the start of a dark fantasy story I'm working on and would greatly appreciate some feedback. It's around 2000 words so far [Novel]
Author: John Yossarian [May 13, 2019] Genre(s): Sci-fi :: Horror/Scary :: Gay/Lesbian Details: 1000 GPs and all reviews welcome, though grammar are particularly appreciated. [Short Story]
Author: Kathy [May 13, 2019] Genre(s): Emotional :: Parenting :: Women's Details: This is a 300 word flash fiction that I'd like to expand to a short story. Any suggestions? TIA [Short Story]
Author: Kathy [May 13, 2019] Genre(s): Inspirational :: Other :: Other Details: This is a 300 word flash fiction that I'd like to expand to a short story. Any suggestions? TIA [Short Story]
Author: MatildaRose [May 12, 2019] Genre(s): Death :: Emotional :: Parenting Details: Would love to hear all opinions! [Poetry]
Author: Whitemorn [May 12, 2019] Genre(s): Activity :: Experience :: Nature Details: A short free verse poem about dreaming. GP's offered. [Poetry]
Author: Robert Edward Baker  [May 8, 2019] Genre(s): Sci-fi :: Relationship :: Family Details: I've just completed this sci-fi story for the What A Character contest. I'd love to hear if it works for you and especially would like to hear about how I can improve it. Thank you! :) [Short Story]
Author: Samberine Everose  [May 7, 2019] Genre(s): Inspirational :: Parenting :: Family Details: Can I ask a review for my item, a constructive review will be very much appreciated.GPs will be given after. Thank you. [Poetry]
Author: Rebecca Lynne [May 5, 2019] Genre(s): Fantasy :: Young Adult :: Mythology Details: Looking for thoughts: if the mood/tone works, character development, the impression you get, any grammar mistakes, maybe if word choice could be stronger, etc. Anything really, just impressions you get/improvements you think would make it better. [Short Story]
Author: sfttarget  [May 5, 2019] Genre(s): Parenting :: Animal :: Children's Details: Looking for an honest review& how I can tweak or clean up the writing. I am considering sending it in to a fishing or sporting magazine and also will be placing it in my daughters diary which I have been keeping since she has been a baby. Thanks! sft.. [Short Story]
Author: sfttarget [May 5, 2019] Genre(s): Nature :: Parenting :: Self Help Details: I am looking for honest feedback/critique on the style, grammar and word usage. I am wondering if this might be possible to enter into a magazine such as Field and Stream or another publication. All reviews appreciated. [Short Story]
Author: noodles [May 3, 2019] Genre(s): Fantasy :: Dark :: Emotional Details: Time to tango please review [Short Story]
Author: Dean Jolly [Apr 29, 2019] Genre(s): Philosophy :: Other :: Other Details: All reviews and constructive criticism welcome :)[Poetry]
Author: Jules [Apr 28, 2019] Genre(s): Comedy :: Mythology :: Other Details: Thoughts? Reactions? [Fiction]
Author: J.M. Arlen [Apr 27, 2019] Genre(s): Fantasy :: Action/Adventure :: Other Details: Tell me if you feel that the prologue is unnecessary, or detracts from your enjoyment. If not, what about the rest? :) Thanks Writers! [Chapter]
Author: Sorji [Apr 25, 2019] Genre(s): Sci-fi :: Technology :: Other Details: This is my entry for the Journey Through the Genres contest this month. It's scifi (ish), and I have been having trouble getting rates and reviews for it. Any kind of feedback I can get would be great. Scifi is not really my strong suit. [Fiction]
Author: § Roseille ♥  [Apr 24, 2019] Genre(s): Sci-fi :: Drama :: Thriller/Suspense Details: I'd greatly appreciate any thoughts on this story about a quiet, desperate bid for freedom. [Short Story]
Author: trailerpark bodhisattva  [Apr 23, 2019] Genre(s): Contest Entry :: Folklore :: Mythology Details: For ShortShots contest- I think I screwed up the submission, so don't think they received it. The image inspired me to write a fairy tale! Since I'd never even thought about attempting to write a fairy tale, I'm curious to hear what y'all think... [Fiction]
Author: ZuluMomma14 [Apr 21, 2019] Genre(s): Adult :: Death :: Other Details: Trying something new and looking for input before editing it myself. Looking for initial thoughts as well as input on how it can be improved, I mostly want to know what it invokes in the reader. Thank you! [Poetry]
Author: Christianna [Apr 18, 2019] Genre(s): Emotional :: Death :: Other Details: I wrote this several months ago and would like honest reviews. This poem was very hard to write. It's never easy to say goodbye to a friend or pet after 26 years together. [Poetry]
Author: ChrisDaltro-Chasing Moonbeams [Apr 18, 2019] Genre(s): Romance/Love :: Women's :: Relationship Details: Please review my latest POEM.Thank you. [Poetry]
Author: MysteryBox42 [Apr 18, 2019] Genre(s): History :: Horror/Scary :: Thriller/Suspense Details: Just a really short short that I wrote this morning. Would love any feedback! [Fiction]
Author: Leif the Lucky [Apr 17, 2019] Genre(s): Drama :: History :: Action/Adventure Details: The pilot for a Game of Thrones-y historical drama TV show. Offering more than 2,000 GPs for reviews. Thanks! [Script/Play]
Author: LostGhost: Seeking & Learning  [Apr 12, 2019] Genre(s): Dark :: Family :: Other Details: Looking for what you got from the story or whether or not it is too abstract. It is a different form and type I have experimented with. So any thoughts will be welcome on what worked and what did not. [Short Story]
Author: Red Fork [Apr 11, 2019] Genre(s): Action/Adventure :: Comedy :: Entertainment Details: This is my first story on this site, and I'd appreciate some helpful feedback on how to improve. What am I doing right? What am I doing wrong? How can I improve on what I'm doing wrong? [Short Story]
Author: Cristina Rosewood [Apr 10, 2019] Genre(s): Romance/Love :: Drama :: Gay/Lesbian Details: This is my first serial novel and my first gay romance story. It's very out of my comfort zone of writing and I was hoping to get some feedback on it. Any constructive criticism is welcome since I want to improve. Review me and I'll review you as well. [Serial]
Author: Vexa Grimwoe [Apr 9, 2019] Genre(s): Comedy :: Ghost :: Other Details: I'd like someone to review this sample of work I wrote. It's an idea I had for a story one day and I'd like some honest feedback on it. It's just a sample and isn't much. [Sample]
Author: Abba Bruno [Apr 8, 2019] Genre(s): Educational :: Cultural :: Religious Details: This is a presentation on the Christian prayer practice of Lectio Divina, which is a way to prayerfully read Bible passages. I am loooking for feedback on content and how well the presentation is structured and how it flows. [Article]
Author: Tyler of Nexus [Apr 7, 2019] Genre(s): Horror/Scary :: Fantasy :: Supernatural Details: 20,000 word horror novella, not for everyone, but it is my first long story, and is being considered for inclusion in a bimonthly mag, so I'd appreciate (with GP) anyone who could point out flaws so I don't fall on my face right out of the gate! [Novella]
Author: Lady Holly [Apr 7, 2019] Genre(s): Young Adult :: Comedy :: Romance/Love Details: Hi all, really want to publish a book myself one day. This is a first chapter, its young adult comedy/romance. Any hints, tips, comments, negative feedback - it's all really welcome and would be a massive help to get me on track. Many thanks in advance! [Novella]
Author: Spencer James [Apr 2, 2019] Genre(s): Nature :: None :: None Details: These are random thoughts that went through my head while standing on a beach in Florida. Is it meaningful only to me, or is there something for everyone here? Share your thoughts. [Poetry]
Author: Spencer James [Apr 2, 2019] Genre(s): None :: None :: None Details: Just another lonely morning... thoughts? [Poetry]
Author: ZuluMomma14 [Apr 1, 2019] Genre(s): Death :: Family :: Other Details: I’m looking to see how I may improve this piece, or if it’s to follow. Thank you! [Poetry]
Author: ~CAR~ [Mar 29, 2019] Genre(s): Children's :: None :: None Details: I am writing a book that will be read to and used in an elementary math class. Please help me be sure that the story makes sense and that the grammar is on point. The book will be self published soon. Thank you!! [Fiction]
Author: Davey Charles [Mar 28, 2019] Genre(s): Emotional :: Relationship :: Experience Details: Please review, i'm still new here, so i'm not sure if this is the right place/rating etc but I value your feedback. [Fiction]
Author: milkwalrus [Mar 26, 2019] Genre(s): Friendship :: None :: None Details: A narrative essay for a recent Common Test.Topic: Describe a friend who means a great deal to you. Why is he or she so important? [Essay]
Author: Hektor Thillet [Mar 25, 2019] Genre(s): Children's :: Animal :: Folklore Details: A story about a tiny krill and a big whale in the middle of the wide blue ocean. [Short Story] [Short Story]
Author: Joe Nelson [Mar 23, 2019] Genre(s): Dark :: Fantasy :: Steampunk Details: Elfsong is the start of a dark fantasy novel I've been working on and I would greatly appreciate any feedback. It is the story of an elf who journeys to a dark city ruled by man. Please review. [Novel]
Author: Sobriquet  [Mar 21, 2019] Genre(s): Philosophy :: Spiritual :: Experience Details: This poem is a bit older, but is still in need of some feedback. Thank you. [Poetry]
Author: Sir Zesto [Mar 21, 2019] Genre(s): Emotional :: Tragedy :: Other Details: This is a what I call a multiverse acrostic. Each line is begun by a letter relating to the topic (in this case, fear). Please give me any CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. I am always looking to grow as a writer.~Sir Zesto [Poetry]
Author: Samberine Everose [Mar 21, 2019] Genre(s): Inspirational :: Spiritual :: Nature Details: Constructive Review is very much appreciated.Gps will be sent for every review. Thank you. [Poetry]
Author: Jay L [Mar 20, 2019] Genre(s): Emotional :: Inspirational :: Spiritual Details: Please provide an honest review of my newest poem. [Poetry]
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