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Review of Roses are Red  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Zukorocks30, after reading your poem, I could not pass by without comment.

I often ponder things like this myself. Silly saying we have and like your nursery rhyme, Roses are Red.

Very funny, I enjoyed the read.

Best wishes. Sanita
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Review of My last memories  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, this is beautiful and shows we must never give up.

Well done.

Best wishes. sanita
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Review of "My Judge?"  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello MIck, something else of yours I like. I love the message this poem gives. People do judge without even considering they may be less than perfect themselves.

Lovely poem.

Sanita
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Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Dana welcome to WDC. I would have been totally heartbroken at the first fling and probably never spoken to him again!

This is a great read, although I feel it would be better put in to a few short paragraphs.

Keep writing!

Best wishes.Sanita

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Review of Grief is  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Beachgirl, lovely little poem. So few words can say so much.

Best wishes. Sanita

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Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello, lovely little poem, but I have to disagree, everything is worth a try and if you want it that much, it is also worth fighting for.

Still a lovely poem though.

Best wishes. Sanita
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Review of Tears  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Screen mate, what a beautiful Poem. Write more!

Best wishes. Sanita
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Review by Sanita
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
HI, this is the second of your "New Approach" items .

I think it is very good that you take the time to write these, you never who you may be helping.

Again, you have capital letters where they are not needed, and also I think the lists would read better if separated a little.

Keep writing!

Sanita
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Review of My Sister Sweet  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Ruth, I have just finished reading your little story. Sisters, there is always some kind of rivalry between them.

I thought it very good, I enjoyed the read.

I saw no errors.

Keep writing!

Thank you for sharing.

Best wishes. Sanita

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Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Isaiah, I have just finished reading your advice.

I think it is very good and if it helps young people to be acceoted for what they are, then even better.

You have a few errors, capitals where they do not need to be , it just need a little editing.

Well done, keep writing!

Best wishes, Sanita.

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Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Kristen, welcome to WDC. I have just been reading through your essay.

It reads well, but would read a lot better if paragraphs are separated.

Very good descriptive essay.

I did not see any any errors.

Keep writing.

Best wishes, Sanita.

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Review by Sanita
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Dreadnought, welcome to WDC. I have just finished reading your story.

This sounds the like beginngs of a good book, I really enjoyed it. Look forward to reading more.

I did not see any errors.

Keep writing!

Best wishes.

Sanita

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Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello, this is true, a lot can be learned from older people.

A nice message.

Typo, evry should be every.

Keep writing.

Sanita.

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Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Jo, I have just been reading your poem, "The Inner Thoughts Of A Star."

I liked it, although I am not sure I would describe it as children's, but that is just my opinion.

Nice poem.

Sanita
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Review of The Dare  
Review by Sanita
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello, I just finished reading your story and wow, my heart was in my mouth!

I think all boys and girls do silly things for dares when young, but I bet he never did again.

Crazy, but good story.

I see no errors.

Keep writing, but not for dares!

Best wishes. Sanita

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Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello, welcome to WDC. I think many people will relate to what you have written. It is hard to walk away, but, I always say, when one door closes, another one opens.


Good luck!

Sanita.

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Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello Naomi, I have just been reading your story. There is a very long gap between the two parts. Readers may think there is no more to the story than the first part.

It sounds an interesting story, but then ended quite abruptly. Perhaps there is more?

I am curious to know what she had done that upset him.

Keep writing.

Best wishes. Sanita

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Review of Rid  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, I have just finished reading your story. I thought it was excellent! Imagery was great,you packed so much in to such a short story.

Keep writing, and if you have time check out "Invalid Item"  I would love to see an entry from you.

Best wishes. Sanita
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Review of Piggy  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Alexander, I am not quite sure what "Playing people off against each other," means, but I am guessing by your clever poem, it is something to with lying to one and going off to lie to other.

I thought the message your poem gives is really good. No matter how much the piggy washes he will not remove the dirt.

Great poem, cleverly done.

Best wishes. Sanita
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Review of I Promise  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello Melody, I just found your poem on the Newbies listings.

Lovely promises to your daughter.

The only thing is, it would read a lot better if you use the correct words rather than U and Ur. Also, I, should always be a capital.

Keep writing.

Best wishes. Sanita

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Review of Frostbite  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello welcome to WDC, I have just read your poem and thought I would comment.

I like the way you have taken the lines and used them in different places in each verse.


Lovely poem.

Best wishes. Sanita
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Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Felicite, This is very sad indeed, I do feel for you, I cannot imagine what you must be going through.

As for the funeral research, could you try to email and explain the internet is not showing your address? But you may have already done that.

I hope you manage to sort it out, things must be hard enough without that.

Best wishes, Sanita
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Review of will it...  
Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (2.0)
Hello, I did not really understand this piece.

But it was difficult to read as there are mistakes also there is no such word as dat you might mean that.

Perhaps if you correct the mistakes it will read better.

Keep writing.

Sanita
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Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello,welcome to WDC. I think any love is free from whoever wants to give it.


Write on!

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Review by Sanita
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, Emiliyla, Wow, this is amazing! I absolutely loved it. I think it so good, it should be published.

A fabulous children's story.

I could see no errors.

Keep writing!

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