Dear girl, I can't believe I have never reviewed this page. You have so much wonderful information for the Rising Star's and the complete program which is so important to all of us at Writing.com.
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Thank you so much for all that you do and give our community, we are indeed blessed to have your star shining brightest!
The Phoenix will never be the same again! Your words like pure power and strength. I love the emotional charge of your words and the very heat that comes from them. We are indeed stronger from pain! I love this and admire your talent! Thanks so much for sharing this awe inspiring poem.
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Well I don't think this is just about columbine. I see this having such a wider audience of crime. I can see years of pain in your passage. The injustice of life not lived to it's fullest and when we loose those we love to crime. It is a another wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing your talent.
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Well if this isn't like the whole holy story, I don't know what is!!! What a timely read and wow this is pure beauty anyway you look at it or think of the deep true and honest meaning here. I am so glad this poem has a ribbon! Very well deserved!
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Well if I didn't want to see the ocean before, I sure do now! The imagery of words swirling like seafoam is wonderful. The emotions locked out of reach and yet so visual. You do a great job with the flow of this poem. I can offer no suggestions on improvement. Thanks for sharing your talent.
So this is a wonderful, descriptive and enduring piece of writing. I did find two typos...you have new for knew and I think the other was worried when it should be worked..he is getting the cork out.
Dear Ken, it is like you know exactly what I need to read. Your words capture emotions that my poetric heart dreams about. This is very thought provoking and filled with visions. I love the relationship with Scooter and it represents what kind of man and relationship he had with Carolyn.
Thank you so much for asking me to share your work!! I love it!! Good luck in the contest. I am sure you will do well!
I love the summer night! I can hear the crickets in the background as I enjoy the cooling breeze and the nature connection of earth and peace of mind. You have wrote a beautiful collecion to enjoy year after year and bug free!!
I don't know what to think about this poem, it is very uncomfortable to read. It is very personal. I mean no one in there right mind wants to be in love with two, when one should do. However, this is anything but a perfect world, now is it. I can see the refrence to the perfect pair and everything else just dosen't come close. I wonder why?
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When the heart wants the heart calls! I liked the flow of this and found the message one of sadness and loss. Yes, that is very clear in your writing. I think you should have a comma in your last line, without you, my dear...but just my suggestion. It's your poem. You write it the way you want. I know poetry is very subjective and personal.
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Wouldn't we all like to know? I mean can we really ever understand when the bottom drops out? The imagery of the rose and the thorns was very intense and well done. I like that, not that your are hurt, but I get it. One of the very telling lines about your relationship is this line...As I feared you have attracted another.
Okay so you made me smile, but you also made me say GROSS! I am not so sure I would call this good poetry, but you get your point across. And the words are filled with images...some not so pretty. Humor comes in all shapes. Thanks for sharing and write on!
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I am so glad that Shops like this are a new item on Writing.com. It really highlights your talent. I love my new signature and I know I will be back many times to order more and just look at all your pretty designs! You are by far one of my favorite artist on this site! Hugs and keep sharing your talent!!
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Tell me how do you get a ribbon on your folder but no reviews? Hum...Are you working your magic? Can I have some? I know your a talented poet and all and this entire folder and really for the mater all your folders are making me sick with Jealousy! I have to keep reading your words, hoping your inspiration will rub off on me! Jeez, so far...no such LUCK!
You mean you couldn't find an easier word to rhyme with silhouette? Holy cow you really push yourself to create worlds with your images and I am not a huge fan of this form, you still make it sing with your words. I love the no regrets..the best part of ending the day!
Write on my dear poet friend!
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I found this to be a very important and easy to read and understand article. I find that so many want to get into publishing, but you have to be able to market what you write and state why it is important. I think you did a great job! Thanks so much for sharing your journey to printing. Keep writing!!
So it is true, when you blow on the head...all your wishes will come true??? What a talented writer you are, you even make spring allergies look good! I was excepting a different kind of yellow flower! Your so clever!! Nice picture and no suggestions for improvement, I think it is perfect...even if you do have a red nose!
Happy Spring!!
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I have heard and seen the signs around writing.com about the Adopt-A-Newbie, but I have never took the time to really read what it is about and how it works. You have a great article here, it is very easy to understand and it's such a wonderful idea to be a mentor. I try but I know I could be doing more. Thank you so much for inspiring community!!
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So let me guess you are hungry for words? I love that you have mixed your need for words with your need to live. I get the sense that you are surrounded by words, but you will never find the right amount to fill your need. It is a very interesting poem. The image speaks volumes!! Thank you so much for sharing your talent!
Okay, to answer your question, No...I could never get tired of you! Or your awesome writing. I have to say this one was very interesting. I would hate to think of this actually happening. I am going to offer just a small amount of advice, just things that might help, for one thing Oliver needs to be younger then 10. At age 10 getting a kid to snuggle with mom is not so believeable. At age 7. You bet! I also spotted something, I have no idea if it is wrong, but the period looked out of place in the quote of Oliver wanted to hear the happy story. I am no editor so I have no idea, but if I spotted it, maybe it means something. LOL I am so honored you would share this with me. I love your writing. It is clear, it is filled with visions and even a cold one is better then nothing. So write on my dear and talented friend!
I had to come back for some more flash fiction! Okay this is funny and just a little too realistic for fiction! I mean you have to know that many can relate to the tales of a drunken fool, but you did get me with the beaver! Too funny! Oh the pain of the morning after, he must be a real professional if Jack is his headache medicine.
Clever and engaging! Write on!
Oh man I need this picture! I so have a poem about me crushing my printer with a hammer! This is just too perfect for words...So really it stayed outside for over a week? Your kidding? Now that is a waste of good proptery! Nice photo! You know it is a priceless piece. It needs no Words!!
If only's are the stuff that great novels are all about. You have to leave the question there, you need to figure out what is going to happen. How life is all about choices and directions. This is a great start to the contest and you have many area's that you can develop this story. Great job and write ON!
Well you sure paint a pretty dramatic picture of the beatin heart. I am not so sure this is really about death as much as it is about life and what we give to others. Can one really make another's heart stop beating? Only with a knife? But you cut this with words. Very dramatic. I like that! I can offer no suggestions on improvement. Keep writing and telling your story.
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What a clever poem! Great form and a very true and funny subject matter. I laughed as it is so true. I have this problem as well. I think I want knowledge, I just don't want to work that hard to get it! Perhaps we are dinosuars after all, but I feel I am more lazy then that! Thank you for a very thought provoking poem.
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In old age, we are asked to review many of our memories. I can see that this is very meloncoly. Do we ever really get to go back to where we come from? We are never as young as we want to be. I like the choice of words you use, I can see many things in your images.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Write on!
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