I so need some inspiration and I think I am going to have to dig deep and join this contest. As it is never ending and I have until the end of the month to come up with something! Thanks so much for always giving so much of your time to Writing.com. This is awesome and look for a small donation coming from me soon!
It is my pleasure to give this fun little blog a Helping Heart review. I tell you girl, I am so excited for you. I have been so busy in my own little world that yours was spinning so fast and with such great happenings. I love your valentine gift. What an awesome idea and it sure brings the picture clear that love can be so many wonderful things and when we give our heart, sometimes we are lucky to get some of it back!! Happy Birthday. I hope this is just another fun filled year and you find that sparkling jewel inside the mirror.
Wow you paint a pretty picture and just about right on! There is something so magical about the first time you kiss someone you are really into. It is like opening the best discovery. The greatest gift under the Christmas tree! I really enjoyed this fun read. It brings back awesome memories.
I am not sure who you want to read this. I just have to be very honest here. I am sure you know what proper grammar is. And when you write poetry it should have the words spelled out and you should use spell check for misspelled words like paridice. I am not trying to be mean, but I do hope helpful. You see I know poetry is very subjective. I think what you are trying to say here is beautiful. I just want to enjoy it. I know if you just did a another look over at this you will know what I am talking about and you can fix it up some. You have a very powerful message and I want you to keep writing and sharing that message.
I would really like to give this a higher rating, but I find it offensive the word f*** in poetry. I also think you should start this with a Capt I. I am not a huge person on grammar and I can do without puntuation, but when you have enough imagery and emotion, you don't need to use that word. I know you can come up with something just as intelligent to use and if not more descriptive. I mean you really have a lot of great stuff in this poem. Write on. Also I need to change the rating...It must be higher then a 13+ with that word in it. Keep writing.
Oh I have been a girl like this before, you think your dreams will never come true...but sometimes they do. Maybe you have to wait 20 years and work really hard, but sometimes...Timing and life to notice and wow a dream is born. Never stop dreaming in awe. The stage is closer then you realize!
This is not an easy story to read, but you captured my attention and you held it. I think it so sad, how family can have so much power to hurt and control. I find the most fasinating is how you actually took that anger and let it eat you up. You really do a wonderful job of showing how eating disorders can happen and be so quick to take over a life. I hope now you are the person you want to be and your sister has become the woman she deserves to be.
Thank you for sharing a very personal and remarkable life.
Oh what a wild night in Vegas! I love this story telling flow and how fast a mistake can happen when your drunk and in Vegas! It really is so funny! Great job of creating a wonderful scene. I can see why you have a ribbon. Well deserved!!
Oh girl can we talk!! I love this! I love the power of who you are in these words. I can feel your anger at some point and your determination to be what you are, not what you think you should be. I so believe that we have more power then we give ourself. I love your ending line...It is really all on how you look at it! I hope the answer is somewhere in between. LOL
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It is my pleasure to give you a Showering Acts of Joy review!!
I have to say, I love this story! I could read it a million times. How lucky we all are to have a miracle born for us! You write with such elequant words to decribe the most beautiful moment in time. Thank you for sharing this lovely poem.
Oh boy it is my pleasure to give you a Simply Positive review.
Oh do I have to laugh at your poor image of heat and sweating, I was just thinking okay, so it is a hot summer day...but then the shocker of all it is it APRIL! Well I live in Michgian and we got that small heat wave, not 93, but 73...Which is pretty darn hot for April. I don't know if it really is Global warming or Mother Nature just showing off, but If I lived in the South, I think I would be a little worried!! I hope you don't need to go out too much in the middle of the afternoon! Don't forget your sunblock!
This is a Simply Positive review, and it is! Who doesn't love having a dog around to keep you company and love you on your worst days. "I hope that is enough" is really the icing on the cake of this relationship between pet and man. I can offer you no suggestions on improving or changing this poem, I love the simple tone and voice. It is man's best friend! Write on!
I think I had to muddle my way to the filter box and would you believe I actually had to read this to understand what it is. I quess you can't say they give you blue for knowing everything about the site! This is a very helpful tool and your wrote it out so everyone can understand it. Thank you so much for helping out like that and giving back to everyone here at Writing.com
Write on!
Michelle
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Okay, I am going for the cold water now! Oh man is this sweet, hot exciting and so glorious wrong that fantasy can seem so real and passionate and damn hot hot hot! What starts so calmly in the mind can be so dangerous in the body. You really paint a picture that many can relate too and enjoy. Thank you again for just showing off more than your talent. You really are one of the good guys! Do you have any poems where your not? LOL
When everything falls apart, I have been there and I have felt that feeling that glass was breaking. I like that image you use. I think we all need to say we are sorry and find a better way to get along. Thanks for sharing your talent. Write on!
Your brother sounds just about as awesome as you do! When we look at our siblings with a kindness and a fondness that is so radiant, you can't help but spark some on other's. I am so glad you shared this about your handsome brother. What a gift you must be to each other. Enjoy all the time that you can!!
Oh boy is this a great read. I often wonder what my mind would do to occupy my time. I think I can totally relate to feeling like a caged bird. I get the resemblence. You write with such elequence about a not very happy situation, yet their is hope and wonder in your voice and tone. I love that about you. Thank you so much for sharing this and all your words.
I admire the men and woman in blue! I'm so proud of this county that we have a service like this to protect and serve all people of the United States of America. I really enjoyed your voice in this article. It was firm, realistic and honest. It is so wonderful to honor our heros...They really do so much for humankind. Thank you so much for writing and sharing this important reality!!
What I want to know it why it is taking us so long to learn the lessons? Why can't we control our pollution of the water? It is so sad and I don't know what can be done to fix it. I always pick up trash when I see it. It starts with little stuff like teaching our kids not to toss out so much stuff and recycle. I really enjoyed this story and I can offer no suggestions. I hope it won't remain a myster forever!
Write on!
Michelle
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Thank you for giving me something to really think about. I do see the fairy of the might sword. I don't know if this is about chasing dreams or about writing them down. I did have a small bit of trouble with this line...Something in her stoop rings the end,
I just don't know what that means...It could be me! Thanks for writing and welcome to Writing.com
I love Smilin Joe!! What a real lucky fellow to finally believe that miracles are real, the best part is they come in all shapes and sizes. You know this is a story here! You have the makings of a very interesting story about Joe. Karma rocks!!
Write on and what fun to read in your port again. I am so glad your friend Wyn gifted you these reviews. It was my pleasure to read your poetry again.
Oh I loved kissing the dandelions! They did expand across the lawn and it was so fun to chase them! Now they are not as much fun, but I still smile when I see them fly. I really like this poetry style. I think you do a great job describing the pattern. I am so bad at following rules, but maybe this one I could try! Thanks again for sharing your talent!!
This review is a given as part of a gift from your friend Wyn - missing III
Even a Teacher needs a break! What about MOMS!! LOL The flow of this tells the story of how important the teacher's work is and that so much can wear down a soul. I love that you we get renewed by our friendships and the time we take for ourself. I love this, no suggestions. I enjoyed it.
Well so then what happened? Did you get warmed up? Did you make it to Florida? You can't just lead me on like this...I need to know what happened. You have the start here of something worthwhile...develop it some and see what happens! Write on and Welcome to Writing.com
This is my final review of 5 for your winning bid in the ABA auction.
Oh I am feeling this poem. Last night I went to see the movie the Soloiest. It was so stunning how we percieve mental illness and being different and what we expect of other people. How much we think we should all think a like, but we know we are different. We should all be so happy we are different. It is something to be damn proud of!! Again another stunning poem and I really admire your style and open heart in your writings. Thank you much for sharing it and once I have the name of your friend to share the second half of your winnings, I will send you a friendship merit badge. Thank you so much!!
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