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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
My Impressions of: The little Village

clarity: The title describes the story well.
style: Reads much like a poem.
originality: Unique idea for a story.

Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: This unique story reads much like a children's story or a fairy tale. A nice flow for this short story. Thank you for sharing this interesting tale, it was a good read.

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Joseph
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)

My impressions of the poem: The Energy Survives, This Time.

Clarity: The title fits well with this poem.
Style: Sport's, sportsmanship, entertainment.

My 2 cents is only one opinion: A well written poem for this event. In today's fast pace society sportsmanship for people go many directions. Most people will put more emphasis on making excuses for not winning than offering praise to the winners.

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Joseph

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My Impressions of: A nickel for your thought.

clarity: The title could describe the story better.
style: Realistic, ancient and a bit of Sci-Fie
originality: A unique idea for this story.

Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: A well written story. Great descriptions, good dialog and construction. Benjamin is a strong character for this adventure tale. I like that the story goes from modern day to ancient Mayan with a twist of Sci-fie while leaving hints for unanswered questions about the Mayan people. Nice image's spread out at good locations, for a well constructed adventure with a steady flow. The story moved at a good pace and held this reader's attention well. Thank you for sharing this it was a awesome read.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: Not Just Another Haunted House

Title fits well with the story.
Realistic style.
Unique idea for this story.

This is only one opinion: Well written story with good descriptions. A realistic flow. Held this readers attention well. Thank you for sharing this, I enjoyed reading it.
Write On!
Joseph
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Review of Thankful Wish  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)

My impressions of the poem: Thankful Wish.

Clarity: Title fits poem.
Style: Cinquain 5 line.

My 2 cents is only one opinion: I like this poem. Short and straight to the point. Blessed indeed. If you got that one wish then truly you have more the most people will ever in todays fast paced busy world. Thank you for sharing, this was a good read.


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Review of Silent Night  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)

My impressions of the poem: Silent Night

Clarity: A Nice Title for this poem.
Style: Acrostic poetry.

My 2 cents is only one opinion: Nicely done. Well worded
poem. Held this readers attention well. Nice touch with the color font for the first word. Short but straight to the point. Well done, thank you I enjoyed reading this, it was a good read.

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Review of Hat of Trick  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My Impressions of: Hat of Trick

clarity: Title fits the story well.
style: Short ghost story.
originality: A good idea for a story.

Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: Well written short story.
Good job with descriptions. Holds the readers attention well.
Short but to the point like todays reader likes. Leaves the reader wanting more. An interesting work.

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Joseph
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My Impressions of: Dr Seuss, Bless Your Birth!

clarity: Title fits well, title and poem.
style: Family poetry.
originality: Unique birthday poem for Dr. Seuss.

Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: Well written poem celebrating doctor Seuss's 115th birthday, well done.
This poem flows well. Indeed doctor Seuss was ahead of his time. I like it, thank you.

Joseph
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My Impressions of: The Haunted Classroom

clarity: The title fits well with the story.
style: Scary, realistic.
originality: Nice storyline, a realistic tone.

Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: Well told story. Good descriptions with a great narrative. This story holds the readers attention well. I like the different font styles.
Well told story, thank you this was a good read.

Joseph
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My Impressions of: A Journey to Evergreen

clarity: Title fits the story.
style: Fantasy entertainment.
originality: Happy tone with this story.

Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: Nice story. Good descriptions. Nice narrative. I like Justice, she has a positive attitude. A happy flow keeps the readers interest.
They live happily ever-after, a good children's story.

Joseph
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Review of At Any Time  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
My Impressions of: At Any Time

clarity: Title fits with the story.
style: Personal experience.
originality: Reads like a true story or diary entry.

Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: A nice story. Reads like a true story or even a diary entry. It is a shame how time slips away from us and years and decades ago by. It always does me good to try and get back to my roots, although in this fast-paced society today it is hard to do.

Joseph
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)

My impressions of the poem: Love Won't Overcome- Status Decided

Clarity: the title fits well with the poem
Style: Romance, Relations

My 2 cents is only one opinion: a nice poem. Love is a strong emotion usually running either very hot or terribly cold. Add times the can just be like performing a play as you wait for that right soul to come along.


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
My Impressions of: The Vampire Princess

clarity: The title fits well with this story.
style: Drama vampire living among humans.
originality: Unique idea well written story.


Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: Good story. Good narrative and descriptions. Strong character I like Raluca, I wouldn't want her to bite me though. I like she has been fascinated by humans since childhood. Nice that she started understanding toward the end. Thank you very much I enjoyed this story it had a nice flow.

Joseph

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My Impressions of: Reading and Coloring

clarity: Title is good
style: Children, animal.
originality: Origonal helping animals


Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: Nice childrens characters.
I bet the kids love these animals. Great learning tools to help kids and keep them interested and wanting more. I loved talking animals when I was a kid.
Well done.

Joseph

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Review of Yoda the Hen  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My Impressions of: Yoda the Hen

clarity: A good title for this story.
style: Realistic country farming style.
originality: A unique idea and story.


Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: A realistic story. Well told good narrative good descriptions good characters. Holds the reader's attention well. Nice touch with the recipes at the end. I am glad to see that Joe and Dan made a nice compromise.

Joseph
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Review of Camo  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)

My impressions of the poem: Camo

Clarity: A good title for this poem.
Style: Chameleon of many colors.

My 2 cents is only one opinion: A good poem. A nice consistent flow. I like Callie I know some people who are similar, they can't choose just one. It would be nice to be a chameleon, be able to blend in anywhere, anytime.
Nicely done.


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Review of Son of Dick  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My Impressions of: Son of Dick

clarity: A good title for this story.
style: Realistic, reads like a true story.
originality: Emotional narrative.

My favorite line: Your father never liked him, thought he was a radical leftist communist sympathizer.”


Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: A strong story holds the readers attention well. A bit of mystery leaving the Reader wanting more. Short and to the point the way today's reader likes it. A good read, thank you I enjoyed it.

Joseph


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)

My impressions of the poem: Beyond The Tongues of Men and Angels

Clarity: this title fits the poem.
Style: Free-verse poem inspired from biblical quote

My 2 cents is only one opinion: A deep spiritual poem.
Well worded descriptions of nature and mother earth. A unique approach for this inspirational poem. A tinkling cymbal.


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Joseph

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Review of The Last Mess  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
My Impressions of: The Last Mess

clarity: The title fits well with the story.
style: Realistic
originality: original idea for this story about a wife mourning the loss of her husband.


Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: Well written story about a widow finding ways to morn for her husband while reflecting on events and characters from their lives. Holds this readers attention well. I like the use of italicized font for quotations, makes it easier for the reader. Strong story, real characters and dialogue. Great descriptions. Emotional story.

Joseph

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)

My impressions of the poem: Above the Sky, The Pain Below

Clarity: The Title could better describe the poem
Style: poetry, ghazal

My 2 cents is only one opinion: well written poem attempting to describe and getting old. Well worded, this poem has a unique flow. I like this poem they say getting old is not for wimps this is so true.


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)

My impressions of the poem: Journey Beyond the Horizon

Clarity: This title fits the poem well.
Style: romance love and lost love

My 2 cents is only one opinion: this poem has a nice flow. I guess it is human nature, however it is amazing how much time humans can dwell on romance and lost love. In this line--But fate intervened, you finally left-- it sounds like the author was ready for them to finally leave. Thank you for sharing this it was a good read I enjoyed it.


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)

My impressions of the poem: Much of Muchness

Clarity: the title fits this poem well
Style: political greed human nature

My 2 cents is only one opinion: Awesome poem. So true. This poem has a great flow,
I like the way you used the font color. In today's new two class society I cannot understand
why some people think they need so much money. As your poem says they could really make a difference
in so many lives and the world without even noticing a dent in their wealth.


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My Impressions of: Unknown Icarus: Sept-Oct Collection

clarity: a good poetry collection. Each poems individual title fits well however the main title could be stronger.
style: these poems go well together each of them has a unique flow
originality: unique idea to put your poetry in monthly collections

My favorite lines: Do not feed the she-demon for she will learn to love,
Beware the power that lies within her core.
With each morsel you offer, her hunger grows,


Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: Great work. Strong poems, they seem to have a similar flow. They flow well together.
Reads a bit like a warning label:) I really like the last lines also, tread lightly.

Joseph

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My Impressions of: The Heart's Confusion

clarity: this title fits the poem well.
style: romance true story poetry.
originality: unique idea and style well done.

My favorite line: -She walked out of his dreams.

Into his life-


Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: I can't help but to like well written poetry and this one did not let me down.
Looks as if you used all the prompts and requirements for the contest well. I love that this was your true story.
This poem has heart. Great work.

Joseph


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Review of Darwin's Journey  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
My Impressions of: Darwins Journey

clarity: The Title goes well with the story.
style: Reads like a true story.
originality: Good idea written realistically

Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: Strong narrative, strong character well described. Thank you for sharing this I liked the story. I was doing some random reviewing when this one popped up with Hunters Moon. I knew I was in store for a good one. Was not let down, this story held my attention well. Awesome!

Joseph

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