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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi W.D. Wilcox, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Bombs Bursting In Air" Open in new Window. by W.D. Wilcox

Clarity: A good title for this adventure tale.

Writing style: Adventure war drama,


My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A great adventure tale paced with realistic action.

Strong characters, great descriptions that takes the reader into the scene hearing the bombs dropping.

A great job with the dialogue very realistic and individual for each character.

A great structure with the large font and good spacing making it easy to read for any reader.


W.D. Wilcox, thank you for sharing this entertaining and exciting work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: None

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review of Have a Heart  Open in new Window.
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Ned, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Have a Heart" Open in new Window. by Ned

Clarity:A great title for this mystery tale.

Writing style: Mystery short story.


My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A great mystery short story. Well written with a good structure that is easy for the reader. A good narrative with strong characters. A nice twist at the end which caught this reader off guard.

Ned, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: None

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Joseph
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi John Q Public, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Thoughts About Life" Open in new Window. by John Q Public

Clarity: The title describes the content of the article well.

Writing style:Personal opinion article.


My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A well written article describing personal views on life.

Well structured article that is easy for the reader.

Indeed Mother Nature is unpredictable.

I like the use of a Patrick Henry quote.

John Q Public, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:None

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Joseph
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Kanishka, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Having the last laugh" Open in new Window. by Kanishka

Clarity:A good title for this article.

Writing style: Personal opinion article

My favorite line:--- Humour is a time-tested way of coping with stressful situations.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: Well said. Humor is a good thing and does help break the moods. True it does have to be played right or someone might take it the wrong way.

Humor is indeed an art form and some people have it and some don't. It is funny how some people have no sense of humor at all however they are extremely sharp in a different area.

Kanishka, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:None

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Joseph
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Jacky, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"The Book of Truth" Open in new Window. by Jacky

Clarity:A nice title for this story.

Writing style:Personal relationship drama.


My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A delightful story about relationships and opposites attracting. It is true that opposites attract.

Nicely structured making it easy for the reader. Good descriptions that help to visualize the story.

A nice job with the dialog.


Jacky, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:None

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Joseph
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)

Hi again Ivey,I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "dear Lord give me a new start " Open in new Window. by Ivey

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A powerful prayer poem. Nice rhyming scheme. A good form that is easy for the reader.

Indeed we are so blessed to have a merciful and forgiving God who seems to understand how weak humans are. God works in mysterious ways, it is those darkest times in our lives' that make us stronger then aids in defining us individually.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:The portrait of the early life of a saint is painted for this reader.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:I see no problems with the mechanics of this beautiful poem.

Ivey, thank you for sharing this strong poem that has inspired this reader.
Write On! God bless!

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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)

Hi Ivey, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "That Big Beautiful Tree" Open in new Window. by Ivey

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A nice form with a good rhyming pattern.
I particularly like the structure of the first 5 or so lines.
I like that you used a tree and the four seasons of the tree and leaves growth and decay. This is a nice easy to picture scene for the reader.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: The portrait of a big oak tree weathering the seasons is painted for this reader.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: All the mechanics of this poem look fine to me.

Ivey, thank you for sharing your lovely poem. Write On!

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Review of That's impossible  Open in new Window.
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Beyond words, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"That's impossible" Open in new Window. by Beyond words

Clarity: A good title for this tale.

Writing style: Fantasy fairy-tale.


Overall impressions:Well written time traveling tale. I like lily and am glad that she learned a lesson.

Well structured, easy for the reader. I like the large font.

Beyond words, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:By listing all three genres your work will be seen by more browsers or potential readers.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

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Review of Cow on the Field  Open in new Window.
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)

Hi GERVIC, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Cow on the Field" Open in new Window. by GERVIC House Targaryen

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A nice rhyming scheme in this humorous prompt poem.
Good easy to read structure.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:The portrait, of a cow running toward the goalpost on a football field, is painted for this reader.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems with the spelling grammar or mechanics.

Gervic, thank you for sharing this entertaining poem. Write On!

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Review of Lessons  Open in new Window.
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Jacky, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Lessons" Open in new Window. by Jacky

Clarity: Seems to be a good title.

Writing style:Fantasy drama.


Overall impressions:An entertaining short story. Well written, short and to the point, the way today's reader likes things.

A nice easy to read structure. Most readers like easy to read stories.

A nice twist at the end when the boy turns into a cloud.

Jacky, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: None

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Review of Fragile  Open in new Window.
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Diva, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Fragile " Open in new Window. by Diva

Clarity:Goood title.

Writing style:Life learning drama.

My favorite line:--- People expect from you everything, but they expect me to ask for nothing.---This is so true and sadly will never change.

Overall impressions: You are preaching to the choir. Everything you have written is true. Through life we learn to take each thing individually and get whatever positive we can from it, and not dwell on the negative.

Human nature is hard to try to reprogram, but if you don't you can worry yourself to death.

Smell the roses. Try to make someone smile. Be happy. Don't worry it never helps.

Diva, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Consider double spacing with a blank line here and there to help those of us with weak eyes.

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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)

Hi Wandering Thoughts, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Equality Leads to Peace" Open in new Window. by Wandering Thoughts

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A strong poem with repeating lines. A nice rhyming scheme for the last or poem spoken at the end.

---Life is the result of love accomplishing everything--- Strong words for this chorus.


Artistic Voice and Imagery:This poem reads a bit like a rough draft for a new song.

This poem paints the picture of:
A performer preparing and practicing for the great play of life.
for this reader.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:Looks okay
to me.


Wandering Thoughts, thank you for sharing this poem. A good read.

PS: Your handle is awesome. My thoughts wander all the time.
Write On!

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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)

Hi Carly, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Great and Sudden Change" Open in new Window. by Carly

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: A strong poem. In a few words you have said a lot.
Indeed most humans do not like change.

This poem has a unique flow, a bit of an unusual structure. It works.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: A portrait of the pandemic is painted for this reader.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I see no problems with the grammar spelling or mechanics.

Carly, thank you for sharing this lovely poem. Write On!

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Review of I Forgive You  Open in new Window.
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)

Hi again APoeticHeart, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "I Forgive You" Open in new Window. by APoeticHeart

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A deep poem sounds as if written from lost love. It is those lost loves we all go through that make us stronger and ready when we finally find true love.

A well written poem with a nice rhyming scheme. Very strong the emotion screams out.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:Forgiving is much harder than it sounds, however most rewarding when you truly forgive.

The portrait of someone trying to find closure from a recent lost love, then moving on; painted for this reader.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I see no problems with the grammar spelling or mechanics.

APoeticHeart, thank you for sharing this strong poem, it is a joy to read.
Write On!

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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi Winchester, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"About God and Sin and Missy Titus" Open in new Window. by Winchester Jones

Clarity:A good title for this story.

Writing style:Political personal opinion drama.


Overall impressions:A good opening that grabs this readers attention well. I'm reminded of the Clinton years.

Well structured story with a good storyline. Good descriptions that help the reader to visualize the setting.

Good characters and dialog. A good ending with a twist for the readers imagination.

Winchester, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:

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Joseph
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Emrei,I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Decoding Decisions:" Open in new Window. by Emrei

Clarity:A good title for this work.

Writing style:Modern research essay.


Overall impressions: Its sad but true we are programed to search for the best (cheapest) deal.

Nicely structured essay loaded with todays marketing information or coding. About 1/3 of this was not in English therefore it was Latin to this reader who don't know Latin.

Emrei, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: Consider keeping this article consistent in one language.

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Review of Take My Hand  Open in new Window.
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)

Hi APoeticHeart, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Take My Hand" Open in new Window. by APoeticHeart

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A strong, emotional love poem. A unique as well as poetic rhyming pattern. Take My Hand; repeats the title every fifth line.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: The image of soulmates traveling through time is portrayed for this reader.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:Looks good.

APoeticHeart, thank you for sharing your this lovely poem. It is a good read.
Write On!

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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi BScholl, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Built (1st Place) (Editor Pk May-13 NL) " Open in new Window. by BScholl

Clarity:An interesting title, however it could better describe the story.

Writing style:Fantasy sci-fi romance drama.

My favorite lines: ---The nerdiest guy in the county dating a pearl like Shelley? Something just wasn’t right.---

Overall impressions:A great storyline. A strong opening that does grab this readers attention.

I like Thom and his determination to find the truth.

Nicely structured, this makes it easy for the reader as well as inviting for a browser or potential reader.

A nice twist for the ending.


BScholl, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:None

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review of 100 hours  Open in new Window.
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)

Hi kingalex1234, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "100 hours" Open in new Window. by kingalex1234

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A well worded poem with a good strong structure plus a unique rhyming scheme. One hundred hours, a creative idea for this delightful poem.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:Life's journey condensed into a day. The image painted for this reader.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems that I can see.

Kingalex1234, thank you for sharing your story. Write On!

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Review of RUINED  Open in new Window.
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)

Hi with love, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "RUINED" Open in new Window. by with love

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A free verse poem that poses questions from the author on how to remember Mom. We can program our mind to remember the positives or negatives about people, places and things.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:The portrait of a confused author trying to write a biography, comes to this reader.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:I see no problems with the grammar, spelling, or mechanics.

With love, thank you for sharing your story. Write On!

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Review of Blanket of Love  Open in new Window.
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)

Hi Bernie, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Blanket of Love" Open in new Window. by Bernie

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A strong emotional poem with a unique rhyming pattern and repeating line. Written from a father to daughter point of view, this helps bring out the emotion.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:The portrait of family is seen by this reader.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems that this reader can see.

Bernie, thank you for sharing your poem. Write On!

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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi Gracelyn Jane, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"How To Get A Boyfriend In Two Months" Open in new Window. by Gracelyn Jane

Clarity:The title fairly describes this work.

Writing style:Romance, family drama.
My favorite lines: --- Not because I've been single for a long time, but because I just can't find a guy who meets my 'standards'---

Overall impressions:Great structure for this work. It is very easy for the reader and inviting for a browser.

You have a wonderful gift for descriptive dialogue, very impressive.

Really good descriptions that puts the reader there in the middle of you and your mom.

The the title suggest this is a 'how to' however the titles question was never answered.

I can really relate to this article. You sound just like my daughter who also is 30 years old, unmarried. Things are so different in this cyber age than when us baby boomers were young. It is what it is, a different world. My oldest daughter turns 35 this year, she has been married maybe 2 years, has a 20 day old baby girl.

This strong article has took my mind in a different direction. Good luck. You will find your soulmate at the time destiny has laid out. The next thing you know you will be trying to marry off your daughter.

« H2G-AB-I2M » this reader is confused as to the meaning of « H2G-AB-I2M », some of us are behind the times.


Gracelyn Jane, thank you for sharing this entertaining work that has me philosophizing. It has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: A good proofread and edit never hurts.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi Kare Enga, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Brown eyes [#28 Mark]" Open in new Window. by Kare Enga in Udn Thani

Clarity: The title fits this tribute well.

Writing style: Friendship life-long.


Overall impressions:A life long relationship comes to this readers mind when reading this emotional work.

These few well written words speak loudly, the emotion can be felt. Often we write things down afraid that we might forget some of the most important traits of a friend or relationship.


Kare Enga, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:None

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Review of Exit roads  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hi Sinbad, I came across this story while random reviewing.

My impressions of:"Exit roads" Open in new Window. by Sinbad

Clarity:A good title.

Writing style:Personal experience in poetic style.


Overall impressions:Written in a very realistic, honest sounding opinion of your take on today's existence. This work carries a poetic flow.

Sinbad, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Consider line spacing and breaks between paragraphs to make it easier for the reader.

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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)

Hi again Sumojo, I came across this delightful poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Shadow creatures " Open in new Window. by Sumojo

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A simple children poem with a good rhyming pattern that helps to give a tantalizing flow.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:A riddle that starts the readers mind to search for answers. I like the way this poem starts. Finishing with answers.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:It's a fun I endorse, a great end.

Sumojo, thank you for sharing your work it's always a pleasure to read.
Write On!

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