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Review of Mr. Prendergast  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
My impressions of: Mr. Prendergast

Does the title describe story? Good title.

What style? Realistic biographical.

Are there three genre listings? Ghost, Fantasy, Religious



This is only one opinion: This well written story held this readers attention well.
Reads like a true story. Constructed and laid out well.
A nice tone as if you were speaking to me.
Well described with strong character.
Thank you for sharing this story, I enjoyed reading it.


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Review of 100 Days  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: 100 Days

Does the title describe story? The title could better describe the story.

What style? Presidential quotes and speeches.

Are there three genre listings? Political, Cultural, Opinion


This is only one opinion: A well written and informative article about politics and presidents.
Well constructed. Unfortunately nothing happened in the Obama years.
Nicely done, I do like presidential quotes.
Thank you for sharing this work, it was a good read.

Write On! Keep Writing! God Bless.

Joseph

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: Peanut Butter Thoughts

Does the title describe story? A good title that describes the story well.

What style? Realistic short story.

Are there three genre listings? Contest Entry, Other



This is only one opinion: A well written short story with good descriptions as well as good dialogue and strong characters.

Short and to the point, just the way most readers like things today. Well done.

I love peanut butter, this story has made me hungry.



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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
My impressions of: Aunt Marge's Big Mistake

Does the title describe story? Yes the title is a good description of the story.

What style? Young adult, sci-fi.

Are there three genre listings? Contest entry, Sci-fi, young adult.

My favorite lines: -- It's really gross.--

--You have an incredibly sane explanation for an idea that sounds completely nuts."--

This is only one opinion: Nicely written with good descriptions and strong characters. I like Rita and I think I've met Aunt Marge.
This story is well constructed and has a good realistic flow.
A nice happy ending.
Thanks for sharing this, It was a joy to read.


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
My impressions of: A year playing dead

Does the title describe story? The title describes this story well.

What style? Biographical, political

Are there three genre listings? Biographical, Travel, Personal

My favorite line: -- Bad enough to have a pandemic, it gave an opportunity for the wealthy to win the war on the poor and the righteous the right to enforce their rights over others--

This is only one opinion: You said it well. Thank you for sharing this, it has been a joy to read.
Nicely written article venting about politics and our entitled society.
This is a strong article that I'm sure many others agree with, it has me wanting to start venting but there's not enough time.

I like the way you constructed this, it flows good.
Awesome writing!


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Review of NaNo 2017 premise  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
My impressions of: NaNo 2017 premise

Clarity: Good title for this work.

Style: Summary of Tangled Rootd.

Genera listing: Mystery.

My favorite line:--He thought they were his friends, but they were just using him.--

My 2 cents is only One opinion: Beck Firing back up! Thanks for sharing this summary premise behind your 2017 novel. I have enjoyed reading it.

Well written and constructed with useful information to prepare to read your novel.

It is obvious you have put a lot of time and work into this mystery novel. Laura and Chad sound like good strong characters.
I am going to have to read this novel, it sounds really awesome.
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Review of Life Hotel  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
{i{b}}My impressions of: Life Hotel{/b}

Clarity: A nice title for this story. Gives a good idea of the content.

Style: Realistic philosophy.

Genera listing: Philosophy, biographical, emotional.

My favorite line: --To Be Happy.--

My 2 cents is only One opinion: A good opening making the reader wants to and know more.
Good reference "retiring is like finishing the competition and reaching the plateau."

Nice touch about -some of us become Grandparents'.-
I am supposed to become a grandparent in March.

Good reference to people that have left.
I like the references to the River.
Well written, thank you for sharing this story, it is a good read.


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: The Eternal Struggle.

Clarity: The title could better describe this article.

Style: Informative and educational article.

Genera listing: educational, informative, psychological.


My 2 cents is only One opinion: Well written article about depression and fighting depression.

A brief discourse on depression is a good description for this article about depression.

I like the comparison with war and fighting to keep
Strong.


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: Everything comes to an end, Eventually

Clarity: A good title for this work.

Style: Realistic opinions.

Genera listing: emotional, writing, experience


My 2 cents is only One opinion: This well written article is sad but true. Everything ends eventually.

Spend time with your family is almost always a positive.


Suggestions: A good proof reading to correct any typos or grammar, I seen at least a couple.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
{{b}c:blue}My impressions of: What is Success?{/b}

Clarity: The title describes this article well.

Style: Informative educational article.

Genera listing: Opinion, Reviewing, nonsense.

My favorite line: -- I think the definition of success is something you accomplish and that you're happy with how things are in life.--

My 2 cents is only One opinion: Hey Ash, you have posted a good question and you're right each person measures success in their own way.
Success is a person's happiness in life. Society often has a different opinion about everything it is our job to weigh those opinions and make our own opinion.

Well written article. Looking forward to seeing more.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
{{b}i}My impressions of: April 2018 Prompts.{/b}

Clarity: The title describes this article good.

Style: Written like a news article.

Genera listing: Writing, contest, contest entry.


My 2 cents is only One opinion: A nicely written and very educational and informative article.
Good information about the genres.



Suggestions: Even though a contest entry it is better to list something different in the genres for the browser looking for this in the future.

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Review of Anger Understood  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of: Anger Understood

Clarity: The title describes this story well.
Style: Biographical, political.
Genera listing: Personal, emotional, Family.



My 2 cents is only One opinion: A nicely written story.
Our politics and the views that are modern society has is in a beautiful shape.
It is easy to be angry at the system the hard thing is what can we do to change it.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: The Cartographers Compass.

Clarity: The title fits well with this story.
Style: Adventure
Genera listing: Contest, contest entry, other.



My 2 cents is only One opinion: A well written story. I like Amina and her description.
Rashid also is a likeable character for this pleasant story.
Thank you Sharing this, I much enjoyed reading it.

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Review of Path  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)

My impressions of the poem: Path

Clarity: The title fits this well.
Style: Poetry.

My favorite line: --We will walk until life runs dry--

My 2 cents is only one opinion: A well written poem that has a good rhyming scheme.
A nice flow for this poem about the path through life.

Thank you for sharing this work it was a most enjoyable read.


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
{i{b}}My impressions of: Johnny-by-moonlight.{/b}

Clarity: A good title for this story.
Style: Childrens
Genera listing: Fantasy, Mythology, other.


My 2 cents is only One opinion: A nicely written story about Johnny visiting his Grandmother and helping in her garden.
A garden is like magic, if you plant a little seed work with it then watch it to see what it eventually becomes.
Thank you for sharing this work it was a pleasant read.


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Review of Prompt #8 Taurus  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
{c:b{b}lue}My impressions of: Prompt #8{/b}

Clarity: The title could better describe the work.

Style: Realistic romance.

Genera listing: Contest entry, family.


My 2 cents is only One opinion: A well written story.
Very realistic sounds as if it could be a true story.
Nicely constructed this story has a good flow.

Suggestions: Even though it is a contest entry it's always better
for future results to list at least three genera listings.


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
My impressions of: Carmen Quiere Liorar

Clarity: The title works for this story.
Style: Biography

Genera listing: Emotional, other


My 2 cents is only One opinion: A well written biography.
Good descriptions and strong character.
A lot of information covered in this.


Suggestions: Consider keeping the work in one language.
Todays reader likes to see actions to keep them reading.

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Review of First Days  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
{{b}i}My impressions of: First Days.{/b}

Clarity: The title describes this work well.

Style: Realistic, biographical.

Genera listing: Personal, biographical, community.


My favorite line: --You could see my every ounce of concentration.--


My 2 cents is only One opinion: Great writing, Ash. A well written, constructed and informative article.

First days are often the toughest and the best. You have documented that well. Also given some good advice -- So never give up, think positive--.
Thank you for sharing this work I have enjoyed reading it and look forward to seeing more.

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Review of Onions  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: Onions

Clarity: The title fits well with this work.
Style: Contest entry written from a prompt.
Genera listing: Contest entry, nonsense, other.

My favorite line: --"Am I Alice? Have I followed a rabbit down to Wonderland?" I muttered.--

My 2 cents is only One opinion: A well written nonsense story about a day you spent in the garden.

I like the poem that begins - onions in front yards-
A nice reference to Alice in Wonderland.
Good work, I like the green font.

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Review of My First Poem  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: My first Poem

Clarity: A nice title for this poem.
Style: Free verse.
Genera listing: Experience, personal, writing.


My 2 cents is only One opinion: Great job, this is a strong poem. Specially if it is your first poem it is a great start.
Thank you for sharing, it was an enjoyable read.

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Review of Movie review  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My Impressions of: Movie review

clarity: A good title for this work.
style: Family, drama, realistic.
originality: An original idea.

Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: A nice definition of family, followed by two reviews of movies recently watched.
Well written and educational article.
The first movie review of The sky is pink, is more in depth than the second review.
Nicely done, thank you for sharing.

Suggestions: Consider starting the review of each movie with the title of the movie.

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Review of DEMONS  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)

My impressions of the poem: Demons

Clarity: The title goes well with this poem.
Style: Dark demonic poetry.

My 2 cents is only one opinion: A well written and constructed free verse poem. For me this poem says too much time alone can start your mind to spinning in odd ways.
I can see how people might take this poem as personal and suicidal. This reader sees it as a poem about being alone.
Thank you for sharing this work.


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Review of Connections  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)

My impressions of the poem: Connections

Clarity: The title could better describe this work.
Style: Free verse poem about life's trials.


My 2 cents is only one opinion: A well written work about the ups and downs of life.
A lot of potential can be felt from this strong poem.
Life and relationships bring us all down at times, as we endure we find that those low times
help us to appreciate the better time's.

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Review of Sine Qua Non  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
My Impressions of: Sine Qua Non

clarity: A good title for this story.
style: Reads like a true story.
originality: Original idea.

My favorite line:--Sometimes, the parts are more important than the whole.--


Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: This well written story kept this readers attention well.
A very realistic story that reads like a true story or biography.
The twist at the end was good and caught me totally off guard.

Joseph

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)

My impressions of: The Magical Paradise (Chapter 1)

Clarity: The title fits the story well.

Genres: Emotional, teen, fantasy.

This is only one opinion: I like that Ava introduces herself in the opening line. Good descriptions and character's make this a realistic fantasy.
Thanks for sharing this work, I enjoyed reading it.

Suggestions: Todays readers are less intimidated with shorter paragraph's, consider breaking down into more paragraphs. A bit of action or a cliffhanger type ending to a chapter leaves the reader wanting to read more.

Write On! Keep writing! God bless!
Joseph

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