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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
My impressions of: It's not real.

Clarity: A good title for this story.


Genera listing: Death, Horror/Scary, other.


My 2 cents is only One opinion: This story held my attention well from start to finish.

Strong character in this realistic story, I like Cassie. Good dialog and descriptions' that bring out emotions.

Well done. The ending caught this reader a bit off guard, however I liked the way you constructed it. The reader can interpret the way that they want to. This Reader thinks she was dreaming.
Thank you for sharing this work I found it most enjoyable to read.

Suggestions: If any, a stronger opening line to catch the browsers attention.

Write on! Keep Writing! God bless you!
Joseph

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Review of The Knock  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of: The Knock.

Clarity: A good title for this story.
Style: open-ended fantasy.
Genera listing: Dark, Death, Crime/Gangster.

My two cents is only one opinion: I like this story.
Charlotte is a strong character for this story.
Greatly described scenes. Good dialog, awesome ending
leaving this reader wanting to know more.

Great work! Write on! Keep writing!
Joseph

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)

My impressions of the poem: four words and a river of definitions.

Clarity: This title works with the poem. Titles usually capitalize the nouns.
Style: inspirational, questioning.

My 2 cents is only one opinion: A unique choice for this poem.
Humans have always learned from trial error, you captured this well with the last four lines.
I wonder if you meant for the title to say four letters instead of four words.

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Joseph

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Review of Pinhead Baby's  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)

My impressions of the poem: Pinhead Baby's

Clarity: A good title for this poem.
Style: Nature and friendship.

My 2 cents is only one opinion: A nicely worded and constructed poem about nature. This poem has a unique flow.
Good job with the rhyming scheme.
Thank you for sharing this work, I enjoy reading about nature and friendship.


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)

My impressions of the poem: The Autumn of HIStory

Clarity: The title fits the poem.
Style: Inspirational poetry.
Genres: Spiritual, inspirational, emotional.

My favorite line: The harvest comes as days grow dim.

My 2 cents is only one opinion: A nicely constructed and well worded poem reflecting on autumn.

With the fall harvest we prepare for the frigid winter, that is what this reader gets from this poem. Thank you for sharing this it was a most enjoyable read.




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Review of The Sleepover  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)

My impressions of: The Sleepover.

Clarity: The title fits this story.
Genera listing: Teen Fantasy, Action/Adventure.


My 2 cents is only one opinion: A realistic story with good descriptions great characters and good dialogue.
A nice twist for the ending, this Reader did not see it coming.
A good flow that starts a bit slow before grabbing the readers attention.
Thank you for sharing this enjoyable story.

Suggestions: Consider a stronger opening line to grab the browsers attention.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)

My impressions of the poem: of knitting and unknitting

Clarity: The title fits this poem well.
Style: Relationship poetry.

My 2 cents is only one opinion: A nice poem, worded and structured well, short and makes its point.
I like the comparison to knitting and unknitting. Has the tone of a past short relationship. Well done.

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Review of The Pot 'o Gold  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
My Impressions of: The Pot 'o Gold

clarity: A good title for this story.
style: Humorous folklore.
originality: A unique narrative.


Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: A realistic sounding story with strong characters and good descriptions. Lucky is a unique and funny character. I like the accent of the dialogue giving this story a good feel as well as a nice flow.
This storyline could be used in larger works.
Thanks for sharing this, it was a good read.

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Review of Executive Order  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)

My impressions of the poem: Executive Order

Clarity: A good title for this creative work.
Style: Villanelle, contest entry.

My 2 cents is only one opinion: Awesome work! Good subject with nice structure, making for a nice flow for this poem. Great subject to gripe about. I still have jetlag from the last time change, it really can mess with you internal clock. Thanks for sharing this work, I enjoyed reading it.
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)

My impressions of the poem: Betrayal In Disguise

Clarity: Betrayal In Disguise is a good title for this poem.
Style: relationships', drama, poetry.

My 2 cents is only one opinion: A strong and emotional poem. Well constructed lines giving a realistic and steady flow. The emotion can be felt from this strong work. Trial and error is how we learn. Thanks for sharing your work, this was a good read.


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)

My impressions of the poem: Yaktrax

Clarity: Title works well with this.
Style: Nature, poetry.

My favorite line:--Lavinia watches over her daughters and sons, the Children-of-the-Earth, through seasons of mud, growth and dust--

My 2 cents is only one opinion: A strong opening line and a unique flow in this short work. An interesting read.



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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My Impressions of: The Silent Goodbye

clarity: The title goes well with this story.
style: Romance, lost love.
originality: A unique idea for this work.

Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: Well written and structured with good descriptions and strong characters for this emotional story. Sarah and Alex are more calm than most people who are breaking up. A nice flow for this story.

Suggestions: Consider experimenting with an unexpected twist or action.


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My Impressions of: Unveiling Densenzano del Garda: A Guide

clarity: The title fits well with this guide.
style: A descriptive guide type article.
originality: Well detailed description.

Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: A well written and detailed tour guide type article for this destination.
Nicely detailed information and suggestions for places to see and best times to do it, sounds like a really great vacation spot. If ever I make it I definitely want this guide with me, it is full of valuable ideas and suggestions.

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Review of Edna's cookies  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My Impressions of: Edna's cookies

clarity: A good title for this story.
style: Friendly sci-fi.
originality: A good idea for this story.

Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: A well written story with good descriptions and a strong character. I like Edna and can
almost smell those chocolate chip cookies. A nice happy ending. Held this readers attention well. Thank you for sharing this work it was a joy to read.


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Review of The Pedestal  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)

My impressions of the poem: The Pedestal

Clarity: Title could better describe the poem.
Style: Poetry

My 2 cents is only one opinion: Well written poem, a nice flow. Well chosen words to help this poem express emotion as it does. A strong work. Enjoyable to read, thank you for sharing this poem. I enjoyed reading this.


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My Impressions of: The Power of Student Voice

clarity: Title fits well with story.
style: Biographical story.
originality: A unique story.

Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: Well written. Reads much like a true story. Alex makes a good character for this work.
Nice ending with the main problem being fixed. Thank you for sharing this piece it was a good read I enjoyed it.


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
My Impressions of: The Soul of Society

clarity: The title goes with the story.
style: Cultural, point of view.
originality: A unique idea for a story.

My favorite line: "There can be no keener revelation of a society's soul than the way in which it treats its children."

Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: Well written short story or news article. This story touches on some good points about our society and how our children are treated. Nice ending pointing out flaws in our society.


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
My Impressions of: Warcraft verses StarCraft interview

clarity: A good title for this story.
style: Talk show interview. Screenplay. Sci-Fi.
originality: A unique idea for this story.

Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: Well written and described interview or screenplay type story. Realistic formatting and interviewing for the story. A nice amount of humor throughout the story. Good dialog. Well structured.

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Review of The Unsaid  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)

My impressions of the poem: The Unsaid

Clarity: A good title for this poem.
Style: Emotional, relationship, poetry.

My 2 cents is only one opinion: A well written work with nicely chosen words. Indeed this work speaks the truth, it is those words that are not said that usually hurt the worse.
A strong poem the emotion can be felt.


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Review of Eleventh Dress  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My Impressions of: Eleventh Dress

clarity: The title fits well with the story.
style: Short story.
originality: Nice idea for this story.


Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: Nice descriptions of Pun- Hall Mall in Smoothie, Alabama. Strong character and good dialogue. Well written short story, straight to the point just the way today's readers like things. Held this readers attention well. Thanks for sharing this work, I enjoyed reading it. :)


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Review of Unrequited  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)

My impressions of the poem: Unrequited

Clarity: a good title for this poem.
Style: poetry, romance, love.

My 2 cents is only one opinion: Nicely written, strong
And emotional poem. These well chosen words have a great flow.
The emotional feeling can be felt well in this short work.
Thank you for sharing this work it was a joy to read.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
My Impressions of: Command Post Capture

clarity: The title is a good description for the story.
style: Action, adventure, military.
originality: A unique idea for this story.

My favorite line: --Just no pleasing some people.--

Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: Well written story. Good descriptions with a strong character. I could feel the heat of the day. Held this readers attention well. A good twist toward the end. I liked the note relating back to childhood.

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Review of The outcast  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)

My impressions of the poem: The Outcast

Clarity: The title fits with the poem.
Style: Emotional poetry.

My 2 cents is only one opinion: This nicely written poem has a good flow. Most people at one time or another in life probably can relate to the outcast. The feeling of being different defines us as individuals, each having there uniqueness. Thank you for sharing this strong work.


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Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
My Impressions of: Directive Violation Notice #90013

clarity: Nice title for this story.
style: Fantasy, Sci-Fi
originality: Creative idea for this newsletter.

My favorite line: --Remember, glory to the Urchain Sovereignty and the Viceroy!--

Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: Nicely done, looks like it could have come out of any of today's headlines with only a few words changed. Thank you for sharing this entertaining read.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
{{c:blue}size:3.5}My Impressions of: Cinderella: Different Written Versions

clarity: The title describes the story well.
style: A comparison of different versions of this story.
originality: An original and unique idea for this classic fairytale.

Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: A well written and documented comparison for these three versions of Cinderella.
Disney is hard to beat in most all of their stories. It is interesting to see the differences as you have pointed them out. Well done.

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