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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My Impressions of: What a Mystery!!

clarity: the title fits well with the story.
style: realistic casual style.
originality: original idea the title tells it well.


Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: Well written story, good description and use of all the characters.
23 sentences as contest required and solved the mystery. The last sentence is my favorite. Great work.
Joseph
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Review of Implications  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
My Impressions of: Implications

clarity: Title could better describe the story.
style: Realistic settings and characters.
originality: Unique idea and story flow.

Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: Strong characters, dialogue and nice descriptions. Holds the readers attention well.
Nice twist at the end with a humorous last line.
Suggestions: A stronger opening line to peek the readers curiosity. More action in the middle, almost lost this readers attention.
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Review of Without You  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (3.5)
My Impressions of: Without You

clarity: The title match's the poem.
style: A short romance poem.
originality: original and short.


Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: a very short poem doesn't really have enough to get the point across.
Seems like the author is questioning whether they would be better off with or without current mate.
Suggestions: Would not hurt to add a little content.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (3.5)
My Impressions of: To Paint or Not to Paint

clarity: reads as the title suggest.
style: realistic dialogue between two friends painting.
originality: Typical conversation between friends while their wives are shopping.


Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: A realistic story with strong characters and realistic dialogue.
I can relate to this story, George is trying to get in a few brownie points first and then watch the
football game. George is trying to get a little work out of his friend Hal, before letting him drink
all his beer. George is probably not as hardcore about football fan as Hal.

Suggestions: The mispronunciation and misspelling of words is really not needed for this story.
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)

My impressions of: High Tea with Mommy

I like...
clarity: the title fits well with this story
style: First person. Reads' like true life experience adventure.
originality: Nice idea for a story. Well written and humorous.

Good story about raising a young daughter, obstacles you may encounter.

My favorite line: She’s very independent; that’s a good trait. Right?

Joe's 2 cents: This is only one opinion: Well written story. Very realistic I feel this is a true story.
Realistic idea that the younger sister would want to look like her older twin brothers. I like that
Samantha cutting her hair was no big deal to the author and they still had high tea. I feel sure most
readers can relate to this story.
Keep writing! Write on! God Bless!

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)

My Impressions of: Git Along, Little Kayak

A nicely written poem about paddling in a kayak.
Set to the tune of Get along little doogies
The title fits the poem well.

My favorite lines:-Stay clear of the rocks.-

This is only one opinion: A good idea to set the poem to the tune of "Get along little doogies."
The poem describes well kayaking down the river. I paddle in a canoe and can relate to -one with the river- that is nature at its finest. There is nothing like it.
Great work.
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)

My Impressions of:Broken Sails ---A Sonnet

A romance poem about love life and regret.
Title fits well for this poem.

My favorite lines: - I forgot that it is winds’ enmity
That rips apart the strongest of ship sails. -
-- I found that I had lost all that I had. --

This is only one opinion: A well written poem conveying lost love and regret in life's journey.
Nice rhyming scheme using unique words. Strong sonnet leading this reader to reflect on life.
The last two lines are so true. Awesome work!

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Review of Lessons  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
My Impressions of: Lessons

A personal poem full of emotion.
The title fits the poem well.

This is only one opinion: A strong poem that conveys the emotions of the author to the reader.
Well written this poem brings back memories from my childhood. A good choice of words constructed well.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My Impressions of: Get Rhythm Shoe Shine Boy

A nicely written short story for a contest entry.
I think Johnny Cash would approve.

My favorite line: His eyes ached and his temple pinched, but worst of all, inspiration evaded him.

This is only one opinion: For contest entries it is hard to meet the word count requirements
And still convey our thoughts. In the story you have done that well. Especially in my favorite line you conveyed A nice portrait for the reader, a good use of words to paint the description. Thank you for sharing this. I enjoyed reading it.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My Impressions of: How it feels to be Guilty

A short story about personal feelings of guilt.
Reads as the title suggests.

This is only one opinion: Nicely written story conveys to the reader your feelings well.
Not an easy task to convey your feelings on paper, well done.I feel sure the satisfaction your grandparents got from the vacation outweighed the cost. For your boyfriend it was better to break up than to string him along when you knew he's not the one. Guilt is a hard to control emotion, leave the guilt in this nicely written story. Continue your life guilt free. Keep writing.

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Review of Heart  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
My Impressions of: Heart

A romance poem.
Written as the title suggests.

This is only one opinion: War and love are a bit similar. What this poem says to me, young love and hunting for your soulmate which seems elusive until you find them. That hunt at times can take awhile and can seem an impossible task. When you find it the reward outweighs the task.
Well this is a strong poem to get me to philosophy.

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Review of Contract of Life  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)

My Impressions of: Contract of Life

A story about the author negotiating a contract with a demon.
A unique idea for a story. Reads as the title suggests.

This is only one opinion: I like the different font style identifying which character is speaking.
An original idea for this story. This story held this reader's attention well from start to finish.
In today's society there are many demons dressed like sheep, befriending us while in reality looking for weakness. The author has contracted the demon to handle these situations, A realistic concept. Thank you for sharing this. I enjoyed reading the story. Keep writing!


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Review of Our OWN Destiny  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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My Impressions of: Our own Destiny

A story about kids at school with a overbearing teacher that gives them a hard time so then that's their parents who are retired teachers to help them start study groups.
Reads as title suggest
A realistic idea for this story.

This is only one opinion: Well written, good narrative, strong characters, good dialogue. I'm glad they got rid of old Brenda Sappington, serves her right. I really like the idea and phrase as Lexi and Greg said “make your own way.” Reads like a true story, could be, I would hope there's no teachers out there like that but I do remember a few that were close. Well written held this reader's attention well from start to finish. Thank you for sharing this. I enjoyed reading it.

Well Done - Write On!
Joseph

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Review of Life Without Ko  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
My Impressions of: Life without Ko

A tragic story about a family, then the little sister Ko gets missing
The title goes well with the story
Original idea with realistic characters and dialogue.

This is only one opinion: Nice story I hate that KO had to get missing. Strong characters
with good dialogue and descriptions. Held this reader's attention pretty good throughout the story kind of a Twist when KO went missing, caught this reader off guard. Good writing, you want to catch the reader off guard. Thank you. I enjoyed reading this tragic story.


Suggestions: Although it fit this story well, the pronoun I seemed a bit repetitive.

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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My Impressions of: The Look of Love In Her Eyes

A nicely written poem about a pet cat.

This is only one opinion: This poem has a really good flow and consistent rhythm.
I like that it's about a pet, we take our pets for granted too often but they are indeed our best friends most of the time. Original idea for this well written poem. This Reader enjoyed it thank you.

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Review of Music  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My Impressions of: Music

Inspirational story with dialogue between a couple. Andrea is hearing music but he doesn't.
The title fits well with the story.
Original idea with realistic dialogue.

My favorite line: She was finally free.

This is only one opinion: Strong characters exchanging good dialogue. The story held this reader's attention well. A nice twist at the end caught the reader off guard. A good inspirational ending leaves the reader satisfied. Thank you. I enjoyed reading this.
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
My Impressions of: The Paradoxes of Reviewing

A newsletter detailing some paradoxes that come up while reviewing.
Written as the title suggests.
Using some original realistic problems for examples.


This is only one opinion: An informative newsletter. I like that you used original examples that you had recently run into. I like your example about personal preferences like cussing and do you hold it against the work or not, a good question. When reviewing we try our best to look at things from an unbiased perspective. This can truly be hard to do at times. I liked this newsletter. I found it informative, realistic and well written. Thank you,
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
My impressions of: Psychic Vampires, Vampire Subculture

Clarity: A newsletter for Halloween about different types of vampires.
Style: Informational style
Originality: Original style talking about two different types vampires today's culture.

This is only one opinion: a well written and very informative newsletter. I liked the information about the two types of vampires.
I have never heard about psychic vampires however I know several people that fit the description. I have heard about the cult type and all I can say is there's some crazy people in this world. I don't particularly want to drink nobody's blood.

Keep writing! Write on! God Bless! Well Done - Write On!
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Review of Review Breakdowns  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of: Review Breakdown

How to type blog on different type of review breakdowns as title suggest.

This is only one opinion: well written informational newsletter. A nice breakdown, a good idea with the pros and cons of each type well done.
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Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: Another Day to be Free

This is only one opinion. This Spiritual poem is refreshing. I like work that praises the Lord. A strong poem with a lovely flow. A good consistent rhyming scheme. Thank you, I enjoyed reading this refreshing envelope style poem. Happiness is in the eye of this version of me, Awesome!
Suggestions: Consider experimented with different versions of the 1-8 number line. I wonder if you listen to your work out loud with a computer voice.
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Review of Delicious fruit  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of: Delicious Fruits

A well written 30 line pantoum poem.

This is only one opinion: I like this poem it has a unique rhythm, good rhyming scheme and I like the repeating lines.
A good job describing the image were they consistent rhyming scheme.
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Review of World Hunger  
Review by Joseph
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Rated: ASR | (3.5)
My impressions of: World Hunger

A sci-fi story about the fictional planet Yenion
attempting to cure their planets world hunger.

This is only one opinion: A good idea, nice start comparing it to the 1945 article. A lot of repetitive words and phrases used throughout this story, makes it harder for the reader, loosing his attention. Also gives the appearance of trying to meet a word count. It does sound a lot like the typical politicians in one of their conventions.
Suggestions: A good proofread and edit couldn't hurt. Today's readers like things short and straight to the point.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of: Life Lessons From E-mails and Forwards

a superb short story is the title suggest. About life lessons and making the best out of work & life.

This is only one opinion: I do know that singing Amazing Grace helps motivate you and lift you to a better mood. I have never heard anyone else say that though. Prayer also helps make a better day, a better mood, and a better you. It is sad that knowing these truths sometimes we still forget to use them. I really enjoyed this story and found it very refreshing.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: Life's Questions

A strong poem written from the point of view of one ready to give up.

This is only one opinion: Most people today get caught up from time to time in a boring routine. Changes can be made. Often those hard times make us stronger in the long run.
I'm reminded of this prayer. God give me the strength to change the things I can to understand the things I can't and to know the difference.
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Review of Special Care  
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Rated: E | (3.0)
My impressions of: Special Care

A review type poem about Animal Planet shows on rescuing animals.

This is only one opinion: The author shows emotion as a pet lover. Takes very serious any reference two pets on TV shows.
God give me the wisdom to change the things I can, understand the things I cannot, and no the difference.

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