My favorite line; I remembered, more than heard, the landing.
This is only one opinion: Well done, has a good flow. I feel like this work has a lot of potential yet to explore.
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As the title suggests
well written in song Style with lyrics
Unique and original idea well done
This is only one opinion: Hey good job, nicely Written song lyrics. Sounds Good! When I figured out that it was a song, the flow came together much better. I'm a dinosaur, I put the tune from Beverly Hillbillies to it, you should try it Sounded pretty d*** good. It really did. Now seriously I liked it! Thank you for allowing me to read it, I found it strong because it changed my mood.
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Well written inspirational poem as title suggests
Clearly a positive writing style
My favorite line: I sit and watch Gods wonderful creation
I look up to the sky and to God I pray
This is only one opinion:Well said, so often we easily forget
to praise God for all his miraculous creations. Instead we find ourselves only seeking his guidance when we are down and
in need of his help. Well written positive psalm. Thank you for sharing this, I enjoyed it as it led me to take a breath and praise God. Well written - Well done, Write On! Thank You Joseph WdCSuper Powers Reviewing Group writing.com
Original idea written in competitive realistic style
My favorite line: "Oh, to hell with this," he muttered irritably, sending another item-that-never-was hurtling into the oblivion of the recycle bin.
This is only one opinion: Nicely done, great idea for a realistic story. I like that it was told like a sports announcer. Awesome job! Thanks for sharing, this Gives me some ideas.
Well written -Rock On!
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This is only one opinion: Nicely done, well structured poem
has a good flow. Original tone. Great job.
Well written -Rock On!
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Realistic, emotional, letter. Positive outlook from writer
This is only one opinion: Well I'm just not sure how one's supposed to review a letter to family. very strong and emotional hits right at the heart of the reader. It's nice to see that the author is not in fear of death but accepts that this journey is Near the end. More people need to have this positive attitude. God bless her and her family and hers. Joseph WdCSuper Powers Reviewing Group writing.com
My impressions of: Arcane Ascension: Prologue
Fantasy adventure
Sy fie style
ancient magical civilization
My favorite lines: Within these texts, he found solace and understanding, a connection to a time when people like him were revered rather than feared.
This is only one opinion: Great job! Good descriptions, strong characters, and good dialog. Well written, all kinds of potential.
Suggestions: A stronger opening line to grab the reader's attention. As writers we all Fall in love with our work not wanting to change it, when a good edit wouldn't hurt. I'm bad for too many adjectives. Today's reader seems to have a short attention span and likes to get straight to the point in fewer words than it use to be. Consider breaking down to a few small chapters with strong openings leading to Cliffhanger style endings Or sudden unpredictable twists. Just a suggestion, It Was a good read. I enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. :)
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My impressions of: Anticipation
Well Structured rictameter poem
This is only one opinion: Good job well structured poem. How long did it take to come up with the rictimator? Sunday the day of rest, my favorite day. A holy day.
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Free verse poem about the bald eagle as the title suggest
My favorite line: Majestic flight and hovering gaze,
This is only one opinion:
nicely written poem about the majestic birds. Good job has a nice positive flow.
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My impressions of: Reasons why one needs to lose weight
Informative article as title suggest
This is only one opinion: Well done. A lot of good information seems to be well researched and documented. All true to the best of my knowledge from my bits with trying to lose weight through the years. No doubt exercise boosts your mood and productivity.
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My favorite line :Rain falls from the sky, cool and clean
This is only one opinion:Awesome poem nicely written and structured has a great flow. Thank you. I enjoyed reading this. Gives a positive outlook. Great job we all need that positive outlook.
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This is only one opinion: Off to a great start. Well constructed and written. Great idea, original I like it has great potential. Great job. At this time it just doesn't jump right off the page like I'm sure you want to do, At least for me and my one opinion. Shows good writing skills and has a lot of potential. Keep on writing.
Suggestions : A stronger opening line, That grabs the attention of the Reader and makes them stop everything else.
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This is only one opinion: Well written, unique content with a good flow. Chapter 4 I feel like I kind of started in the middle, That's probably why it just didn't jump out at me. In the opening line I think you meant with claws. Good job. Keep writing.
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Well described story about a nightmare
Nice direct Style as if you're speaking to me
original narrative
My favorite line: My eyes open to a heavy leaden sky; there’s no definition to it at all. No sign of clouds or the sun - it’s like looking at a wall and I can’t tell how far away from it I am as it fills my vision.
The environment is alien yet familiar;
This is only one opinion: Good job well written nightmare , Keeping me awake. Well told, has a good flow. Thank you
Well written -Rock On!
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My impressions of: Broken Love and Klonipan Dreams
Well written as title suggest
Unique style
Original idea with a good flow
My favorite line: In the echoes of silence, a mournful cry,
As memories linger, refusing to die.
This is only one opinion: Very nice poem, well structured and has a good flow. I liked it. Thank you for allowing me to read it. Still not sure what a Klonopin is lol. Very well versed great job! :)
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Story about a haunted Carnival as titles suggest
Nicely written with a corny dialogue
Realistic style original flow
My favorite line: Come'ere kid. Don't tuck your tail like that, get over here pup when I'm talkin to ya," The old carny said
Frankie looked back at Jack, backing away now, fear in his eyes. "Run home, Frankie! Don't come back!" he shouted
This is only one opinion: Great job! well written, detailed description, strong characters come to life with a twist into horror for the end. Keeps the reader's attention from the first line to the last. Thanks for sharing this story It took my mind away. Awesome
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My impressions of: Charisma- The Devils Gap Chapter 1
Well written and described.
My favorite line: “how did you come to discover this technology and if the Pharaohs were Gods, then how did the Romans conquer Egypt?”
This is only one opinion: Good descriptions. Strong opening line. Good dialog. I liked Uncle Peter. I don't really connect the title with the story. Probably just me but What is charisma? Where is the devil's gap? I'm a little confused. Other than that the story reads well, strong characters, strong descriptions, and has a good flow. I like the references to ancient Egypt and Moses.
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My impressions off: Borrow Such Changes - Expect the Truth!
Well written and structured poem with a nice flow.
my favorite line: For each worker cursed by the wealth who’s tax-blind.
This is only one opinion: well written and a great job well said you speak the truth. As children we are taught right from wrong but as we grow older we learn quite often what we were told was totally wrong. That's what this poem says to me and it is correct. Well done!
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this is only one opinion: short sweet simple straight to the point. Brings back a lot of memories I used to like fly them paper airplanes was pretty good at it too. Not a lot to work with but what I see looks fine to me. Well done Rock on!
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My favorite lines: Still, there is joy;
Each girl and boy
wrappings destroy -
Let play commence!
This is only one opinion : Nicely written poem About unwrapping presents on Christmas morning, brings back memories thank you for sharing this. very humorous. well structured, good flow.
Awesome Structuring.
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My impressions of: Winner and new prompt - 40 lines
40 line poem contest entry for somebody stealing the toilet paper
My favorite lines: The thief that was caught in this crime was none other than a two year old child.
This is only one opinion : Nicely written poem reads like a story, very humorous. well structured, pretty good flow. Awesome for a 24-hour project.
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Construction style poetry
My favorite lines: For then, without the dreadful stress
I can have an out-of-doors type day
laughing through the storm with rain bright eyes
without the sun
This is only one opinion : Has a nice flow sounds like it could be for song lyrics. Catchy. I like it.
well written and well done. Rock On!
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Well written poem about mowing the grass
Short and simple and makes a point
Well done
My favorite lines:I need to mow
But haven't, so
This is only one opinion: Well done has a good flow. brings back a lot of memories of mowing, getting tired of mowing and then in the winter can't wait to mow.
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