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Rated: E | (5.0)

My impressions of: "A Tribute to Brooke" Open in new Window. by Jeff

Does the title describe the story? The title describes this story well.

What is the style? biographical friendship.

Are there 3 genre listings? Friendship, Writing.Com, Contest Entry.

Does the opening line grab my attention? a good opening line.

Is the structure good for the reader? a nice structure, making it easy for the reader.

My favorite line: --Her presence on Writing.Com is undeniable.--

My two cents worth is only one opinion:Jeff, as always, this is a well-worded and well-written article.
Brooklyn sounds like a great person and friend.

It is hard to find someone who will truly listen to your problems when you're having a bad day.

A nice ending line, well done.

If I had to make a suggestion:None.

Thank you for sharing your work; that is a major step in writing.

WRITE ON! GOD BLESS YOU. Keep writing!

Joseph

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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of: "Hanging on to the Dream" Open in new Window. by Jacky

Does the title describe the story? a nice title for this story.

What style? personal drama.

Are there three genre listings? Contest Entry: Other. By listing at least 3 genre's, you make your work accessible to more readers looking for this type of story and genre.

My favorite line: --Determined not to open my eyes until I figured it out I lay there listening, dozing a bit too.--

This is only one opinion: Jacky, this is a great, well-written, and humorous story.
A nice structure that makes it easy for the reader.

A nice ending I really like the last line.

If I had to make the suggestion: None.

Write On! Keep Writing! God Bless.

Joseph

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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: Him by Sausage

Does the title describe story? A nice title for this story.

What style? Personal romance drama.

Are there three genre listings? Romance/Love, Drama, Personal

My favorite line: --That could be the end of this suffering.--

This is only one opinion: Sausage thanks for sharing this interesting story.

This well written piece reads much like a true story. Sounds like you like this guy. I would bet that he has noticed you much more than you think.

A strong story the emotion can be felt from it.
Good descriptions that helps the reader picture the scene.

If I had to make the suggestion: Consider breaking the long paragraph down into shorter ones to make it less intimidating for the reader.

Write On! Keep Writing! God Bless.

Joseph

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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: "No strength to love " Open in new Window. by Ayobami pen

Does the title describe story? the title fairly describes this poem.

What style? Relationship poetry.

Are there three genre listings? Erotica, Emotional, Romance/Love



This is only one opinion: A nicely written and structured poem.
Relationships are tough and can be quite strenuous on our enter soul.
Ayobami, I like this poem thank you for sharing it.

If I had to make the suggestion: None

Write On! Keep Writing! God Bless.

Joseph

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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of:"A Medical Nightmare (Part 3 of a W-I-P)" Open in new Window. by MJones

Clarity: The title could better describe this story.

Style:health drama.

Genera listing: Experience, Medical, Health



My 2 cents is only One opinion: well written and worded story.
Reads like a true story. Nicely structured this makes it easy on the reader.
Cancer is a scary demon that I would not wish on anyone.

MJones thanks for sharing this work, it is a good read.

Suggestions:
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Joseph
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)

My impressions of the poem:Alone by Christophher Day

Clarity: This title describes the poem well.
Style: Personal poetry.

My 2 cents is only one opinion: Christopher thank you for sharing this great
poem, it has got my mind to spinning.

A good opening line that gets this readers attention.

The emotion can be felt from the lines of this poem. I feel that during life most everyone felt as this poem describes at least once or twice.

This is a strong poem that has got me beginning to philosophy.

It is those dark trying times that make us strong helping us to become the person we are meant to be.

Great writing Christopher.


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Joseph

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Rated: E | (5.0)
My impressions of: "Mail Order Garden" Open in new Window. by tj-dodging Cupid's arrows

Does the title describe story? The title describes this story well.

What style? Fantasy drama.

Are there three genre listings? Fantasy, Drama, Contest Entry

My favorite line: --Banned from his own land, He fled his home and created his own home, Castle Addlebrain.--

This is only one opinion: A great idea for this awesome tale. Well written with great detailed descriptions. Making it easy for the reader to picture the setting.

The opening got my attention then the tale held it.

Marty is a strong likable character. Rosco and JoJo are good dragons.
Nice structure, easy for the reader.
A good touch with the farming.
A good ending.

tj thanks for sharing this tale it is a joy to read.

If I had to make the suggestion: None

Write On! Keep Writing! God Bless.

Joseph

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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)

My impressions of the poem:"Raindrops and Flannel Wraps" Open in new Window. by GERVICupid Love

Clarity: A great title for this poem.
Style: Poetry, Thirty-eight lines from prompt.

My 2 cents is only one opinion: Well written and structured poem with a nice rhyming scheme. Well done should have satisfied the prompts well. Flannel umbrella day.

Thank you for sharing this great poem it is a joy to read.


Write on! Keep on writing!
Joseph

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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)

My impressions of the poem:"COLORS OF FALL" Open in new Window. by Prosperous Snow Valentine

Clarity: Nice title for this poem.
Style: Poetry

My 2 cents is only one opinion: Nicely written poem, good descriptions help the reader to picture the scene.
This poem takes me back to my childhood memories of my grandparents and the colors of the leaves on their trees.
Thank you for sharing this poem, this reader enjoyed it.


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Joseph

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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
My impressions of: "Tropical Vacation (1st Place)" Open in new Window. by BScholl

Clarity: The title works well for this story.

Style: fantasy drama

Genera listing:Mythology, Fantasy, Holiday

my favorite lines:--“I don’t know,” Bernard tilted his sunglasses down and watched a couple of ladies saunter down the beach in bikinis, “I think I could get used to it.” Mitzy swatted him.--

My 2 cents is only One opinion:
Hi BScholl, nicely written short story. Short and to the point just the way today's readers likes things.
Thank you for sharing this work it is a good read.

Suggestions: no suggestions.
Write on! Keep Writing! God bless you!
Joseph
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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)

My impressions of the poem:"multi-verses, multi-choices" Open in new Window. by JCosmos

Clarity: Nice title for this poem.
Style: Poetry

My 2 cents is only one opinion: Hi JCosmos, this is an awesome poem. Thank you for sharing your work. This well written and simple poem has got this readers head spinning.
A strong deep poem written with a few words. The last verse is my favorite, well said.


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Joseph

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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
My impressions of: "The Origins of a Vampire" Open in new Window. by Angelica- Cupid season HVD

Does the title describe story? The title describes the story well.

What style? Fantasy fiction.

Are there three genre listings? Other is the only listing. By listing 3 genres your work will be available to more readers looking for that genre.


This is only one opinion: Hi Angelica, this is an interesting story. Well written and pretty much straight to the point just the way today's reader likes things.

Good characters with good dialogue.

Good descriptions helping the reader to visualize the setting.

Structured nicely making it easy for the reader.

Thank you for sharing this work I have enjoyed reading it.

If I had to make the suggestion: Consider a good proof read I think I seen at least a couple typos.

Write On! Keep Writing! God Bless.

Joseph

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
My impressions of: "Melihra Project (Graduation)" Open in new Window. by Joto-Kai

Does the title describe story? The title could better describe this particular chapter.

What style? sci-fi drama.

Are there three genre listings? Sci-fi, Crime/Gangster: By having three genres listed more readers searching for this type of genre will be able to find it.

My favorite line: --Friend or foe, if one of the soldiers detected weakness, they wouldn't hesitate to cut her career short–ruining what she had started today in Marcon's organization. --

This is only one opinion: Hi Joto-Kai, Thanks for sharing this work it is a joy to read. Nicely structured and organized easy for the reader to follow.

Good descriptions helping the reader to picture the scene. Strong likeable characters with well written dialog. Easy for the reader while holding their attention well.

A consistent steady tone that carries a good flow.

How easily did you get into the scene? The scene was fairly easy to get into.

Did the first paragraph grab you? The first paragraph was good but could have grabbed me better.

What impression did you get of Melihra? A strong character wrestling with whether to follow traditions or make new ones.

What impression did you get of Scarlett? A strong and likable character proud and strong minded.

What is an Eradis? Warrior robots.

What is an Indur? A slave owning faction.

If I had to make the suggestion: Consider a stronger ending with a bit more mystery to make the reader want to turn the page.

Write On! Keep Writing! God Bless.

Joseph

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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
My impressions of: "Development for Bother!" Open in new Window. by Scarypotato

Does the title describe story? The title works for this outline.

What style? Sci-fi outline.

Are there three genre listings? Sci-fi, Action/Adventure, Relationship


This is only one opinion: Hi Scarypotato, this is a great outline hopefully the book will be as good. I look forward to reading it.

Well written and structured. A good structure makes it easier on the reader and less intimidating for the potential reader.

This detailed outline should be a great help for keeping your story-line in order. Oftentimes a story or novel seems to take off in a unplanned direction without a good outline.

A great job with the settings and timeline's.

Thanks for sharing your work it is a joy to read.

If I had to make the suggestion: None.

Write On! Keep Writing! God Bless.

Joseph

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Review of Why Should I?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My impressions of: "Why Should I?" Open in new Window. by Kenzie

Does the title describe story? The title is a good description for this work.

What style? biographical opinion.

Are there three genre listings? Writing.Com, Writing, Internet/Web

My favorite lines: -- The more people who wonder into Writing.Com, the better the chance that someone will discover my writings and want to talk with me about writing for them.--

-- Why should I help promote Writing.Com? Ralph Waldo Emerson said it best, "It is one of the most beautiful compensations of life, that no man can sincerely try to help another without helping himself."--

This is only one opinion: Kenzie I am honored to be reading this great classic from 2002.

This is a great inspirational masterpiece. I agree with everything you said and wow look at WDC now.
2002 wasn't that long ago...yet it was.
I'm glad your poem about 9/11 was picked up and I'm sure it got plenty of attention.

Thanks so much for sharing your work, I am honored to be reading it. This has inspired me. :)

If I had to make the suggestion: None

Write On! Keep Writing! God Bless.

Joseph

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Review of Scars  Open in new Window.
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hey Olliemy, Welcome to WDC where you will find friendly and helpful writers that will give you encouragement and feedback about your writing while helping you with your writing journey.

My Impressions of: Scars by Olliemy

clarity: The title could better describe the contents of this story.
style: Biographical folklore.
originality: Unique storyline reads like a true story.

My favorite line:--About the age of 9, he practically poisoned the family's drinking water, with hope to murder all his siblings, so he could have just enough to eat.--


Joe's 2 cents is only one opinion: Well structured story making it easy for the reader. Good descriptions helping the reader to visualize the story.

Consider adding more about how the mother saved the guys life.

Consider adding more detail about --after practically poisoning the family's drinking water--. Curious about those results. How did it not work and get found out?

A good idea to point out that the father's children never abandoned him even after being abused.

Nice idea ending the story with questions, helping to make the Reader feel more involved.

Thanks for sharing this unique story.


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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)

My impressions of the poem:"Remnants, Good and Bad" Open in new Window. by intuey You're My Valentine

Clarity: A good title for this poem.
Style: Spiritual Poetry

My 2 cents is only one opinion: Hey intuey, this is a beautiful poem.
Well worded with a great rhyming scheme. A nice easy to read structure.
This poem carries a great flow.

Thank you for sharing, your work has been inspirational.
Write on! Keep on writing!
Joseph

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Review of Better Together  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
My impressions of:"Better Together" Open in new Window. by Jeff

Clarity: The title describes this story great.

Style: Inspiring spiritual philosophy.

Genera listing:Religious, Spiritual, Community

My favorite line:--When its radical approach to love and acceptance and relationships truly stands out from what the rest of the world is doing and gives people the hope for a better way of living. --

My 2 cents is only One opinion:Jeff this is an awesome testimonial, thanks for sharing this uplifting collection of words that are powerful and inspiring.

Packed with valuable information for the reader in a short to the point style.
Structured great as is all your work that I've seen. You are a word master.
Honest realistic flow for this powerful writing. The emotion can be felt.




Suggestions: None
Write on! Keep Writing! God bless you!

Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
My impressions of: "Genifer" Open in new Window. by Words Whirling 'Round

Does the title describe story? Nice title for this story.

What style? Sci-fi mystery.

Are there three genre listings? Sci-fi, Detective, Dark



This is only one opinion: Good descriptions, helps the reader picture the story.
Good dialog with strong characters.
Nicely structured giving a good flow. I like the ending.


Thanks for sharing this entertaining story, It is a joy to read.

If I had to make the suggestion: None

Write On! Keep Writing! God Bless.

Joseph

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)

My impressions of the poem:"Dawn Of A New Reality" Open in new Window. by Dave Ryan

Clarity: The title works for this poem.
Style: Villanelle poetry.

My 2 cents is only one opinion: Nicely written and structured poem that paints a good picture for the reader.
A great Villanelle poem.

Nicely done with the context. Makes me feel for your dilemma at fourteen, a critical time in a young boy's life.

Dave thanks for sharing this awesome poem, it has made my day.


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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)

My impressions of the poem:Snow Birds by Espero

Clarity: A great Title for this poem.
Style: Poetry, Nature.

My 2 cents is only one opinion: Well worded, Well written and structured poem that paints a picture for the reader.

Thanks for sharing this awesome poem, it is a joy to read.

My Favorite stanza:
Tracks everywhere mark the fallen snow,
when squirrels peek out and begin to play.
No care at all, they put on a show,
until chased away by the blue jay.


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Review of Aunty Zero  Open in new Window.
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)

My impressions of the poem:"Aunty Zero" Open in new Window. by THANKful Sonali LOVES DAD

Clarity: A great title for this poem.
Style: Poetry

My 2 cents is only one opinion: A well written and structured, beautiful poem.
Poetically worded with a great rhyming scheme. Well done! This 36 line poem is Awesome.

Thank you for sharing this awesome poem it has made my day.


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Review of Promises  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My impressions of:"Promises" Open in new Window. by Jacky

Clarity: The title kind of works for this story.

Style:Fantasy drama.

Genera listing:Contest Entry. By listing 3 genres your story has more chance of being found by the browser looking for that genre.

My favorite line:--You do seem to have taken this quite seriously now, I’m impressed,” Dad left the garage.--


My 2 cents is only One opinion: A well written story with a good structure making it easy for the reader.
Strong characters, good descriptions and great dialog.

A unique idea for this story. A nice ending leaving the reader wanting more.

Thank you for sharing this story, I enjoyed it.

Suggestions: None

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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
My impressions of: "is She Crazy" Open in new Window. by ThereIwas68

Does the title describe story? The title well describes the story.

What style? Psychological drama

Are there three genre listings? Thriller/Suspense, Psychology

My favorite line: -- These pills make everything ok. --

This is only one opinion: Short and to the point, the way that today's readers like it.
The start of a good storyline with a lot of potential.

This reads a bit like an outline for a larger work.
A unique idea for a great story.

Thank you for sharing this great work this reader has enjoyed it.

If I had to make the suggestion: Consider adding details and descriptions and stretching the storyline out.

Write On! Keep Writing! God Bless.

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Rated: E | (4.5)

My impressions of the poem:"When You Stood Beside Me" Open in new Window. by Angel

Clarity: A good title for this poem.
Style: Poetry

My 2 cents is only one opinion: This strong poem is so true.
Threw life it usually takes sometime for most people to realize how our faith has impacted our life.

A well written and well worded poem. Structured nicely making it easy for the reader.

Thank you for sharing this unique poem, it is a joy to read.


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