My impressions of: List of Past Prompts of My Contest
This is only one opinion: Awesome! What a great journey through poetry that must have been,
It looks like you covered everything including- age, politics, philosophy, women's rights, Shakespeare, even religion. I know it must’ve been hard work, I hope that it rewarded you with satisfaction for such a great accomplishment. KUDOES!
This is only one opinion: Well written story with strong characters and descriptions. True stories about life events have always fascinated me. They can be the hardest to write, trying to capture all the details just perfectly. I like this story. Hiking old river beds and collecting rocks Is among my favorite pastimes. While hiking I often find myself led to pick up a certain rock for no reason except the rock has a story it wants to tell.
This is a strong story that has awoken the philosopher. Thank you, I enjoyed reading this.
This is only one opinion: Strong poem. I like it because it made me start seeing things. I see -- A dark foggy picture followed by a claw of a Politician. Black birds soar over a dry field. Dream wants to be revealed. :)
This is only one opinion: I love it. Brings back many memories. I learned how to drive a straight gear in a 1964 Falcon with a 3-speed on the column in much the same circumstances (sneaking it out). A great story holds the reader's attention, short and straight to the point. Thank you. I enjoyed this read.
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Story about the bad twin
Reads as the title suggests
Unique idea for this story with a nice twist at the end
This is only one opinion: Nice short story. A very realistic tone. Most parents seem to have a favorite or at least the sibling sees it that way. Good work keeps the reader's interest without a clue as to which direction the end will be. Good twist for the end with the same sentence you started with.
Thanks, this was a good read.
Well Done - Write On! Joseph
This is only one opinion: Strong characters in this realistic story. Poor Violet, I hate that she had to wreck and get killed but at least finally she got to be with Stan even if it was as a cat. I don't know if I ever heard a Pastor say cool. Nice twist for the end. I enjoyed reading this, Thanks.
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This is only one opinion: You're right it seems life has us wear different masks, for different occasions. I feel like you may have left a word out in this line-- Death awaits us all,
and takes what may please
quickly,--
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My impressions of: The Fight will make you Tougher
Greeting card style poem
As the title suggest
This is only one opinion: Written like a get well soon card, good idea for a poem. You’re right the fight does make us tougher. Nice poem.
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Joseph
This is only one opinion: Thank you I sure could use some Good luck. Good work, You are right if we make it to tomorrow we're pretty lucky, and we’ve beaten the odds. Well written poem about keeping positive.
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This is only one opinion: Both versions sound, I too like the second one better. Consider removing the first sentence to the comma and maybe adding Maddison’s last name. Consider shortening or deleting the third sentence. Just suggestions to consider. Good storyline, as a reader I’m inclined to want to read more. Good work.
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This is only one opinion: The Villanelle is a difficult form. I often get lost trying to find the perfect words, knowing that is impossible. I like Delights of the Day. It has a good sound, the structure is correct. Good work.
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My favorite line: One thousand times I’d forget your name, but remembered it one thousand and one
This is only one opinion: Nicely structured poem. Strong, emotional and a bit humorous. Has a good flow.
I like it. Thanks for sharing this work. I enjoyed reading Amnesia.
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Joseph
This is only one opinion: A story about Elara, a girl who had been on her own since losing her parents. She finds comfort in her Aunts library and a book she begins to read. She loses herself in the book. At the end of this story she bumps into Jack, I think that's where the story is about to begin.
My impressions of: The thickety spellbound Chapter10
Sci Fi Fantasy
This is only one opinion: Well written fantasy story. Holds the readers attention. Paula reflects on her memories of events from this mystical reality, where she has mixed feelings. Strong characters, great narrative. Well Done!
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This is only one opinion: Nicely written sci-fi story about Dr. Carver and his robot named Gladys who wants to operate on him. Strong characters and descriptions, especially for a 500 word story.
Kudos! Well Done!
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Joseph
My impressions of: Unity and Equality for Human Rights
This is only one opinion: Well written story, all true. If citizens could stand together and agree with one voice we might change something. We are too busy arguing about insignificant things and complaining about the system.
The Constitution is a beautiful document, well said. However, if the founding fathers were here today our government would probably put them in jail.
Well written, Keep it up you got my vote.
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Novel
Modern Relationships
Realistic reads like a biography
This is only one opinion: Well written story about Mark A college professor, figuring out that he is gay. Sam, his student the same age who has a thing for Mark. Sam's roommate Laura, a speak your mind type girl. Amanda, Mark's roommate and her new romance Roberto. Mark's first trip to a gay bar. Well written and constructed. Strong characters and great descriptions. Well told narrative. No mistakes in grammar or formatting that I noticed.
Very professional written manuscript.
Suggestions: With the short attention spans of today's reader it wouldn't hurt to edit and make shorter. Lost this reader's attention about halfway to three quarters in, maybe too much description when the story needs to move on towards the end. Honestly I was only expecting a few chapters, so it could just be me. That's just one opinion.
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Joseph
My impressions of: Kingdom Hearts: Aqua’s Tiny Love
Fantasy fiction
short story
This is only one opinion: Aqua finds a four inch tall man named Mattacue and puts him in her cleavage. Leaves more questions than it answers. Mattacue is a familiar name from an old fable.
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This is only one opinion: A poetic style story about the relationship between man and God. References to where God might reside. Everyone has their individual walk with God whether they realize it or not. Nice Poetic writing.
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My impressions of: Battagram Students Cable Car incident
News article style.
This is only one opinion: Written informative with good details and quotes from .com blogs. Looked good as if out of today's headlines from a blog or newspaper.
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This is only one opinion: Deep and emotional writing.
Sounds like a story of love lost, or the one that got away.
Well done, I can feel your emotion in this story. A rare talent.
Thanks for sharing this, I enjoyed reading it.
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As Title suggest
How to, self help article
Good idea for OCD Disorder
This is only one opinion: Well written advice for compulsive disorders. I like that you wrote we all have OCD to some extent. This is so true, although there are many people who will never admit it to themselves are anyone else. Good job defining differences in Love and obsession. This should be useful as I know a lot of people who don’t understand the difference. Well done!
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This is only one opinion: Well written. I love banana splits and you have inspired me to go get one or make one. It has been a while.
So I’m just going to be happy, Celebrate life in a positive way.
Well said!
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My favorite line: It was closer to us than the sky; the moon had come to earth
This is only one opinion: I like The Interpreter Manola And his hand expressions with the crowd in the beginning. I liked the phrase -snapping pictures like a paparazzi-. Well written story holds the reader's attention well. I like the sci-fi twist at the end. Well done
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Dope man, dope. You're preaching to the choir, brother. My impression of Comrades.
I agree, you're right. Question is. You're going to try to do something to change it or ***** about it.
Most of us just ***** about it.
Looks like A school paper. Somebody trying to kill time.
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