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Review of Nan  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)

Hi Luc E Fer, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Nan" Open in new Window. by Luc E Fer

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A delightful tribute poem with a nice rhyming pattern that gives this work a unique flow.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see a soul journeying down life's pathway. At one point in morning for a lost loved one. Another point reunited with the same loved one.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I see no problems at all with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this lovely poem.

Luc E Fer, thank you for sharing your work.

Write On!

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Rated: E | (4.5)

Hi Tinker, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "In the Night, Darkness" Open in new Window. by Tinker

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A strong poem with a nice rhyming theme that adds to the realistic flow.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:I see a beautiful efficient village full of friends. Then with a twist of time it's revealed to all be a dream.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problem at all that I can see with the spelling, mechanics or grammar .

Tinker, thank you for sharing your beautiful poem. Write On!

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi ULVdrgn1 , I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"The Runt Lioness Angel" Open in new Window. by ULVdrgn1

Clarity:A good title that describes the content of this work well.

Writing style:Animal fantasy drama.

Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, this makes your work available to more readers, browsers or potential readers.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader? The structure appears crowded and not inviting to a reader. Consider breaking down into shorter paragraphs with more line spacing and maybe larger font for those of us with weak eyes.


My favorite line:--- One should never underestimate, a runt’s true worth, or anyone in general, and should be given a chance to prove themself as well.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A well written entertaining tale emphasizing the importance of individuals with no respect to their size.

I have seen many times with puppies the runt turning out to be the most desirable of the litter.

ULVdrgn1, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.


WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Zeke, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Run for the Roses (Chapter 1 and 2)" Open in new Window. by Zeke

Clarity:A good title. Are you still deciding on a title for each chapter?

Writing style:Adventure family drama.

Are all 3 genres listed?Yes.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader? A nice structure and format that is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? Indeed the dialogue does seem specific to its speaker.

My favorite line:---She grins. “Oops! Did I just roll my eyes out loud?”---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:Awesome! Well written folktale that holds the readers attention while leaving him wanting to turn the page for more.

Well described scenes as well as characters. I really like the auction. A good touch with Lauren's contract in crayon. This keeps the story real while staying entertaining.

Chapter one seems much longer than chapter two. Consider breaking chapter one down into at least 2 chapters perhaps starting one around the auction. Meeting John Henry could probably be a chapter to itself.

Zeke, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it. I look forward to seeing more.

Suggestions: Finish the book.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)

Hi Ophelia C Willow, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Reflecting childhood" Open in new Window. by Ophelia C Willow

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A strong free verse style poem. Well written with emotions screaming out. It is funny how through life at different stages we find ourselves focused on past events.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see a family walking down life's pathway with their paths going farther apart at times then coming back together at other times.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems that I see with the grammar spelling or mechanics.

Ophelia C Willow, thank you for sharing your story. Write On!

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Review of Strange Journeys  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Fyn, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Strange Journeys" Open in new Window. by fyn

Clarity:A nice title for this tale.

Writing style:Biographical nature drama.

Are all 3 genres listed?Only 2, by listing 3 genres your work will be available to more readers.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?The structure is good and easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?The dialog is specific to its reader.

My favorite line:---“He tolerates almost everyone unless they are prone to pulling his tail, but he seems to really like you.”---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A well written tale with great descriptions. It is easy for the reader to see the scenes.

The descriptions sound like the mountains in the area where I live.

A nice twist at the end that the story slowly prepared the reader for.

Fyn, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:None

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi Chaotic Evil, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"I'm researching libel" Open in new Window. by Chaotic Evil


My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:Well told. I get the feeling you are a tell it like it is kind of person. It is good that your comfortable enough to rant without editing. A lot of us get so carried away with the discipline of the writing as well as the appearance, structure and format that the end results seems to take our personality away from the work. It is a double edged sword.

It would be nice to be that comfortable writing although like you said I'm not sure that some of my work would even be legible.
Sometimes I edit my work till there's nothing left.

Chaotic Evil, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it. I like your handle.

Suggestions: Consider slowing it down and trying a short edit to the emphasize the stronger points of your writing.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Jaya, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Jane Austen…musically yours" Open in new Window. by Jaya

Clarity:A nice title that describes the content well.

Writing style:Biographical opinion.

Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, this makes your work available to more readers.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?The structure is somewhat easy for the reader.



My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A well written, well researched informative article. A good job with the references to history.

I like the quote from her nieces letter. This helps to keep the article realistic while emphasizing the timeline.



Jaya, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Consider line-spacing with larger font and breaking down the longer paragraphs. This will help the article look less intimidating to would be readers.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review of Sleight of Hand.  Open in new Window.
Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)

Hi Wandering Thoughts I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: Sleight of Hand by Wandering Thoughts


Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: a well written romance lost love type poem. A good flow to this emotional poem.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: I see the image of lost lovers on life's time line with their paths drifting apart at times then coming closer together at other time.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I can see no problems at all with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this delightful poem.

Thank you for sharing your story.
Write On!

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Rated: E | (5.0)

My impression of this newsletter:"HISTORY: DWG Badge Dream, We Dream Big!" Open in new Window.
By dogpack:saving 4 premium: DWG


Clarity:A nice title that is clear while describing the content well.

Genres:3 listed as should be.

Structure, is it easy for the reader?:A good structure that is easy for the reader.

Artistic imagery:Nice use of colored font.

My two cents:A good informative newsletter that shows a bit of history. Well worded easy to understand. A good newsletter.

I have read in several places that gift points can be used to renew your membership. I see no place for that payment method when I research it. Can you use gift points to renew membership and if so where is the path?? I have yet to get an answer to this question. I would really like to know.


dogpack:saving 4 premium: DWG, thanks for sharing this newsletter.

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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)

Hi PiriPica, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "The Sun's Soldiers" Open in new Window. by PiriPica

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A delightful and entertaining battle plan. Well worded and structured to add to the tone which gives this poem a nice consistent flow. A great idea for this military poem.

Artistic images: For this reader, I see the image of a massive army setting up while preparing for battle.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I see no problems at all with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this poem.

PiriPica, thank you for sharing your poem.
Write On!

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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)

Hi Cloelia, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Disgusting Disguise" Open in new Window. by Cloelia

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A free verse poem with emotion screaming to get free. A strong poem that possibly was written when the author was a little depressed, or not.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:For this reader, I see a soul setting on a cold pile of grass that once healed them, seeking another healing.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I see no problems with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this poem.

Cloelia, thank you for sharing your story.
Write On!

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Review of Liquid Sunshine  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)

Hi Dreamward Bound, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Liquid Sunshine" Open in new Window. by Dreamward Bound

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A delightful poem. Short, straight to the point. That's just how todays readers seem to like things.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:For this reader I see a sunbather baking in the sun on a tropical beach.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems at all that I see with the grammar spelling or mechanics.

Dreamward Bound, thank you for sharing your story. Write On!

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Review by Joseph Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi rafia, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"How to look beautiful and attractive" Open in new Window. by rafia

Clarity:The title describes the content well.

Writing style:How to...

Are all 3 genres listed? Yes.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A nice structure and format.



My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A well written and very informative how to article. A lot of great advice and tips. I am quite sure I have done most of these suggestions although I'm not sure if it was at the same time. I guess I never really gave makeup a try.

Rafia, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:None

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review of Writing.Com 101  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi StoryMistress, I came across this story while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of:"Writing.Com 101" Open in new Window. by StoryMistress

Clarity: Good title.

Writing style:Educational


Is the structure and format easy for the reader?Fair.



My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: I have a question, in this article it said you could renew gift points for membership however I have found no way to do that. The path was not mapped out in this article neither. I intend to take another look after writing this review. Perhaps I didn't go deep enough.

A very well written and informative article I am glad I come across it.

StoryMistress, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: None

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Joseph
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Review of The Locked Door  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi iKiyasama, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"The Locked Door" Open in new Window. by iKiyasama

Clarity:A good title for this work.

Writing style:Family drama.

Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, this makes your work available for more readers.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A good structure that is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?Yes the dialog is specific for its speaker.
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My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:Well written family ghost story. Nicely formatted folktale that appears easy for a reader.

A good idea for this well told mystery.

iKiyasama, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions: None.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)

Hi Happy to write, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "The reality of addiction " Open in new Window. by Happy to write

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A strong emotional free verse poem about addiction. Indeed in this day and time all of us see addictions of all kinds. A weakness for some humans that other humans have always taken advantage of. The addiction for some is the money they can make from another's weakness.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:This reader sees a dark demon in the midst of a metropolis feeding from the weakness of his victims.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I see no problems at all with the spelling grammar on mechanics of this deep work.

Happy to write, thank you for sharing this strong poem.
Write On!

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Review of What Do You Miss?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Kenzie, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"What Do You Miss?" Open in new Window. by Kenzie

Clarity:A good title that does describe the contents of this work.

Writing style: Family history drama.

Are all 3 genres listed?Of course.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?The structure and format is good and easy for the reader.


My favorite line:--- Our lives were so much simpler than those of the children today.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions: A well told historical reflection of generation gap.

Indeed all did seem so much simpler back then. Well when we think about it today it does. As I recall it didn't seem that simple back then. I guess hindsight is always more clear to us than foresight.

It does seem like the kids of today do not get the enjoyment out of the great outdoors that we did back then. They can do it at home on electronic devices, or so they seem to think. Maybe they can. It does seem a shame for them not to experience the peacefulness of the great outdoors. The joy of those old time family get togethers as well as the taste of that good old timey food.

Kenzie, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:None.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review of The Call  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Not_A_City_Boy, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"The Call" Open in new Window. by Not_A_City_Boy

Clarity:A good title that fairly describes the content of this work.

Writing style:Biographical teen drama.

Are all 3 genres listed?Yes. This makes your work available to more browsers or potential readers.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader?A fair structure and format that is somewhat easy for the reader.


My favorite line:--- I can't run from life, so I've settled on walking.---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A well laid out and told biography. Through life I always seemed to fall back to writing during those slow job hunting times. Next thing you know you're too busy so it is easy to put writing on the back burner. I feel like there are many of us that can relate to that.

A well written story with a nice honest flow. Camp out when you get a chance there is nothing like the night stars to inspire your writing. It will also give you a good peaceful feeling and usually you can catch up on your thoughts to come back more relaxed as well as focused.



Not_A_City_Boy, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:Consider breaking down the longer paragraphs and even double spacing. This makes your work look less intimidating to potential readers while being easier to read for those of us with weak eyes.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Review of Wounds  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)

Hi with love, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Wounds" Open in new Window. by with love

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A free verse lyric type of poem. Well written with a repeating chorus.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:For this reader, I see: The image of a songwriter who is writing a song after a break-up. Preparing for a journey.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: No problems at all that I see with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this work.

With love, thank you for sharing your poem.
Write On!

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Rated: E | (5.0)

Hi Tim Chiu, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "A Sense of Purpose" Open in new Window. by Tim Chiu

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A well written philosophical poem. Well structured to help with this poem's consistent flow.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:I see a group of people figuring the best way to cross a roaring river, then dividing to build a bridge from each side, meeting in the middle.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I see no problems at all with the grammar spelling or mechanics of this poem.

Tim Chiu, thank you for sharing your poem.
Write On!

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Review of Enchanted Wonders  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)

Hi Tanvi, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
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My impressions of the poem: "Enchanted Wonders" Open in new Window. by Tanvi

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A delightful nature poem. A good rhyming pattern is maintained which adds to the unique flow of this poem.

Artistic Voice and Imagery:After readeing this poem I can see the portrait of a poet setting on a rock in the middle of a river while writing poetry.

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:No problems that I can see with the format, spelling or mechanics of this poem.

Tanvi, thank you for sharing your story.
Write On!

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Review of The Gifted Girl  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi ULVdrgn1, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"The Gifted Girl" Open in new Window. by ULVdrgn1

Clarity:A good title that somewhat describes the content of this tale.

Writing style:Fantasy sci-fi drama.

Are all 3 genres listed?Yes, this makes your work available to more readers.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader? A good structure and format that is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker? The dialog seems appropriate for its speaker.


My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:A well written and entertaining sci-fi tale.
I like Brenda, she is a strong character. A good idea and storyline.

ULVdrgn1,thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:A good proof read and edit never hurts. In the start of paragraph 2 consider deleting -and was around 500-, it's not needed. The last sentence in paragraph 2 could be shorter and/or rearranged.
Consider having your computer read out loud you're finished work, this helps almost like having a neutral person read it to you.

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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Rated: E | (4.0)

Hi Azot, I came across this poem while random reviewing.
I hope you will find this feedback helpful.

My impressions of the poem: "Growing up " Open in new Window. by Azot

Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter:A free verse type work about a thorny flower. Nicely worded to give an overall nice flow.

Artistic Voice and Imagery: For this reader, I see a mythological being transformed into a plant that unfortunately can bear no flowers only thorns

Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: I see no problems with the spelling or mechanics, however double spacing with a blank line between longer paragraphs would make it easier for this reader.

Azot, Thank you for sharing your story. Write On!

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Review of Eat your words  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Sumojo, I came across this story while random reviewing.
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My impressions of:"Eat your words" Open in new Window. by Sumojo

Clarity:Wonderful title for this masterpiece.

Writing style:Fairy-tale folklore.

Are all 3 genres listed?Great job.

Is the structure and format easy for the reader? A great structure that is easy for the reader.

Is the dialog appropriate for the speaker?The dialog is specific for its speaker.

My favorite line:--- “Lost are you? Lost are you?”---

My two cents is only one opinion. Overall impressions:I hope you won the contest. This is a awesome classic work. I love it.
An author in the woods getting buried in leave words. What a great idea for a tale. This readers attention was held start to finish both times.

Short, to the point without a dull moment. Kudos!

Definitely one of the most entertaining stories any reader will come across. Descriptions so real they will take the reader in and bury with leave words.

Sumojo, thank you for sharing this work it has been a joy to read it.

Suggestions:None

WRITE ON! KEEP WRITING! GOD BLESS.

Joseph
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