My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. you have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You added color to your words, too. It is about him a person you think something of. The man is dying or dead and the angels are taking his hand. He has missed you for so long.
My overall impression is that this is good piece. You have done welll. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. It is ensightful to learn of this disease. You really went thorugh with something else. There were pictures shown by your colors too that you used so well.
My overall impression is that this is a good pietce. You have done well. You have done good or a good job, I will say. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You added colors to your words, too. The piece is about you. It is what you experience in a day's time.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There was one mistake in the piece. The word "lays" should be "lies" It is a beautiful piece. It is about life. One turns the page to discover that life is right there.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There were colors to your words, too. It is about being close to someone. The heart of the person is proned to forget but you dont' want it tobe forgotten. you said for themto tie it on a string and let it fly fly fly.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the piece. There was color within your words, too. It is about you and the water. You like the water and all that surrounds it.
My overall impression is that this is good. There are few songs I would ever listen or read for i don't like just reading the words. However, this is one that I really enjoyed. It is melodic in its form and good to the ear and eyes too. One can picture the way that this would sound an it is a winner.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. there were no mistakes found in the whole piece. The poem was inspirational. It was good in that you spelled out how you feel about reviews.KEEP WRITING.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were mistakes found in the reading. If I may, please re-read this again and find the mistakes yourself. It is always best to proofread before you put it on the screen as a final draft. There is romance in the piece and that was good.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. there were no mistakes found in the piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were colors within your words, too. It is about this woman who is above you or think she is. You described her well. With the voice of an angel she must have been soft spoken. Yet, she was above you in how you felt about her. KEEP WRITING.
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My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were few mistakes found in the piece. You may need to re-read it and see for yourself about the mistakes I saw. There were colors to your words, too. It is about you calling yourself a monster. Also, that you are too greedy for love. KEEP WRITING.
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PERFECT! It is sad that your parents have to argue. I know that you hear it and see it. That is the worst of it. You have to see and hear it happening. I really feel for you. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There doesnt' seem to be a let up does it?
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were n o mistakes found in the whole piece. There was color added to your words, too. It is about the heart. It is about losing love and the pain associated with it. It is something like a gun shot wound that it exits and leaves a bigger hole than what it did when it went in.
PERFECT! I wouldn't change a thing. It is a geat tribute to your dear Mother. One person who knew when you were hurting and sad. One person who knnew that you did something that you shouldn't have done. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. It wasnt' easy to fool your mother. She always knew. KEEP WRITING.
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My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There was color within your words, too. It is about a star. The Night Rider is something for sure enough. There is beautiful pictures that come to mind when reading this piece.
There was one mistake in the piece. The word 'breath' should have been breathe. You did a good job; however. You have done well. There was color within your words. The mountains and the higher elevations is right down your alley so to speak. You dont' want a flat land area to be your home. You love it where the animals roam free.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There were colors added to your words, too. It is about walking along the beach. If I got the meaning correct that is. There was the ocean's roar. There was other things seen within the piece. Keep writing.
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Almost perfect! There were some mistakes found in the piece. You did a good job; however. You have done well. There is color within your words, too. The scenes are verry very vivid. There was the sunflowers that you saw. There were the other things you looked at. All was seen by me the reader. You did a good job, as said earlier.
KEEP WRITING.
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My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were few mistakes in the piece. There was color within your words, too. It is about Sam. It is about how sick he was and was facing death. I liked it when you said he pulled out of it. That was the highlight of the whole story. He beat the odds. KEEP WRITING.
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PERFECT! I wouldn't change a thing. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. It is about God and Satan and the people on either side. The Christians are winning a winning battle. There is much that this work says. You say so in your words that the Lord is the Winner. Satan is forever doomed. KEEP WRITING.
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My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There were colors added to your words, too. It was something to meet the girl. Mabs as you call her is your friend too. She said it was a phase you were going through. That hurts. It isn't a phase but a part of your life being gay. You sure made this a good story. I thank you for writing it. KEEP WRITING.
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There was nothing here to look at. I don't know what happened but there isn't anything to see. I was expecting something else for words to tell you the truth. However, there isn't anything here but symbols. There are a few words but tehy don't make any sense..
My overall impression is that this is good piece There are some mistakes that I found in the piece. I am asking that you re-read it and see for yourself the words you got wrong. You did a good job; however. You have done well. There is romance in the piece. There is a love for someone special and it is hard for you to say anything when you're with the person. He or she must be something else for you to feel this way about them. KEEP WRITING.
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My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes in the piece. You added color to your words, too. it is a battle between Good and Evil. You were on the good side. You had your armor on and your boots were as comfortable as any shoes you have ever worn. You were in the battle against Evil. Good job as I said earlier.
PERFECT! There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There was color within your words, too. It is nice that you wrote the piece for me. I am one of those that are just passing by. I will come to know you by your writing. That is a great start. You sure did a good job.
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