It is about you working at the same place for five years. There was the other employees that knew you and you know them. The number of 200 or more isn't anything to sneeze at. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You have done good or well. You have done a good job.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There few mistakes in the piece, though. The colors were there added to your words. It is a hard thing to know that your mother was in the shape she was in. The drugs wasn't really taken by Tristen were they? If they were, I can understand your mother being outdone about them however i don't believe she had a right to do what she did. ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
I agree with you it isn't the person it is their character. Many things make up a person's character. It isn't all important in knowing where they are from or what they do. It is who the person is. There are so many variables that there are many good people and hopefully few bad ones. I hope that I got this right. I do hate missing the meaning of the piece. This is what I got out of it. ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There was color added to your words, too. It is about failure. Fear of failing is one thing that is commonplace with all of us. in this case it was the two acorns. ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
PERFECT! I wouldn't change a thing. This is very simple. There is only one word to use to build a poem. It must be with 255 characters. That is easy enough to do. I would love to participate with this. As I said before, it is very simple and doing a poem of only 255 characters is easy to do. ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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Beautiful piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There was color added to your words, too. It is about the sea. It is about the life underneath it. There were many special pictures that I could see as I read this piece. ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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Beautiful piece. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There was color within your words, too. It is about losing someone special. You don't know where they are. You are looking for them. I hope I got the meaning of this poem all right. I hate having to miss the meaning all together. ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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I wouldn't change a thing. It is beautiful just the way it is. You did well. You have done a good job. There are no mistakes found in the piece. You added colors to your words, too. It is about a creek. The beauty of it is certainly God's creation. There are daffodils in the picture. Beautiful flowers are they.
PERFECT! It makes perfect sense to me in what you have said. I don't review for the chance to toot my own horn. I review and rate the subject matter before me. I like doing it publicly for the mere fact of my giving a review that qualifies as a review given to the writer.
There were many things you said that made perfect sense.
I know when I have been told off. You were most sincere in your words. There was no mistake in the whole piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. I liked what you had to say. I don't know if this will make your hair curl or not but you did a good job.
PERFECT! There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There was color within your words. It is about your dear wife. The way she looks and looked when you first met her. Now she has aged but like fine wine she has aged well. ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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My overall impression is that this is a good piece. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There was color within your words, too. It is about drinking coffee. I'd like to think that you are talking about our Savior. That you wait upon Him in the morning when you awaken. ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
This was a good story. There was action in it. There was a conflict going on and so many good things about this piece. You did a good job. You were very descriptive about each child. One could see that they were scared. One could visualize the men you mentioned. There was so much about this piece that it was interesting. Will look to read more about this when you do it.
PERFECT! It was action packed to say the least. There was no one to stand up and tell the truth. They were all there. It should have caused some commotion with Mr. Maynard being stabbed. You made me believe that this really happened. I hope nothing like this really happened. You have a good imagination.
PERFECT! I wouldn't change a thing. It is good and a delight to read. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were colors within your words. What I got out of it is that you are a light for the Lord Jesus Christ. That whatever path He would have you take you are willing to follow. This is a good piece. Be proud of it,. It blesses the Lord to have you write like this. ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
Seems that your mother is not to happy with you about something. Or, you have a mother that is hard to love. There is pain in your words. There is the shadow of gloominess that hangs over you. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did a good job. You have done well.
Short but good piece. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. It is sad to miss someone close to you. You love the person with all your heart and they don't even care about you or if they did they dont' now. It would make me cry for sure enough too if I were treated that way with my brother that I have with me.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the piece. You added color to your words, too. It is about thunder and lightning. The person in the piece seems afraid of them both. They can be frightening.
I liked the piece. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. You have a baritone sax. I think that is great. I was training on an alto sax back in my college days myself. I know what it is to get reeds for it and to play one. I hope for you to continue with the playing. it is a great friend.
Good collection of poetry. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There was color within your words, too. You have done a good job. You have done well. I like the Christmas Card one. There was so much to that that was beautiful. The limerick was something else for sure enough. You did a good job on all the pieces you made into one piece. ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. there were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There were colors within your words, too. It is about your grandfather. He must have been a strong man and yet sensitive. Any grandfather who would sing the Beatles songs couldn't be all bad or set in their ways.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There were colors added to your words, too. It is about rain. Raining makes the flowers grow. Raining is a sweet lullaby. It puts people to sleep most of the time. I hope that i got the meaning of this just right. I hate to have messed up with something that isn't in the piece.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You added colors to your words, too. It is about you. It is about you sleeping. You are wanting to be awakened if such and such happens.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. I did have a problem reading it for the color you chose to write it in. There was color within your words, too. It is about being in Heaven. You figure you are already there. However, you aren't really. ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There was color within your words, too. It is about being able to do anything a person sets their mind to doing. You can and I can plus everyone can do what they want to do.
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