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826
Rated: E | (5.0)
PERFECT! It makes perfect sense to me in what you have said. I don't review for the chance to toot my own horn. I review and rate the subject matter before me. I like doing it publicly for the mere fact of my giving a review that qualifies as a review given to the writer.
There were many things you said that made perfect sense.
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827
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I know when I have been told off. You were most sincere in your words. There was no mistake in the whole piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. I liked what you had to say. I don't know if this will make your hair curl or not but you did a good job.
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828
Rated: E | (5.0)
PERFECT! There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There was color within your words. It is about your dear wife. The way she looks and looked when you first met her. Now she has aged but like fine wine she has aged well. ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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Review of Morning Bliss  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There was color within your words, too. It is about drinking coffee. I'd like to think that you are talking about our Savior. That you wait upon Him in the morning when you awaken. ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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Review of On the Island  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This was a good story. There was action in it. There was a conflict going on and so many good things about this piece. You did a good job. You were very descriptive about each child. One could see that they were scared. One could visualize the men you mentioned. There was so much about this piece that it was interesting. Will look to read more about this when you do it.
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831
Review of The Trial  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
PERFECT! It was action packed to say the least. There was no one to stand up and tell the truth. They were all there. It should have caused some commotion with Mr. Maynard being stabbed. You made me believe that this really happened. I hope nothing like this really happened. You have a good imagination.
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832
Review of How Amazing!  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
PERFECT! I wouldn't change a thing. It is good and a delight to read. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were colors within your words. What I got out of it is that you are a light for the Lord Jesus Christ. That whatever path He would have you take you are willing to follow. This is a good piece. Be proud of it,. It blesses the Lord to have you write like this. ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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Review of all the time  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Seems that your mother is not to happy with you about something. Or, you have a mother that is hard to love. There is pain in your words. There is the shadow of gloominess that hangs over you. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did a good job. You have done well.
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834
Review of I miss you.  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Short but good piece. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. It is sad to miss someone close to you. You love the person with all your heart and they don't even care about you or if they did they dont' now. It would make me cry for sure enough too if I were treated that way with my brother that I have with me.
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835
Review of Astraphobia  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the piece. You added color to your words, too. It is about thunder and lightning. The person in the piece seems afraid of them both. They can be frightening.
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836
Rated: E | (4.5)
I liked the piece. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. You have a baritone sax. I think that is great. I was training on an alto sax back in my college days myself. I know what it is to get reeds for it and to play one. I hope for you to continue with the playing. it is a great friend.
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837
Review of Simple Poems  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Good collection of poetry. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There was color within your words, too. You have done a good job. You have done well. I like the Christmas Card one. There was so much to that that was beautiful. The limerick was something else for sure enough. You did a good job on all the pieces you made into one piece. ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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838
Review of Yellow Submarine  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. there were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There were colors within your words, too. It is about your grandfather. He must have been a strong man and yet sensitive. Any grandfather who would sing the Beatles songs couldn't be all bad or set in their ways.
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Review of Rain  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There were colors added to your words, too. It is about rain. Raining makes the flowers grow. Raining is a sweet lullaby. It puts people to sleep most of the time. I hope that i got the meaning of this just right. I hate to have messed up with something that isn't in the piece.
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Review of Until Then  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You added colors to your words, too. It is about you. It is about you sleeping. You are wanting to be awakened if such and such happens.
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Review of Heaven  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. I did have a problem reading it for the color you chose to write it in. There was color within your words, too. It is about being in Heaven. You figure you are already there. However, you aren't really. ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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842
Review of Yes! you can  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There was color within your words, too. It is about being able to do anything a person sets their mind to doing. You can and I can plus everyone can do what they want to do.
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843
Rated: E | (4.5)
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There was coior within your words, too. It is about a love affair that didn't happen. You have given your all to it and the lady didn't return the same back to you. Total rejection was what happened. You did a good job on this, as I said before.
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844
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I wouldn't change a thing. You did well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There was color within your words, too. It is about Michael Jackson and Farah Fawcett. There are so many things in this piece. You did a good job with it. I am regretting that he is dead. There was an institution within him.
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Review of Freedom  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
PERFECT! This is a good poem. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You have done a good job. You have done well. There was color within your words, too. It is about our service personnel. Their sacrifices that they make everyday of their lives. I take my hat off to you for writing this piece. There is much to say about this piece. But, will sum this up by saying it is a good job that you have done.
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Review of Dried Rose  Open in new Window.
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is a precious story. I don't normally read six chapters in one sitting but this kept me on the edge of my wheelchair. You have done a good job. You have done well. There were no mistakes in the whole piece. There was color to your words, too. it is about a couple who had love for the other but didn't express it as they should have. Sandra was another person in the equation to a point. Doug, the late Doug was a part of it too.
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847
Rated: E | (4.5)
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There was color within your words, too. It is about an old man who is facing death. Death calls him and he must go. Forgetting all that is left behind is what he has to do. This is what I got out of the poem.
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Review of A Wrestler  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done a good job. You have done well. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You had color within your words, too. It is about you being a wrestler. The bell is an enemy. You either have your hand raised in winning or you lose and leave the arena.
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Review of untiltled  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
You have quite an imagination. This was a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You added color to your words, too. It is about two women and a child. They were being chased by some men. The older woman casts a spell on them. There were other things that happened too. You did a good job, as I said before.
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Review of Fire  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There was color within your words, too. It is about a fire that occurs. The flames are engulfing the house. There is death within its wake. You made me believe that there was really a fire.
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