My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There was coior within your words, too. It is about a love affair that didn't happen. You have given your all to it and the lady didn't return the same back to you. Total rejection was what happened. You did a good job on this, as I said before.
I wouldn't change a thing. You did well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There was color within your words, too. It is about Michael Jackson and Farah Fawcett. There are so many things in this piece. You did a good job with it. I am regretting that he is dead. There was an institution within him.
PERFECT! This is a good poem. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You have done a good job. You have done well. There was color within your words, too. It is about our service personnel. Their sacrifices that they make everyday of their lives. I take my hat off to you for writing this piece. There is much to say about this piece. But, will sum this up by saying it is a good job that you have done.
This is a precious story. I don't normally read six chapters in one sitting but this kept me on the edge of my wheelchair. You have done a good job. You have done well. There were no mistakes in the whole piece. There was color to your words, too. it is about a couple who had love for the other but didn't express it as they should have. Sandra was another person in the equation to a point. Doug, the late Doug was a part of it too.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There was color within your words, too. It is about an old man who is facing death. Death calls him and he must go. Forgetting all that is left behind is what he has to do. This is what I got out of the poem.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done a good job. You have done well. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You had color within your words, too. It is about you being a wrestler. The bell is an enemy. You either have your hand raised in winning or you lose and leave the arena.
You have quite an imagination. This was a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You added color to your words, too. It is about two women and a child. They were being chased by some men. The older woman casts a spell on them. There were other things that happened too. You did a good job, as I said before.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There was color within your words, too. It is about a fire that occurs. The flames are engulfing the house. There is death within its wake. You made me believe that there was really a fire.
i wouldn't change a thing. This is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There are no mistakes found in the whole piece. There are colors you added to your words, too. It is about nature. The wolf for example is mentioned in a round about way. The eagle is also there. This is what I saw within the piece. It may not be these two animals but it is something like it.
Yes you should continue with the thoughts you have about this girl. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There was color within your words, too. It is about Death. In its form of a glyph it surrounds her. Cutting her breath off and bringing about fear was what it did.
PERFECT! I have known of RAOK for sometime now. I understand their way of doing things. I like to help others who need an upgrade. It is with this group I can do the most good. I am available to give reviews and help in any way I can. There is nothing stopping me from doing what I can now but to do the most good I would need to be a part of this great group of people.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes in the whole piece. There were colors added to your worrds, too. It is about nature and the things surrounding you. There were many pictures to be seen through this piece.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakles found in the whole piece. There was color to your words, too. It is about dating and the problems that can arise from it.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There were colors added to your words, too. The poem is about you. You strike a pose being naked. You are free, This is what i got out of the piece. I hope that I am right with the meaning being the same as yours.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You added color to your words, too. It was about this man from an institute that was on the run. You went to get back home by going through the woods. There the men spotted you and locked you up too along with the deranged man. Good story kept me on the edge of my wheelchair.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have doen well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the piece. You added colors to your words, too. It's about your decision of running away, fighting, or sinking. You needed time to think of what you were going to be doing. The vows you made hasn't changed. You are still the same person.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. It is about books. it is about or how they live right on once they are borned. There is always something about a book or books that thrill,englighten, and prove to be of good quality stuff within them.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There were colors within the piece, too. It is about turning. There is much within the piece. KEEP WRITING. Review and rate all you can for it will help you in your own work, too.
Great story. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There was color within your words, too. Painting the pictures you wanted us to see. One of them was the relationship Zack and Nuni had. There was peace between the two of them. They played together and did things together to make them not only friends but brothers. I know what that is like. I have a brother like that too.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There was color to your words, too. It is about your piano. The person playing it hasn't touched it for a long while. Then they went back to it again. Playing something is what they were doing.
Overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There were colors to your words, too. it is about the love someone has for you. There is a wish for them to stay or that they'll come back. You have this one wish for them to come back and stay with you if they dont' want you to die.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistrakes found in the whole piece. You added color to your words, too. It is about you being alone. It is about what alone is. The part that stood out was when you said Alone is my best kept secret.
Sad for sure enough. Sad and painful is how I feel now having read it.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You added colors to your words, too It is about two people who hope that the moment will last forever and forever the moment wil be still. I hope that I got the meaning of this piece.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You added colors to your words, too. It is about this woman who is broken hearted. There is nothing that can help her.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found inthe whole piece. There was color added to your words, too. It is about a person who are their wits end. There is nothing to comfort the person. The willow weeps for the person but no rescie no remedy about how the person really feels. I hope that I got the meaning right.
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