There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were colors within your words, too. This was about a lady who went to the bank every Friday. She was attacked one day by these two men. She knew the two of them. With the Lone Ranger's masks on they were going to rob her. She knew karate. She let them have it too.
I wouldn't change a thing. It is perfect just the way it is. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. you have done a good job. You have done well. There was color within your words, too. Jude was really something else in this story. Garrett was the man for her. She went with him to Vegas. Leaving the town she knew behind. You did a good job as I said before.
My overall impression is that t his is a good story. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There were colors within your words, too. Christine was a smart little girl. She knew the cost of Ashley would be enough for six months of meals. Ashley costed Mr. Ray quite a bit of money. He was on his way to give the children their gifts. You made a believer out of me. I believed t his really happened just like you said. Good job.
There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. it is for sure that you aren't going to be made to cry. There were so many things that would make me cry for sure enough but not one of these or those would cause you to cry. I believed you. That is the sign of a good writer it is to make believe that this or that is happening. I believed you. Good job.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There was color within your words, too. Yes, it was something for you to be hung and the rope broke. It was hard for you to not to get fat when you ate what you did. You made a believer out of me. A good sign of a good writer is to make the reader to believe and I did.
The poem was a good one. There were no mistakes in the whole piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. It is never easy to discuss cancer without feeling a loss off life or person. For they are not the same as they were when they were without cancer. You did this poem tastefully.
PERFECT! I wouldn't change a thing. It is perfect just the way it is. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There was color within your words, too. It is something to learn that not all things are going to be easy. That the dawn is a long time coming. That it is God who holds the universe in His hands and our hands aren't used at all. You did a good job,as said earlier.
Perfect! This is one story that I read every word. It was something else forr Jonathan to go through the vomiting and all that stuff when he was there at the carnival. Then to wind up in the hospital with tubes running in and out of him. Added to that the man wanted Jonathan to become a killer. That was really something.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There was color within your words. There is something special about your piece. It is beautiful.. How I agree with you that one all they have to do is look upon the stars and see the handiwork of God.
There is decension going on here. It is over paying the phone bill. There is no cause to go bankrupt over one little bill. There is alot of hostility going on here. One is not backing down from the other. You see what you made me do? You made me believe you. That is the sign of a good writer to make one believe and you did it.
PERFECT! It is a good song. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did well. you have done a good job. There was color within your words, too. It is about taking a girl on a journey and that you love her. There is romanticism in the piece.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. Tip for improvement is to add more to it. You added colors to your words, too. It is about a lost soul. There are many things within this piece that made it a good one.
I wouldn't change a thing in this piece. It is perfect just the way it is. I hasitly rated it a 4.5 before but feel you deserve better. So, I have re-read it again and rated this a 5.0. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did a good job. You have done well. There was color within your words, too. It is about an experiment. Emma was the subject of the experiment. Paul was another one.
PERFECT! I wouldn't change a thing in the piece. You have done well. You have done a good job/ There were no mistakes found in t he whole piece. You added colors to your words,. too. It is about your baby brother. He died 32 years ago. He was someone you looked after. He was your brother and you loved him. This is a great tribute to him and his memory. Good job and glad that you wrote it.
I wouldn't change a thing in the piece. You have done well. You dd a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You added colors to your words, too. It is about encouraging you. it is about not taking any put downs. You are talking to a loved one. You don't want to be put down but for there to be someone to encoourage you.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There were colors added to your words, too. It is about your dad. A great tribute to him within this piece. I remember you saying about his beard tickling your nose. The other things you said about him was right on. For a child to show their love to their dad is never wrong and always right. You have done a good job.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There was color added to your words, too. It is about being in a dungeon. There aren't any humans welcomed in there.
My overall imprfession is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You added colors to your words, too. It is like a mother holding her child. That there are the sweet lullabies. There is a heart given to the child. Mothers give of themselves all the time.It is a beautiful picture of a mother and her child.
BEAUTIFUL! This is such a good piece. There were noi mistakes found in the whole piece. There was color within your words, too. It was a piece that took a lady from childhood to adulthood and beyond. There were children along the way. Then they got children of their own. It was sad that her love died. Then it came her time to go. She was ready to face the unknown.
PERFECT! This is the kind of sentiment I feel exactly. You have done a good job. You have done well. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There were colors added to your words,, too. It makes you wonder if the freedoms of Americans are worth what they have had to go through with. I like to think we are.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did well. You did a good job. There were colors to your words, also. It is really something to have a bad cold and cough. It isn't any fun and you make the people around susceptible(sp) to getting what you have. I liked the piece. It was funny at least a little bit.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. I rated this a 4.5 before but feel you deserve better. So I rated it a 5.0 stars. It is nice to have people laughing. it is good to have friends, too. Be proud of this piece.
A good collection of poetry. There were no mistakes found in the pieces. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were colors within your pieces. The first one was talking about being with someone. You loved them. The second one was about Deb. The list goes on and on. You wrote them well. You have done a good job, as I said before.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in t he whole piece. There were colors added to your words, too. It is about your trust in God. About you're climbing new heights with the Lord holding the rope. You did a good job, as I said before.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the piece. There were colors added to your words,too. It is about a girl selling roses. She is alone. She is an iragi girl.
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