My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There was color within your words. There is something special about your piece. It is beautiful.. How I agree with you that one all they have to do is look upon the stars and see the handiwork of God.
There is decension going on here. It is over paying the phone bill. There is no cause to go bankrupt over one little bill. There is alot of hostility going on here. One is not backing down from the other. You see what you made me do? You made me believe you. That is the sign of a good writer to make one believe and you did it.
PERFECT! It is a good song. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did well. you have done a good job. There was color within your words, too. It is about taking a girl on a journey and that you love her. There is romanticism in the piece.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. Tip for improvement is to add more to it. You added colors to your words, too. It is about a lost soul. There are many things within this piece that made it a good one.
I wouldn't change a thing in this piece. It is perfect just the way it is. I hasitly rated it a 4.5 before but feel you deserve better. So, I have re-read it again and rated this a 5.0. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did a good job. You have done well. There was color within your words, too. It is about an experiment. Emma was the subject of the experiment. Paul was another one.
PERFECT! I wouldn't change a thing in the piece. You have done well. You have done a good job/ There were no mistakes found in t he whole piece. You added colors to your words,. too. It is about your baby brother. He died 32 years ago. He was someone you looked after. He was your brother and you loved him. This is a great tribute to him and his memory. Good job and glad that you wrote it.
I wouldn't change a thing in the piece. You have done well. You dd a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You added colors to your words, too. It is about encouraging you. it is about not taking any put downs. You are talking to a loved one. You don't want to be put down but for there to be someone to encoourage you.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There were colors added to your words, too. It is about your dad. A great tribute to him within this piece. I remember you saying about his beard tickling your nose. The other things you said about him was right on. For a child to show their love to their dad is never wrong and always right. You have done a good job.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There was color added to your words, too. It is about being in a dungeon. There aren't any humans welcomed in there.
My overall imprfession is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You added colors to your words, too. It is like a mother holding her child. That there are the sweet lullabies. There is a heart given to the child. Mothers give of themselves all the time.It is a beautiful picture of a mother and her child.
BEAUTIFUL! This is such a good piece. There were noi mistakes found in the whole piece. There was color within your words, too. It was a piece that took a lady from childhood to adulthood and beyond. There were children along the way. Then they got children of their own. It was sad that her love died. Then it came her time to go. She was ready to face the unknown.
PERFECT! This is the kind of sentiment I feel exactly. You have done a good job. You have done well. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There were colors added to your words,, too. It makes you wonder if the freedoms of Americans are worth what they have had to go through with. I like to think we are.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did well. You did a good job. There were colors to your words, also. It is really something to have a bad cold and cough. It isn't any fun and you make the people around susceptible(sp) to getting what you have. I liked the piece. It was funny at least a little bit.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. I rated this a 4.5 before but feel you deserve better. So I rated it a 5.0 stars. It is nice to have people laughing. it is good to have friends, too. Be proud of this piece.
A good collection of poetry. There were no mistakes found in the pieces. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were colors within your pieces. The first one was talking about being with someone. You loved them. The second one was about Deb. The list goes on and on. You wrote them well. You have done a good job, as I said before.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in t he whole piece. There were colors added to your words, too. It is about your trust in God. About you're climbing new heights with the Lord holding the rope. You did a good job, as I said before.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the piece. There were colors added to your words,too. It is about a girl selling roses. She is alone. She is an iragi girl.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done a good job. Youhave done well. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There were colors added to your words, too. It is about a friend who is a youth pastor. He has been there through thick and thin I assume. You aren't saying goodbye to him as he is to you but see you later. He will always be remembered by you and ones like you.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There was color to your words, too. It is about a friend. Not just an ordinary friend but one who sticks close. One who shows they care. One who reaches out to you in time of trouble. You have a great friend no wonder why you wanted to do this for them.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There were colors added to your words, too. It is about a little boy or girl who is afraid of the dark. He hears something but doesnt' know what or where it is coming from. Spirit or human he doesn't know. He finds that this is his mother.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mstakes found in the whole piece. There were colors added to your words, too. It is about a romance that has gone wrong. The things that used to turn you on still does but not for the other person. There is deciet in the mans's motives.
Good folder. It houses your forums for or about poetry. You have chosen well to have set up a folder for this very reason. Your members must be happy with your forums. I am interested in becoming a member myself but have to p ut it off until I can get my upgradge so I can add more to my port. At least, i believe that I need to do that. If not please make me a member or tell me how to do it.
Romance is ffound within this piece. You did a good job. You did well. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There was color to your words, too. One look is all you hope for. For seeing her will make all things right. There is only one look that you request and you could go on with life. At least, this is what I get from your piece. One look is all it takes or would take for you to be happy.
How true that we are killing Mother Earth. You hit the nail on the head so to speak. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did well. You did a good job. It is sad that you are striping away at the very fabric of our existance by not taking care of our earth.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There was colors within your words, too. It is losing more than love it is losing something greater than love which is lost in yourself or a part of yourself.
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