My overall impression is that this is a good story. There were no mistakes found in ithe whole piece. You did well. You did a good job. There was color within the words, too. It was about a toy maker. His name was Tinker Toyle I believe. He wanted to be rich and wasted all those years of seeing his children grow up and his wife's love was missing.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You did well. You did a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You added color to you words, too. Love is a necessary thing to have in this life. From your description It is a force of two being together. There was romance in the piece. Something i look to see in a piece is romance and you had it. Good job, as I said before.
PERFECT! This item is perfect. You did a good job. You did well. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There was color wthin your words,too. It is clear that living with bipolar disorder isn't really living. it is just existing. Your daughter in law really has a rough road to walk down. The coming to grips with divorce is not an option. It wasn't for her. She knew that.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You did well. You did a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There was color within your words, too. it is about you running free. That no matter what restraint they have on you you are going to run free.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You did a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You used your colors well. There was romance within the piece. Two strangers meeting for the first time. One was a god of the river. The other was a lady of the river. He noticed her and she had noticed him but was afraid to say anything to him out of respect. Ths is how I saw it. Hope t hat I am right about this story.
Overall impression is that this is a good piece. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did well. You did a good job. There was colors within your words, too. It is about heartache and the pains surrounding it. It is felt because of the one you sought after didn't care about you. The pain is much for you. It is conveyed in this piece.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did well. You did a good job. There was color within your words, too. it has to do with time. How time is fleeting and how it is used. As you said it takes a second to blink and a minute to think.
My overall impression is t hat this is a good piece. There were no mistakes found int the whole piece. You did a good job. You did well. There were colors within the words,too. It certainly would be a Christmas to remember with it being an alien granting wishes. i liked the computer being put under the tree. The books and the writing paraphnelia(sp) was a nice touch.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. There was one mistake found in the whole piece. The word I is next to glance after having just said me. This is a great tribute to your relative. One could see her looking out the window. One could see her pondering the walking or jogging. There was more pictures than just this one. i couldn't name them all. You did just great withi writing this. Sorry for the loss of your aunt. I know what it is like losing someone you love.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You did well. You did a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There was color within your words, too. It is about a box or boxes. It is all consuming to where you don't know where to turn. I hope I got this right. If not, please let me know in your reply. Thank for writing.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did a good job. You did well. It was so believeable. I could picture an inn in Alaska made for vampires only. The smell of the blood was present. The body was clearly seen. There were so many things that come to mind. As said before, you did a good job.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. I first rated this a 4.5 stars. I have re-read it and say it is perfect. There is so much to the best of Heaven that being Christ Jesus our Lord. Without Him there wouldn't be any need for Christmas nor would there be anyYou did such a good job with this piece. Makes me glad that I re-read it. KEEP WRITING.
My overall impression is that this was a good piece. Though there was the country dialect in the ifrst one I am so glad that you gave us the second one. There were no mistakes in the second piece. You did well. you did a good job. it is rough and tough being a bull rider. I have seen that done on TV. it isn't an easy thing to do. it is pretty easy sitting on a bull I guess, but not when you have to do all you can do to stay on him.
My overall impression is that this is good. You did a good job. You did well. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You added color to your words, too. it is nice to love and to know that love is from someone who is destined to love you. It is great having a love of yourself but one wants more than that. As it should be. You did a good job with this piece. Be proud of it. Thank you for writing it.
My overall impression is that t his is a good piece. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did well. You did a good job. It is a piece of spiritual proportions. There was color within your words, too. Having a home life is one thing that all needs in t his life. You have a nice one from what I heard you say.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. There was one mistake in the whole piece. The word "suiimple" should have been "simple". Poetry is expression for sure enough. It either flows orr doesnt' flow. Yours did flow very nicely. You did a good job. You did well.
Overall impression is that this is a good piece. There is one mistake I found in the whole piece. The word "seet" was used. It may be you were thinking of the word "sweet". It is about eating. Finery if there is such a word applies here. There are delicious foods out on a table. There are also maggots of what you said was on yours. I would take the finery any day of the week. You did a good job.
My overall impression is that this is a good poll. it is the activities that keep us going on WDC. Mine is the reviewing. There is so much to review here and enjoy. I learn about different forms of poetry for one thing. I participate in polls for the simple reason there is a need for same.
Overall impression is that this is a good piece. You did well. You did a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There was color to your words, too. It is about time and how fast it goes. It is slowly ticking away and yet it is going by fast. There is no pinning down time.
My overall impression is that this piece is perfect. You did a good job. You did well. There were colors within your words. I know one t hing for sure you made me believe this story. it isn't easy to do that with a story. However, you did it. I wonder what you had become if not a vampiress.
Overall impression is that this is a good piece. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There was color within your words, too. I will have to say that it was a little hard to read because of the colors you used to write the piece. My eyes are not what t hey used to be. I am wearing glasses and that was the only way I was able to read what you had written. Please use black the next time you write. It makes it easier to read. I promise you I will look at more of your pieces in time to come.
Overall impression is that this is a good haiku. I have been acquainted with haikus before. They are always short. I know they are supposed to be short. Yours had color within the words. i could see the curls of smoke drifting on the breeze. Your question oif being able to come too was a good question.
Overall impression is that t his is a good piece. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did welll. You did a good job. There was color within your piece, too. it is about Heaven It iis about the angels who fly in Heaven and also flly to the earth. Where we will see our loved ones again. Oh, the rapture of this sight. You made it believeable. I know one day it will happen. Thank you for wriiting this piece.
Overall impression is that t his is a good piece. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did well. You did a good job. There were colors within your words, too. It is about a vampire and the hold he has over you. That you go to his Castle is one thing you shouldn't have done. You see you made me believe this story. You did good.
Overall imipression is that this is perfect. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There was color to your words, too. A beautiful time for kayaking was this time. Carrie was bent on being with Jason. She would go to any lengths to get to him even if it meant for hurting somone else. She did it to two people already and did it to her own sister. It was so believeable. You made me believe in this story. You did good.
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