My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes in the piece. You added colors to your words, too. It is about the soul. There is no containing it. It is as deep as an ocean as you said. There is much about the soul man hasn't even realized. You did a good job, as I said before.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You added color to your words, too. It is about two people. One is on the verge of collapsing and the other is trying to hold them up. I hope I got this right from what I got from the poem.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You added colors to your words, too. Its about someone being in prison or a self-made prison. They are trying to get out of it. They wish for a window but it would be too much for the freedom he would lose if he had one. He wouldn't be free anyway. He is like a time bomb going off and doesn't know when it is going to happen. As said before, you did a good job with this piece.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. Youhave done well You have done good. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You added color to your words, too. The subject is love. You have found it and the dark clouds disappear. You have a heart that is merry. The sadness is gone. There was romance within the piece.
PERFECT! I once rated this a 4.5 stars. I have re-read it just now and say it is perfect. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There was color within your words, too. it is repetitious but I can understand that. There was so much to remember with your grandmother. No wonder you made this a tribute to her for it is a nice one.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. There are no mistakes in the whole piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There is something to be said for bi-polar disease. It is a heartache for sure. It is a hard thing to have to live with. You are unbalanced of either being up or down totally. You did a good job, as I said before.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You did a good job. There was one mistake in the whole piece. The word "Ad" at the beginning should have "And" There was color to your words, too. It is about having failed at completing whatever you started to do. Like the half finished poem you didnt' finish it. it gets you down.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There was color within your words, too. There are alot of questionis found in this piece. It is something that you said that you were close within the person and that you were in their heart. Making this piece a romance piece. You did a good job, as I said.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. I had rated it to begin with a 4.0 stars. having re-read it again i rate it now a 4.5 stars. I feel you deserve the best rating you can get on this. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did well. You have done a good job. There was color within your words, too. A story of two people who loved each other. Beth walked away. She didn't wait for him to succeed at his craft. He now had a palace and all the t hings that went with it. But the main thing he didn't have Beth. This is what I got out of the story.
Overall impression is that this is a good piece. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did a good job. You have done well. There was color within your words, too. It is about you. There were various people that noticed you. Some shook their head. Others sank away. Your Heavenly Father commanded all. Your lover walked with you in the rain. There you were with the rain coming on Sunday.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You did well. You did a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There was color to your words, too. It is about Pale Dale and the narrator. They face the monsters together. They fly with their plane to new heights. They face danger together. You did a good job, as I said before.
PERFECT! There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did well. You did a good job. There were colors within your words, too. It seems that the Prince is the prince of darkness. The Princess is a ray of light. it is hardly a perfect combination. Yet, the two exists. You did a good job with this assignment. Hope you did well with it.
The words you used are simple enough. However, for some they are difficult to understand. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did well. You did a good job. I just feel that your education level is somewhat advanced for someone say who are 13 years of age or younger. One who would read this to a child is what I am getting at. You used your words well. Just don't forget about the children who may someday read this.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did well. You did a good job. There was color within your words, too. It is as if you are a puppet. That someone else is holding the strings. They are pulling you from one way to the other. This is the picture I got from the piece.
PERFECT! There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did well. You did a good job. There was color within your words, too. It is so true about words hurting others. You have heard it said about words never will hurt one. Well, that isn't true. Words do hurt and have a lasting effect on some people. So glad that you wrote this. Be proud of it.
PERFECT! This is a beautiful picture of your child. It goes along with the song for sure enough. One doesn't know what a child will grow up to be other than an adult. It is hoped that your child will make you proud now and in the days to come. KEEP WRITING AND DRAWING. You certainly have a talent for both of them.
My overall impression is that this is a good story. There were no mistakes found in ithe whole piece. You did well. You did a good job. There was color within the words, too. It was about a toy maker. His name was Tinker Toyle I believe. He wanted to be rich and wasted all those years of seeing his children grow up and his wife's love was missing.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You did well. You did a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You added color to you words, too. Love is a necessary thing to have in this life. From your description It is a force of two being together. There was romance in the piece. Something i look to see in a piece is romance and you had it. Good job, as I said before.
PERFECT! This item is perfect. You did a good job. You did well. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There was color wthin your words,too. It is clear that living with bipolar disorder isn't really living. it is just existing. Your daughter in law really has a rough road to walk down. The coming to grips with divorce is not an option. It wasn't for her. She knew that.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You did well. You did a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There was color within your words, too. it is about you running free. That no matter what restraint they have on you you are going to run free.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You did a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You used your colors well. There was romance within the piece. Two strangers meeting for the first time. One was a god of the river. The other was a lady of the river. He noticed her and she had noticed him but was afraid to say anything to him out of respect. Ths is how I saw it. Hope t hat I am right about this story.
Overall impression is that this is a good piece. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did well. You did a good job. There was colors within your words, too. It is about heartache and the pains surrounding it. It is felt because of the one you sought after didn't care about you. The pain is much for you. It is conveyed in this piece.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did well. You did a good job. There was color within your words, too. it has to do with time. How time is fleeting and how it is used. As you said it takes a second to blink and a minute to think.
PERFECT! This is a piece that had no errors. You did a good job. You did well. There were t hings that I never knew about myself t hat came out. I am mostly melancholy. There is the fact that I am a loner. I dont' have many friends but doesn't stop me from wanting to have more.
My overall impression is t hat this is a good piece. There were no mistakes found int the whole piece. You did a good job. You did well. There were colors within the words,too. It certainly would be a Christmas to remember with it being an alien granting wishes. i liked the computer being put under the tree. The books and the writing paraphnelia(sp) was a nice touch.
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