Good piece. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did a good job. There was the idea of friendship that everyone needs to have friends. If they have friends then they should keep them. The world runs on friendship. You said it well. There is nothing like having a true friend to be there when you need someone to hold your hand.
Good piece. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did a good job. There was the fact that God holds the key to life. That we live as He allows us to live. We take our journeys according to His plan. That one life that has ended is born again in Heaven. This is what I got from the piece. I hope I am right.
Good piece. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did a good job. There was color within your words. Like when you said:"They started the fight, now we are in the right." Meaning that someone started the fight. Now we have the right to finish it. This is what I got from this piece.
Good but sad piece. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did a good job. There was much tro this story. It was sad for sure enough for Kevin and what happened to him. There was the doping that was the in thing to do but was something of a disgust to me. I don't do drugs so I can't understand why you think it was such a great thing.
Good but sad piece. There were no mistakes found in t he whole piece. You did a good job. There was color within your words. Like the part where you said:"For here is where you long to be" setting up a picture of wanting to be somewhere you both knew and loved. There are other pictures too that are within the piece. The Irish song is another one.
Good piece. About a tree and the longevity of the same. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You added color to your words. Like the sentence:"Clothed in emerald fabric that bathes in luminescence" beautiful picture of a tree. Clothed in green. Its roots and the water nearby were all seen.
Good but sad piece. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did a good job. There was color within your words. There were the lines:"Is it wrong to love you, though forbidden fruit always taste best? Meaning you are asking the question of it being all right to love this person. But when you think about it forbidden fruit always taste best. That the forbidden is always tasting better even if one shouldn't have it.
There were two mistakes found in the whole piece. The word "week" should be "weak" and the word Lusid should be "lucid". You did a good job; however. The piece has color within it. There was the line:"When you're away my breath is still." meaning that when the person is away that your breath is still waiting for their return. It was a picture for sure enough.
Good but sad piece. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There was color within your words. About an older man who's time had come for him to pass away. His fingers feeling of the bedclothes. Then there was the utterrances that were incoherent. So many pictures was seen. You did a good job.
Good story. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There was color within your words. There was Winter Born and Silver Eagel Feather that were mother and daughter. There was the demon and the way he looked that was transparent. You did a good job. You had me on the edge of my seat.
Good but sad piece. There was one mistake in the whole piece. The word "clause" was used instead of Claus. There were pictures to be seen throughout the piece. There was the backyard with the things Fox was growing. The golf cart was another picture for i could imiagine that. There were many more pictures too. You did a good job.
This is a good piece. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did a good job. I once rated this 4.0 stars but feel I acted hastily. I am now rating it a 4.5 stars.There was color within your piece. The closeness of a mother and son is nothing like it. You painted that picture so well.
Good pieces. There are several mistakes in the pieces. There was the color within your words that made pictures I was able to see. About the band playing and the other things you mentioned were all able to be seen within your pieces. You did a good job.
Good piece. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did a good job. There was color within your words. It is really something to be able to see an eclipse. This one though wasn't one that a person would only see but be involved in. There were other pictures too that I saw. One of those was when you said something to the effect about walking the Moon endlessly. There was a picture right there.
Good piece. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did a good job. There was the references to several authors or others who deal with writing and the theatre. I learned something I didn't know before reading this piece. There is alot to writing. That is one thing I do know for sure.
Good piece. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did a good job. There was color within your words. There was the drive on the freeway. There was the chapel. There was the makeup bag and the dress that was or were all clearly seen. The duct tape was another thing I saw. You did a good job, as I said before.
Good but sad piece. I hope that you aren't really anarexic. There were no mistakes in the whole piece. You added color to your words. The pictures I was able to see was of a frail little girl. Shewas starving herself. Eating one protein bar a day isn't much of anything. There were other pictures too that I saw. You did a good job.
This is a great story. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did a good job. There were many pictures I was able to see. Like for the boy who was eighteen years of age being in a gang. The way that the bathoom looked with the hole next to the toilet. Winnie and her letter she had written I read every word of it. There was much to this piece.
You have some imagination! This story gripped like no other. I read every word. It was full of horror and romance. You did a good job. There were no mistakes in the whole piece. It was something else for the little girl to take over the mother's body like that. I wasn't expecting that to happen. You kept me on the edge of my seat for sure enough.
I rated this a 4.0 to begin. I now rate it a 4.5 for it is better the second time around. You did a good job. There were few mistakes in the piece. The letter "I" is lowercase in some of the piece. That is all I find wrong with it this time. There was color within your words.
Sad commentary of a soul that is lost in booze. You did a good job. You made me believe you. There was color within your words. Nightmares coming to life is one experience I hope to never find happening to me. You did a good job, as i said before..
Very romantic. A good piece is this one. You have color within your words. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You used your colors well. You do everything to convince your love that you are all for her. That is a great thing. You did a good job.
Good but short piece. There was one mistake I found in the whole piece. The word "Your" should have been "You're". That was the only mistake I found. You used your colors well. There was romance in the piece. There were pictures to see within the use of your words. A true love and one that meant or means the world to you is found in this person. Good job.
PERFECT! This is great. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. I like it that you have it where people can post messages. The rules are spelled out clearly enough anyone would be able to understand them. There is still time to get an entry in. I like that also. Here is a gift of 30,000 gps. It is hoped that I could get a merit badge to add to my collection.
Good but short piece. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There was color within your words. You used them well. It was about a betrayal that someone gave you. Your love is hurt and you are hurt, too. There were other pictures too.
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