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Review of Them Green Eyes  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
How sad! It was awful that the loss of his parents was one thing but to take it out on you was another. It is a sad commentary in anyone's life to be abused. It seemed that you were abused mentally. That is a bad thing. There are plenty of other guys who would love you for yourself. Maybe it is time to move on and forget about the green eyes. Not telling you what to do. I am merely making a suggestion. All the best to you. cubby
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Review of As time goes by  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is most sad. There is something in a mother's love that is eternal. I believe that. it is a shame that your dad treated you the way he did. I wouldn't know what to do either. it was great coming to the US. I would have liked that part too had I been born in a place as yourself. It is really sad that your mother couldn't have come with you. I know she would have protected you against him. You are courageous in telling your story. I applaud you for a piece well done.
All the best, cubby
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Review of Belong  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I really hope you don't feel like this. This is a horrible existance for you if this is the way it is. I know from my own standpoint that I have had to feel I was a non-entity for many years. It wasn't until I found someone who cared about me that I didn't feel I had a right to live. I thought I was a mistake. My parents wished for having me. They planned on having me. So, it wasn't the fault of my parents who left me feeling like this. You did a courageous thing in writing this piece. I would be proud of it. I hope you are.
All the best, cubby
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Review of Away  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a small piece. But, it is a good one. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. "Away" has many things attached to it. I liked the part where you said "away is the darkness". It is so true, dont' you think? Happy New Year. All the best, cubby
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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
What a great story. There is so much to this that one can see just from reading the words. You drew lovely pictures though sad ones, too. The man had searched all of his life for the woman that was buried there. it is sad and also fulfilling to the man for his love hadn't gone away from him. Happy New Year. All the best, cubby
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Review of The Rose  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
It is a beautiful piece. It is so true about the rose. Mankind has many flowers from which to choose to surprise someone special. However, there is nothing like roses to do the job right. I loved your use of words. I loved the whole piece. it was beautiful and one thing I know is that I was able to see the rose.
That is it in a nutshell. I was able to see the rose. Happy New Year. All the best, cubby
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Review of To Be Released  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with Poetry Inspiration  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You were mentioning about life as I believe you were anyway. it is fleeting. The things you hung unto are gone. That the umbrella of hope and belief are lost down inside locked with the dragon. This is to quote yoiu of course. I hope I show no disrespect to you for quoting you. As said before, it was a very good piece. Happy New Year. All the best, cubby
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Review of Frozen Breath  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with Poetry Inspiration  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is a tragic piece. There is no getting around that. It is tragic. She followed a voice that was a man's voice. She felt that he was her rescuer in a word. instead, he was the devil himself. You sure made me a believer. That is the sign of a good writer. I was following up with every word that you wrote. I hate the ending. Another soul perishes in the snow. Happy New Year. All the best, cubby
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Review of Gone  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with Poetry Inspiration  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
This poem to me doesn't make any sense at all. My overall impression is that while it is a good piece there is nothing here. One is fighting to be recognized if I am assuming this is right. There is nothing more than mere words to this piece. There is no color to it. I don't see a picture. I hope that you will keep writing. I am sure that you meant well with this piece. I just couldnt' make head nor tails of it. That is my problem not yours. Happy New Year. All the best, cubby
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Review of Burning Words  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with Poetry Inspiration  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Your rhyme scheme was excellent. You did a good job. There was much in this little piece. You were talking about someone really close to you. You were speaking as though if you left the other that you would have that same person within your heart. That is beautiful. Happy New Year. All the best, cubby
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Review of Reflection  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with Poetry Inspiration  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
You certainly have me in your corner. There is the question why me? You can see the reflection in the mirror. You know it is yourself. I guess that in a word the world is made up of mirrors too. There are the ones in the circus and others like you have at home. It is a world to itself. Happy New Year. All the best, cubby
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Review of Welcome Back  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with Poetry Inspiration  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
You left me high and dry. I was reading every word and then there was nothing more to read. The scream would have got my attention too. It was a horrible scream. it makes one think of it being with vampires or something else. I know that I wouldnt' have wanted to have stayed and listened to the scream. you made a believer out of me. That is the sign of a good writer. I hope this is fictional. Happy New Year. All the best, cubby
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Review of Let it Be  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with Poetry Inspiration  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
What beautiful pictures you have come up with this piece! You want someone to notice you from what I got through the reading. You want someone to nuture you and care for you, too. If I am correct in assuming that you have no one now then that is sad. There is so much within you that you must go on. Go on living and experiencing the best that life has to offer. Happy New Year. All the best, cubby
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Review of Who I Am  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with Poetry Inspiration  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is a sad piece. You have no idea of who you are according to this piece. That is sad. You know you are somebody but who? This is tragic. There are other ways to find out who you are. Ask a relative or some friend. Know that you are somebody wonderful. That is who youare a wonderful human being. Happy New Year. all the best, cubby
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Review of Creative writing  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with Poetry Inspiration  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Being "Gumnaam" is something I never thought of before. It is a new word on me. There is always a chance for second thoughts to happen. it soundsas if you have had second thoughts, too. You wrote a beautiful piece of poetry/story. There were some pictures within it. My overall impression is that this is a good piece. I don't see any place for improvement. Only to make it known what the song really means. Other than that, you did a good job. Happy New Year. All the best, cubby
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Review of That's a wrap  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with Poetry Inspiration  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a sad piece. There was love or at least what seemed like love between the two of you. Then, something happened that changed all of that. It is always a sad time when love no longer exists for the other. You have painted a great picture here with your words. One could see the blanket and the two of you being wrapped together. Then the pain got to be too much. You wanted out of the relationship. So that is what happened. I think it is a sad piece as I said before. Happy New Year. All the best, cubby
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Review of SILENCE  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with Poetry Inspiration  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
A sad piece is this one. You have every emotion locked up inside of you and the tears are flowing. You love the person very much. However, it doesn't seem to be the other way around. Silence is a gift in so many words. Silence is golden; as they say. you have done well with this piece. I am very glad that I had the chance to review it. Happy New Year. All the best to you, cubby
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Review of So...  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with Poetry Inspiration  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is a tragic piece. There is so much love going on and then the bottom falls out. You prepare yourself for the inevitable. That should help you get over the losing the girl part of it. But you sum it up in the last line. Hope you're happy. That really tells alot right there. I wonder if the person you were speaking about is happy now or what. Happy New Year. All the best, cubby
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Review of Breaking Point  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with RAOK Upgrade Brigade Group  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
A sad commentary of the woman is this piece. You have spelled it out so well as to what was going on and who was doing what. It was a very good story. Your use of words were eloquent. There were pictures to be seen through your words. it was like I was viewing the woman and all that was happening tot her. Happy New Year. All the best, cubby
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Review of As He Lay Dying  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with RAOK Upgrade Brigade Group  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
My overall impression is that this is a sad piece. it was sad that the only thing or person he thought about was a woman. He gave no consideration for himself. He was tied up in the feelings of the woman. His heart must have been bad. That is even sadder. Happy New Year. All the best, cubby
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Review of Come to Life  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with RAOK Upgrade Brigade Group  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a beautiful piece of work. You have done well. You make it seem very interesting to read this piece. I know I was interested. it is a sad thing to cry. I loved the part where you said "and I'm

coming to life

through your eyes
This is a beautiful thing to have said. You have done a good job with this piece. I would like to read some more of your work. Happy New Year. All the best, cubby
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In affiliation with RAOK Upgrade Brigade Group  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This was a rough story for you to write. it was sad to say the least. Your mother had been dealing in dope and manufacturing it. That is most sad. There was going to come a day when she would get caught and that happened on your birthday. That was terribly sad. it is sad all the way round. Being taken away from your mother wasn't what she wanted no doubt of that. However, she couldn't continue on doing what she was doing. I feel for you. Hope you have a Happy New Year. All the best, cubby
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In affiliation with RAOK Upgrade Brigade Group  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
You drew some pretty pictures with this piece. One could see the snow and also the flower that was buried underneath the snow. One could see the summer time and the pine trees. Your imagery was well noted. it is truly something for a flower to catch the eye of its beholder. You said so much in such a small space. It was a good read. Thank you for sharing. All the best, Cubby Happy New Year.
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Review of Untimely Death  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with RAOK Upgrade Brigade Group  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is awesome. It is something that I never really thought about. It is something that must be somewhat true. Death is an angel sent for the purpose of taking one's life. It is something for me to understand and I do very much understand where you were coming from. It is a good story. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did an excellent job. Keep writing. You have an obvious talent for it.
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Review of MY LOVE  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
Good piece but short. You did well until you got to the word angle instead of angel. But I knew what you meant. You did well. You got out of your heart what you wanted to say on the screen. It isn't that hard to get it out in the open by saying something to the one you care for.
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