I first of all gave this a 4..5 stars. Having re-read it I have changed it to a 5.0. you have done well in presenting it to us. You make a strong argument of what is really worthwhile in this world. I happen to agree with you. We have a beautiful lworld out here and it i up to us to take care of it.
This was a good piece and I am glad that I clicked it. Stalling for time will not get you anywhere but tired. you have done well in presenting this piece to us. I like how you write. It seems that you write from the heargt and that is a good place to start. Keep on writing.
You're the first one I have given a 5.0 star rating today. You captured my attention. You have set a fire under me that is burning to write something myself. You have done well in presenting this to us. I like how your mind works and how much I have learned from you in these words you''ve penned.
Whatever the secret is it is not enough that would change the love for their own. I like to think that they would be understanding and offer help along the way You did well in presenting this to us. I thank you for sharing. You are a good writer. Keep on writing.
Very good rhyming scheme. It is a true to life picture of where the soul will go prepared and not prepared to die. You have hit the nail on the head so to speak. You have done well in presenting this to us. Keep writing. I liked the whole piece and don't see any place for improvement.
This is a letter that is very very good. You spelled out very good things and what you would like to do with the one that would be yours. Ihope that you find the one you are seeking. I hope that he will be all you need and want in a man. Keep on writing. you're good at it.
I liked this story. One could see the whole picture you painted so well. It was a bike run that you had and the things that happened was less than what you had hoped for. One could see the land and the other things that were around you. YOU DID WELL IN PRESENTING THIS TO US. Keep writing.
This sounds like your dad left and went somewhere other than home But the main thing is that youare praising your dad for all he has done. you did well in presentig this to us. Makes me feel for my own dad who has since passed away. Keep on writing. You're good at it
This is a great thing you are doing/ It makes it invitingjto join. 'I'm happy to see you are welcoming everyone to come aboard. You have done well in presenting this to us. There are a lot of things to review. New pieces everyday some not new but all with the hope for reviewing.
I hope this is a song for you have the making of a good one. The chorus is repeated and it is a good one. You have a heart for God and that is somethin wonderful. You did well in presenting this to us. You write really well. May you always wish to write.
WHEW whata piece of work.You are enthralled with this person. It seems that you would give anything to be with him. You are hung up on this guy. I think that you have something here and it called love. You did well in presenting this to us. Good job. Keep on writing.
This is so beautiul. It was like was takingthe walk with you. Seeing the colored lights and the Christmas tree all meant so much. You did well in presenting this to us. Good job it was too. I was lost in is story feeling the things you felt. I mourn the loss of your dad. I have lost mine to.
Love is such beautiful thing andyou have captured it here. It matters not the person is no longer around your stating that his love is inevitable and something permanent in your heart. You have done well in presenting this for us to read. You did a good job.
This was a beauiful prayer. You did well in presenting it to us. You have done a good job. I liked the way you made references to God for being the only One who could help you. It means a lot of the good things in what you said. I am most glad that Iclicked it. I hope you will have a great day today. cubby
You made me feel I was in the cell with you You didn't eat anything. It made me feel for you. You did well in presenting this for us to see. I will remember white and grey. There is a lonesome feeling being locked in a cell. I have experienced it before. Keep on writing.
This is a beautiful piece of work. You did an excellent jobin presenting it to us. The readin is simply grand. You should keep on writing. You're good at it. I like the references to God.. That was the best part about the piece. Iwish I had come up with the idea my self. It is a good piece of work..
This is a good piece. You have done well in presenting it to us. I can't help but think that you are speaking of the Lord. For He is the only constant we have. ou have summed it so beautifully. I love this piece of work. i have a hope that you will keep writing. You're good at it.
This would be great if it were a song. You would have the chorus down pat if it were a song. But since it isn't it is redundant I know what I am speaking abouthere for i do the same thing. The love is there in your wordsand it is something beautiful. you did well in presenting this My hope is you will keep onwriting. Youregood at it..
This is a sad piece. The want to of having a love that is monotone is not love at all. There is no excitement in it. You feel barren of any love at all. It is sad and a picture that is even worse. You did a great job in presentingthis for us to see. My hope is that you will keep writing. you are good at it.
This is a lovely piece. Makes onewant to go to the water and do the same thing you did. You captured it so beautifully. It seems you were lost in time and space.;You were in your own little world out there. It really made me want to feel that you were feeling. Good job. Keep writing. You're good at it.
This is a sad piece to read. you are wondering if the person is going to help you or not. There is the gleam in his eye. you are not alone now with him and you want it to be that way. you did well in presenting this piece for us to read. You did a good job. Keep writing. you're good at it. This is what I got out of the piece. I hope that I am right.
WHEW! What a piece of literature. You feel for the characters in this piece. Grey is the main word and it is throughout the piece. Grey is such an awful color and you have depicted it well. I am glad that I clicked this piece. You have done a good job. Keep on writing. You're good at it.
This is a sad piece of love that went away. There is a sadness in it for the reader to experience. You feel for the person in the piece who has been hurt. it is sad to see the love being torn apart in this piece. You have done well in presenting it to us. Keep writing. you're good at it.
Autumn is the subject of the piece. There was plenty of color in this piece. I was happy to read this piece it brought back many memories of my days in Autumn. School was in session and the weather was getting brisk. Thank you for bringing this piece to us It is a very good write and one I am most glad that I clicked keep on writing. you're good at it.
I didn't understand what you were trying to say in this piece. It is like you're walking along the ocean. it seems to be saying something about the water's tow. It could mean that you are speaking about the persons's toe being brought out in the piece. I am sorry I just don't get it. I am rather lost here. But you did well in bringing it to us. Keep writing
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