This is a sad piece to read. The life of the man was cut short and his life is now no life at all. It is sad that the mom had to go through so much pain when they told her and I feel for the family. You made a believer out of me with this story and hope that it isn't true. But if it is then I really do feel for the children left behind. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You are asked to keep on writing. I hope you will.
This is a strange piece to read. It is like a mystery full of unexpected surprises. I like to think that the woman died of suicide since she had to die. I hate the idea of someone murdering her. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpose of a review. You are asked to keep on writing and hope you will.
This is indeed sad to read. The pain you must be going through is not an easy one to handle. I feel for you and hope that things will be okay with you after a while. it is always sad when someone has to die. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for review. I hope you will keep on writing. I hope this is fiction and not the situation. You sure made a believer out of me.
This is a story that is good in nature and good in taste. However, I wouldn't succumb to the stalker for anything when it came to my personal affairs. You have some imagination and it is working overtime. You did well in presenting ths piece of literature for rhe review. I hope you will continue to write. you're good at it.
Yes, the firey act of nature is once again in full swing. It is a piece that brought to mind of our own Croatan Forest. The winds do a number on the trees that blow and it engulfs the forest with the burned ashes of a fire that is out of control. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for review. I hope you will keep on writing.
Beautiful! This is a beautiful piece of literature. you have done a great job. Love is something wonderful and it is with that love that people want to have so desparately. You did well in presenting this piece of literature for review. I hope you will keep on writing.
This is a piece that I wish I hadn't clicked. It is so sad. There was love in the piece I know that. But the fact of the matter is it was also of deception. Now you are wondering what is going to happen to the baby. What a sad commentary this is. You did well in presentingthis piece of literature for review. I hope that you will keep on writing. You're good at it. you made a believer out of me.
What a precious letter this is! You have captured my heart with what was said. I know it is the love of your life writing to you. I know that you feel warmed and comforted in reading those words. You have done well in presenting this piece of literature for the purpos of a review. I rate it 4.5. I am glad to have clicked this piece. Bless the both of you.
You have earned the 5.0 stars for this piece I agree wholeheartedly that you have been prejudged and that is so wrong. I would say that the things you did makes you a much betterhuman being than you are given credit for. You did well in presenting this piece for review. I am glad that you wrote it and wish you only thebest of everything in your life. Keep on writing.
Yes, the whole thing is trusting the Lord to get you through something like this. You have the hope within you that the two of you will meet again. That is te blessed hope of the Christian. I believe you have that hope. I am most glad that I clicked this piece. you have done well in presenting the piece for review. Glad that you have hope and I support that hope with a prayer or two of my own.
Keep writing. You're good at it.
Sounds like there were some heated arguments the two of you had. It was a piece that I was glad I read though I would have liked it more without the cursing that was found in it. I am a man of 58 years of age. I don't resort to using words like you did. It would have been a better piece to have removod them However, it would have taken away from the story so they are there for that purpose. You did well in presenting this piece for review. You are a good writer. I hope you will keep on writing. Thank you for what you did 12 years ago. I am honored to have met you this way and wish you all the best.
The last line got to me and I completely agree. You did well in presenting this piece for review. It is a great one and you should be proud of your accomplishment. you are a good writer and it shows so well with the way that you painted this picture. Using your words there are the paints that you used and it is clear that you did your work well. I hope you will keep on writing. You're good at it.
This is so romantic! You have done a great job with this piece. It is nice to read the other side of the coin here with it being the lady who has written the piece. I have just read some of the work of DevilDog2005 and he is deployed to the awful place where he serves our country. I think it is so special and meaningful to read this piece and most glad that I clicked it. I hope you will keep on writing. You're good at ir.
Beautiful! It is so easy to forget the things that matters the most in a relationship. But you are the exception of wanting to hold unto the important thing the love of your wife. I am happy that I chose this piece to read. You have done well in presenting this piece for review. And as said before I am happyand honored that we met this way and want to tell you that I am pulling for you all along the way. Keep writing.
The second 5.0 stars goes to you. You deserve it. You have captured the picture beautifully with the paints you used to color your world. It is something special to see that the world would be missing out on a great couple if the same wasn't t rue with the wife. About forgetting and getting on with life is what i am speaking. you have done well in presentingthis piece for review. I hope you the best in all you do and thank you for serving our country the way you are. I am honored to have met you like this and wish you only the best of everything.
This is so romantic! You have captured the picture well with the paints you have used. One could see the things you saw and felt the things you have felt. It is true love and what a way to go. You have done well in presenting this piece for review. hope you will keep writing.
This is a sad commentary of how things are in this land of ours. There are no goals set for people to achieve. They are satisfied with having TV as the all in all god that happens to be in nearly every home in the world. You have done well to present this piece for review. I am glad that I clicked it. I hope you will keep writing. You're good at it. I don't see any room for improving this piece. you did a good job.
This is unusual for me to review a photograph. However it was a good one. I liked the way this looked and with the description of the Old Warrior. It was a good choice for me to click and glad I did. I love sigs and this is a beautiful one. You did well in presenting this piece for review. A photograph or a piece of poetry is worthy of attention and you have mine. Keep writing and all the best to you.
This was a good piece. It was something special to read. I am glad that I clicked it. So you are the daughter in this story. I can just abou imagine the way you feel with your dad being lost at sea. Barren and hurt come to mind. You did well in presenting t his piece for review. I am happy to have read it and gotten closer to you by this piece. I wish you well in all you do. Keep writing. you're good at it.
A soul stirring piece if there ever was one. You did a great job with this. I was beginning to think I was there with your loved one and how lonely I would have been without you being close to me. You made a believer out of me with this piece. you did well in presenting this piece for review. I am glad that I clicked it. Keep on writing. you're good at it.
This is really moving. You got to my heart with this story. I am most glad I clicked it. it was as if I were thinking about my own dad and the way he was when he was alive. he never gave up on me. The fact that I was gay at the time didn't deter him from loving me. You did well in presenting this piece for review. I am glad that you did. It is something that has brought me closer to my own dad. Thank you again for sharing this piece.
You have earned the 5.0 stars. It is a great piece and one thatI am so glad that I clicked. you made it seem so beautiful and loving and having that for a topic of a birthday it is even more special. You did well in presenting this piece for review. I know I am glad to know that true love is working and it works well for you. Many thanks for doing what you are doing for our country. I am very honored to have met you this way. All my best to you. cubby
This is a beautiful story. It is as if I were there with you. I like it when that happens. You could see the many things you saw. you could hear the birds in their melodies singing and think about the picnic being spread. You did so well in presenting this piece for review. I know I loved it. You are asked to keep on writing. you're good at it.
What agreat piece this is! I was reading this and felt when he introduced the woman by his side as his sister, I felt relieved for you. It was as if a great weight was off the shoulders and you could breathe. I hope this is fiction and not real. You made a believer out of me either way. You did well in presenting this piece for review. You are asked to keep on writing. you're good at it.
This is a yummy subject. I love pancakes and from the description of ths piece you do too. It is syruppy and just good eating all the way around. It makes one hungry to have some right now. You did well in presenting this piece for review. I am glad that I clicked it.You did a good job. I hope you will keep on writing. You're good at it.
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