Such a strong piece is this one There was love for the both of you but she didn't want it and abused the love you had for her. It is a sad commentary of the thing that comes to mind. Getting back at the person never really works. It only separates you further apart for good. you did well in presenting this piece for review. Keep writing. You're good at it.
What a beautiful piece this is! You have a great piece and you should be proud of it. You are talking about walking out of the winter into the spring and then your mind takes you to July for a greater bit of summer. This is what I got out of the piece. You have don well in presenting this piece for review. I hope you will keep on writing. You're good at it.
What a great fictional piece you have. The enemy is there in the same room with you. The thing is you fight it and want to be free of it. But it consumes you and you are lost forever. You did well in presenting this piece for review. I hope you will remain here at WDC and keep on writing. you're good at it.
This is a very good piece. I would have liked for you to have capitalized the words You and the Word. For you see you are speaking about Jesus and God. I know that your intentions were great and you did a good job. You did well in presenting this piece for review. I hope you wll keep on writing.
Beautful The words are so specal and loving. It seems the person you are talking about has since died and has gone onto Heaven. Your love for that person wil never die. It is a beautiful promise.You did well in presenting this piecefor review. Keep on writing.
This is beautiful. It is amazing many forms of poetry there are and the one most special is the haiku. It speaks of nature the greatest part of the world. It gives praise fothe birds singing. It lifts up the name of God in the piece. At least that is how I see it. you did well in presenting this piece for review., Keep on writing
This is a beautiful piece One can see the winter and also the spring. It is as if the flowers are waking up to the sound of spring calling them. It is a beautifu picture you have painted with your words You did well in presenting this piece for review. You did a great job on this picture.
Very good piece. It is a piece I am glad that I clicked. I don't know if you used metaphors or not but I could see where they would have worked well. You did well in presenting this piece for review. I hope you will promise us to keep on writing. You're good at it.
How very true this is ! you have really struck a chord in me for I am disabled. I have been for a number of years now. If I could work I would do it for sure. You did well in presenting this piece for review. I hope you will keep on writing. you're good at it.
What a beautiful piece this is! You have done well to not only capture your mother but all mothers in general. I love your work and I love you more. You did well in presenting this piece for review. I am glad that I clicked it. Keep on writing. You're good at it.
Beautiful rhyming scheme. You did a good job with this piece. There is no room to be improved for you have done it well. You did well for presenting this piece for review. you are a good writer. It is hoped that you will be with us in WDC for many years to come. Good job.
This is sad to read. The man had done all of this gardening and watched the flowers grow Grow into something beautiful were the thing he planted. Well, he is now planted in the ground and there is no more Ralph. I think this is extremely sad and a good bit of literature. You did well in presenting the piece for review. You keep on writing and I will be most glad if you do. I would love to see more of your work.
Did you mean to use the word then and not than in the last line? I was wonering for it changes the whole piece just a tad. This is truly romantic! I didn't see the reason you made this out to be gay/lesbian. Though it could very well be. There is a greatness in your writing. You did well in presenting this piece for review. Keep on writing. you're good at it.
This is a beautiful piece of work. you have the good memories and the bad ones. But the bad seems to outweigh the good ones. This is what I got from reading your piece. you did well in presenting this piece for review. I hope you will keep on writing. you're good at it.
This piece is beautiful. There are no words that can truly identify true beauty. It is a fleeting thing to even try. You must have seen something very beautfiul or a person that was so beautiful that you had troube describing it or them. You did well in presenting the piece for review. I hope you will keep on writing. You're good at it.
What a great piece is this! You have personified the gargoyle and what he or it sees and feels. What a beautiful picture to have for us to see. You did well in presenting your piece for review. You are a good writer and one that made me think of what you were talking about but i got it and it was great. Keep writing. You're good at it.
I would love to hear those words from someone. It seems as though the person to whom you are speaking has left you and you are sad about the whole thing. It is such a sad thing for love to go wrong. You did well in presentingthis piece for review. you are a good writer and I hope you will keep on writing.
This is a sad commentary on the lives of two people who could have loved the other. It is sad for a lot of reasons in that one you were looking to your dad for help along the way and didnt' get it. You were hoping against hope that things would be better. No wonder you never called him"Daddy". You did well in presenting this piece for review. You are a good writer and we need you in WDC.
This is a good piece. I didn't see any grammarl errors in the piece. You did a good job. It was an easy piece to read and I loved the simplicity of it. You did well in presenting this piece for review. I like your work.I hope to be reading more of your work later on. Keep on writing.
The rhyming scheme was excellent. I didn't see it before but it is actually quite good.In fact, it is very good. I first of all gave this a 4.5 stars but I want to change this to a 5.0 stars just for the rhyming scheme alone. you did well in presenting this piece for review. I hope you will keep on writing.
Metaphorially speaking this is a great piece. One gets the idea of life in general and how important it is to use it wisely. The anvil and the hammar things you'd find in a blacksmith shop are the tools used to beat out the metal. The metal being life is something great and fragile. You did well in presenting t his piece for review. You are a good writer and it shows.
I feel as though I have been on a journey with this piece. I almost touched the stars. I felt the sun pulling me in and the other things that you said in this piece was happening to me. You did well in presenting this piece for review. You are a good writer. How do I know? Because I just read one of your pieces and loved it. Keep on writing.
Beautful piece is this one. You are in another part of the world where Sping is in December. I never really knew about that sort of thing until I heard a missionary bring it up in his slides. You did well in presenting this piece for review. I liked it for it brought back memories of the good all days. I hope you will keep on writing. It is so important that you do we need good writers in this land of ours.
This is so sad. You trusted in someone who let you down. He was with a wife and a child. It is always bad when this happens to those unsuspecting You did well in presenting this piece for review. Iam glad that I clicked it. I am really sorry for your loss of having someone in your life and hope that the next one will be true to you.
What a beauiful piece this is. You have captured it all in the picture you have painted. The simplicity is the thing I liked about this piece. You did well in presenting this for review. You do well in writing. It shows in this piece. I am glad I clicked it.
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