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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is an excellent piece of work. It is a great thing you are doing and I am most glad that you are You are truly an inspiration to me. I didn't know your extent of writing but do now. I like the writing as usual part of your name. You have done well for yourself and that is something to be most proud. I wish you every success in your life. Thank you for looking at my work.
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702
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello exoterik,
I just finished reading your piece of A HEART'S DISCOVERY. it was a good read. Seriously. There was romance and love in this piece. You had it in for him as you wanted to love him. there were no mistakes found in the whole piece. you have done an excellent job. So glad that you asked me to review it for you. I liked it very much. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby
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Review of Yellow Paper.  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Grace,
It was a good contest entry. I just finished reading your piece of YELLOW PAPER It was a good read. Imagine a lady with all the wit and charm that she had and wasn't using it to her advantage. So she had her cigarette. it is nothing in this day and time to find one smoking , The coffee was another thing that was part of her habit. it is nice that the janitor put the note there for her to read. how happy he was that she took his advice. I hope this finds you well And all the best to you.
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Review of Alone again  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello jonisen,
I just finished reading your piece, ALONE AGAIN'. it was very bittersweet. You had three fathers and two mothers and you felt they were never there. I was lucky my father died when I was four. But I had a great mother. She took on both jobs. I was happy to hear that you were starting to care. A mother and father is important in a child's life. Even as an adult. Your piece was written very well. it was a good read. And a good writing job. I enjoyed the piece. I am sure others will too. All the best to you. Sincerely, cubby.
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705
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Simplelsimplicity,
it was a great piece. You really hate the guy but love him at the same time. I know how that is. There are so many things that you hate about him. Yet you love him on the other hand and that is one thing that makes me feel that you really do love the guy. You did a good job with this piece. Keep on writing. You're good at it. cubby/jblackgloves
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706
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Frankly, I believe in ghosts that they exist. There are strange occurrances that take place that are inexplainable. You have a good piece on your hands here. There are so many apirations I think is the right word but then again it may be aspirations. Anyway, it makes one feel uneasy when discussing about ghosts for some have seen them and heard them. I would be a fool to say they dont' exist. Thank you for sharing this piece. It was interesting and helpful. I wouldnt' change anything it is perfect the way it is. The reason I don't give out five stars is that there is always room to include something else in the story or poem.
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Review of Piano Man  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a beautiful musical piece. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You painted a lovely picture. One could see him playing with his eyes closed. One could see the pain that he has or had when playing the piano. One could hear the songs that he would sing. so many pictures were there with this piece. Thank you for sharing this with us. Keep on writing. All the best to you, cubby/jblackgloves
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708
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Eloise,
You have hit the nail on the head. Wisdom does come with making our mistakes. You are so right there. It was a good read. There were no mitstakes found in the whole piece. You have done a good job. The structure was solid. it was a good read. Faith comes after we have tried everything else. How true. How true that is. You did a good job on this piece. You should be proid of it. cubby/jblackgloves
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709
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I somehow think this was written for me. I am of low self esteem. I have many flaws about me. I am unable to walk and have to get around in a wheelchair. There are many things about you that you hit the nail on the head about. I dont' think fo myself as being silly though. I dont' tell jokes well. There isnt' anything that I could be silly about. I was hoping to review this piece that my brother did yesterday. I got the chance this morning. it is now 12:47AM. So, I am going tobe up for a while longer. If you wrote t his for me or about me then I am flattered. I have had one other person to recently write a poem about me and that was my brother his name is Bob. All the best to you and yours. cubby/jblackgloves
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710
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a sad piece. You are willnig to do anything for anyone. But what you want them to do is to cry for you. I don't know if that would work or not. There is a time when we all must cry at some point in time. I haven't cried in five years. The last time I did my dad passed away. So, I couldn't cry for you if you asked me. The structure was solid. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did a good job. cubby/jblackgloves
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Review of That feeling  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
You have done well in bringing this forth. The only thing I saw wrong with this piece is that your references to God and to Jesus should be capitalized. You didn't do that with the words He, Him. it is a good piece. Don't get me wrong on that note. It is a very good piece and so true. You have to turn to God and let Him take all your doubts away and all the other things in your life that are wrong. He will do it. He has promised to and He can't lie. The structure was solid. The read was a good one. You have done well as I said before. Thank you for sharing this piece. cubby/jblackgloves
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Review of Verbing  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a sad piece. Love is a verb all right. And it seems that you have lost that love of your life. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did a good job. There were sad pictures to be seen in this piece. A love falling apart was one. Your description of it was also sad. You having gone through a divorce. That is always a sad thing to go through. it has never happened to me personally but it did for my brother. So, I know a little something about it on that end. Keep writing. All the best to you. cubby/jblackgloves
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Review of Homeward Bound  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A great romantic piece is this one. you have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. Your love is strong for this person. it could be a thousand to one odds and still you would choose her to be yours. That is really romantic. you have every right to feel proud about this piece. It is a good one. You have done well. Keep up the good writing. All the best to you. cubby/jblackgloves
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714
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
You covered the seasons well. i was especially interested in your words as they painted a great picture of the seasons. New life for one and teaching the old to die was another thing I liked about this piece. I have never thought of it in this way before but you are exactly right in what you said. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did a good job. The structure was solid. The words painted a great picture. Keep up the good writing. All the best to you, cubby/jblackgloves
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Review of Love Sick  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
There was so much romance in this piece. You did a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. you had become a love sick monster. Well, that happens to everyone at one time or another. You wanted to be close to the one you were with and it was something you'll be glad that you had it. i don't see any room for improvement on this piece. You did a good job as I said before. Keep on writing. All the best to you. cubby/jblackgloves
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Review of Dare To Be  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Sound advice for a young lady to follow. It is with this advice that one can grow up to be a great woman. There were no mistakes in the whole piece. You did a good job. There are several pictures that one was able to see within this piece. The young lady growing up to be a woman and facing life as it is and dealing with the daily strife. That was a lovely picture. Be proud of this piece. You have worked hard to make it as good as it is which needs no improvement. cubby/jblackgloves
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Review of A Minds Journey  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
One can get lost in the words you used to paint a great picture. The beauty and granduer of the place seems heavenly. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did a good job. it was a nice read. it flowed well. The structure was solid. One could get lost in the beauty of your words. Keep up the good writing. All the best to you. cubby/jblackgloves
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718
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
another heartwarming piece is this one. You have so much love for this guy that he is a very fortunate man. One could see the joy that you have within these words. One could see the overwhelming desire that rests within you. You'll be strong as long as he is around you. I like to think that anyway. The structure was solid. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did good and a good job on this piece. cubby/jblackgloves
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719
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A great tribute to a great lady is this one piece. You have done well. It was full of life within your words. One could see a game going on. One could picture the coach yelling from the sidelines to do this and that. You have given a great tribute as I said. Volleyball is my favorite sport. I loved doing it when I was younger. iknow how taxing the game can be. Great job with this piece. Keep on writing. You're good at it. cubby/jblackgloves
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720
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A very romantic piece is this one. It is a loving piece that one can see the two of you kissing and holding hands and such things. it is a nice piece. The pictures were beautiful within your words. I wish you the best of everything and may the relationship lasts for years. cubby/jblackgloves
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721
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This was very romantic. it does tell of your love for your boyfriend. It must be something being close to another and knowing he cares for you as much as you do him. That is the joy of a relationship in the first place. You told your story well. The structure was solid. There was some rhyme in the piece and I liked that. You did a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. Keep on writing. all the best to you. cubby/jblackgloves
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Review of You and I  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
It is a very good piece. You have done well. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. It was a great read. I could see you on the snow. Sliding and gliding and all the other things a person would do in the snow. it was a pretty picture. I liked the part where you mentioned about the gear you both had. One could see you adorn in your bright colors and the other in theirs. The structure was solid. You had a good rhyming scheme. I like that. Good work. cubby/jblackgloves
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Review of Unspoken  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Silence does do alot of things. It can really make a difference in the way you and I see things. You should have used the word you for u and then the piece would have been perfect. This new way of text messenging is something else that I am not accustomed. Say what you mean and mean what you say. Silence does speak volumes at times. You are so right about that. Keep up the good writing. You did a nice job with this piece. cubby/jblackgloves
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Review of Greatness of god  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
You get your point across just well in this piece. There is no place for pioity in God's world. You are so right about not hurting anyone and they not hurting you. When it comes to God, you make the decision to love Him and He will love you He will love you no matter what. Since He sent His dear Son to give His life on the cross for us. You are so right about this piece. You should be proud of this piece. I don't see any room for improvement only to change it up some to make it easier to read. You can do that I know you can. cubby/jblackgloves
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725
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
it is a good piece. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did a good job. It was as if you were saying that there aren't meaning just words. Words are so necessary in everything that is done. Words are commands to some and others words are comforting things that one loves to hear. it was a good read. The structure was solid. I didn't notice any rhyming scheme but then again some pieces don't have to have one. cubby/jblackgloves
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