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Review of Sweet Lil one  
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Good piece about your son, Alex. There is nothing more great in the world than to have a child that you are proud of. You wish for him to grow up and be all that he can be. That is the natural wish of the parent. From your description of Alex he is a beautiful boy. You want him to grow up strong and able to take care of himself. I am sure that will happen for he is getting the love he so desparately needs from you. GREAT JOB. Keep writing. All the best to you. cubby/jblackgloves
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Review of Pretending  
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
One thinks about it being pot. That the character in the piece is using and is fully addicted to it. It is sad that the life you once lived is now in jeopardy. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did a good job. There is no room for improvement for it is said and done well. You have a good read on your hands. The structure was solid. There is every right to be proud of this piece. cubby/jblackgloves
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Review of The Poets Bleed  
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Spidey,
This is a good piece. You have done well. There were no mistakes in the whole piece. You could see some of othe pictures in this piece with the words you used. Like the man with the hat in the wind. There were many other pictures too that I could see. you did a good job. It was a nice read. The structure was solid. The piece flowed effortlessly. Be proud of this piece. You are a good writer. cubby/jblackgloves
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729
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Amber,
I was wondering why she wasnt' able to share the poem herself. I know it was a good job. it was so true about smiling. The smiles that people wear really helps them and the people who see them. it is so true that smiling can replace a frown and is less difficult on the muscles of the face to smile You did a good job as I said earlier. Take care and all the best to you. cubby/jblackgloves
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730
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
What a beautiful story this is about the Christmas trees! You have done well. it was so true for they do just that. Decorate the tree and keep it for a while and then tear it all down and throw out the tree. That is the sad part about the holidays. There isn't much a tree can do with it being thirsty. It is an awful part of the holidays as I said earlier. Keep up the good writing. All the best to you. cubby/jblackgloves
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Review of Who Said?  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Joshua,
This is a good piece and one that I really have enjoyed. it is about the love of one man for another man. The things that you said is how I feel about someone very close to me. However, ti is nt' a lover type relationship that we have. I am glad that you wrote this piece. it is hoped that the two of you are getting along well. I know I would want my lover happy with me. I can't say enough about t his piece and your piece of the love connection that there is with the two of you. BRAVO! may you have happiness and love all the time. cubby/jblackgloves
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Review of Gone  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello,
I just read your story. I was feeling for the man right up until the last few sentences. I don't know what came over him nor why he did what he did. You didn't say in your story. The officer was nonetheless professional in what he did according to the story. You got a great one on your hands. Keep up the good work. Thank you for an early morning read. cubby/jblackgloves
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733
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello,
I just got through reading your piece. It was a sad one. There is no hope for the two of you getting back together is there? He failed you too many times with his ways and lies. he tried to convince you that he loved you when he was seeing another woman at his job. That is an awful thing to have happen. You made a believer out of me with this piece. If it is fictional then all the better for you. If not, I am sorry that it has to be this way. cubby/jblackgloves
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Review of My Music.  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Blade,
This is a good piece. You have done a great job. it mentioned about you enjoying your music when you come home. That you turn the volume up so you can hear the beat. It is a good way to relax. Just don't get addicted to the music. The music will play strange tricks upon you depending upon what you hear. This was a good read. Your words flowed very well. Keep up the good work. cubby/jblackgloves
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735
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear legoiste,
This was some story. The pictures were there to show what you were writing about. it is a sad piece by the way. Melinda was two-timing him from what I read. So, he was going to take care of her. From what you described he did take care of her and not for the first time but several times. it was sad that she had feces going down her legs. That was an awful t hing to have happen. Then when he threw her in the mud hole her neck cracked. What a way to get rid of someone that you supposedly loved. Then he got the hives. I wonder where that they came from. Maybe there would be a continuation of this story in the future? I hope so I would be interested in reading more. Thank you for sharing this story.; cubby/jblackgloves
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Review of Doll House  
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dear squash,
GREAT story! I could sense the fear wtthin you.. I could somehow picture the ghosts doing their thing. You brought the house to life with this story. I have never seen a ghost before though I have dreamt of my mother being passed away for about 10 years and coming back to haunt me. That is as far as I have come to seeing a ghost. Your story was very interesting. I appreciate it and thank you for sharing the piece with us at WDC. cubby/jblackgloves
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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Megan,
I just read your piece "Rhythm of the heart" it is a good piece. you have done a great job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece You gave a picture of two people dancing in the rain. They had their own music within themselves it seems. You made a believer out of me with this piece. Keep up the good work. Continue to write on. My overall impression is that it was a good piece. cubby/jblackgloves
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Review of Soul Mate  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Noelle,
I liked this piece very much. it was a romantic piece and one that really made me glad that I chose to read it. There were such pretty pictures within your words. One doesn't need to hide behind a mask but be themselves all the time. You are such a person I believe that can do just that. of course, he will notice you, care for you, and even love you for who you are not what you look like. Just believe in yourself and the rest will follow through. I promise. cubby/jblackgloves
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739
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear Free,
This is a sad piece. There were pictures to be seen within your words. it is sad that a little child died. There was nothing you could have done. You were working and that is understandable. You had a job to take care of. Anyone would understand that. I am assuming this is a true story. if it isn't you surely made a believer out of me. I feel for you. Stop beating yourself up. it wasn't your fault. Mel is a great character in this story. I assume it was you that the story was about. Anyway, good writing. You kept my attention and that is hard to do at times. cubby/jblackgloves
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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear saw94,
I just read the whole piece. It is sad that your mom had to pass away. There was so much that was going on with you at the time I hardly would think that school was a haven for you. But it was so that is that. You gave some beautiful pictures here of your siblings and also of your mom. This is a true story isn't it? I like to think not but then again I am just a reader of your piece. I don't know you all but it would have been nice to have met you personally. i wish you and your family well. May things change for the better to keep you all together. That would be what your mom wanted to have happen. GREAT JOB. Keep them coming and don't stop writing. You are good at it. cubby/jblackgloves
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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Sir William James,
I am assuming that the Darkness is the her in this piece. it is a good piece for sure enough. There are pictures that one can see within your words. You painted a dark picture though. The "clothed in silky dark" makes me think of it being the darknes of which you speak. You have done a good job. To bring pictures to life through the written word is a great art. You have a great talent. Keep up the good work. cubby/jblackgloves
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Review of Running Blind  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear AJ,
How true this piece is! You have done a great job with this piece. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. I liked what you said about the fear issue and also about faith. Faith is the substance of fhings hoped for the evidence of things not seen. The Bible tells us that IN Hebrews. You have done a great piece here. I believe every word of this to be truth. Great job. cubby/jblackgloves
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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear spidey,
I could see and hear the dog barking and the siren of the police car.. This is some good writing. You painted the picture so well i could see it and hear it. You didn't just tell the story you showed it. That is the great sign of a good writer. You have done it , Sir. You have done it well. I didn't see any mistakes in the piece. That was a definite plus for you. Good writing includes good grammar and spelling. You have done it and done a good job doing it. Thank you for sharing your story. cubby/jblackgloves
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Review of Remember the time  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear woodpigeon,
This was a sad piece. it is so bad when friendships have to end or just end. There was something else within the friend that made him want to leave you. it seems pretty cold. You painted a great but sorrowful picture here. it is sad when friends break up over something silly or personal. You are a great writer. Keep the good work coming. cubby/jblackgloves
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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is a great outreach program. I am thoroughally thrilled to be a part of the Angel Army. I didnt' know so much stuff was going on until I got the message tonight. I would love to review some of the works that people have done and would do just that if I had the chance. So, you can look out for me to do some reviewing for the Angel Army. This is a great piece here. You have done well.
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Review of Disappointment  
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Ghost Shadow,
This piece was very good. You did it well. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. It was a sad piece. The structure was solid. It was a good read. You did a good job. I liked the line My actions were louder thanwhat I've spoken. That is the way it is with people their actions speak volumes. Be proud of this piece. You're a good writer. cubby/jblackgloves
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Review of It was  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Tiffani,
I just got through reading both pieces. They were good ones. It was no mistakes found in the whole piece. The structure was good and solid. It had to do something with love is all i know. It was something that had several pictures due to the words you used. Keep up the good work. All the best to you, cubby/jblackgloves
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Review of Solitary Road  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a sad piece. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did a good job. it was clear that Solitary Road was the place you were at. There were pictures to be seen through your words. The snow for one was a good picture. The heat was another. One could see the snow and feel the heat. You brought your work to life with the words you used. Good for you. Keep writing. You're good at it.
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Review of Forgiveness  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Yes God is the Answer to all our situations and problems. It is He that makes the difference in our lives. You are right there. it is right to pray for your enemies. You are to treat them as you wish to be treated. The Golden Rule applies to your situation and mine as well. it is so right to pray and ask God for the bubble of protection. You have attained that and it is good for you. It is good for me, as well. I dont' know what problems you face but God is the answer. all the best to you, cubby/jblackgloves
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750
In affiliation with Poetry Inspiration  
Rated: E | (4.5)
You did a good job with this piece. It was something like I haven't read before. I didn't know you could take two words and put t hem together as you did. The structure was good. Your choice of words unique. But it made pretty good sense to know what was happening. The old man's house was on fire. It was due to the grandson and it being his fault. Keep writing. I am anxious to read another piece such as this one. You made perfect sense to me. Great job. Loved it. cubby/jblackgloves
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