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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear legoiste,
This was some story. The pictures were there to show what you were writing about. it is a sad piece by the way. Melinda was two-timing him from what I read. So, he was going to take care of her. From what you described he did take care of her and not for the first time but several times. it was sad that she had feces going down her legs. That was an awful t hing to have happen. Then when he threw her in the mud hole her neck cracked. What a way to get rid of someone that you supposedly loved. Then he got the hives. I wonder where that they came from. Maybe there would be a continuation of this story in the future? I hope so I would be interested in reading more. Thank you for sharing this story.; cubby/jblackgloves
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Review of Doll House  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dear squash,
GREAT story! I could sense the fear wtthin you.. I could somehow picture the ghosts doing their thing. You brought the house to life with this story. I have never seen a ghost before though I have dreamt of my mother being passed away for about 10 years and coming back to haunt me. That is as far as I have come to seeing a ghost. Your story was very interesting. I appreciate it and thank you for sharing the piece with us at WDC. cubby/jblackgloves
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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Megan,
I just read your piece "Rhythm of the heart" it is a good piece. you have done a great job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece You gave a picture of two people dancing in the rain. They had their own music within themselves it seems. You made a believer out of me with this piece. Keep up the good work. Continue to write on. My overall impression is that it was a good piece. cubby/jblackgloves
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Review of Soul Mate  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Noelle,
I liked this piece very much. it was a romantic piece and one that really made me glad that I chose to read it. There were such pretty pictures within your words. One doesn't need to hide behind a mask but be themselves all the time. You are such a person I believe that can do just that. of course, he will notice you, care for you, and even love you for who you are not what you look like. Just believe in yourself and the rest will follow through. I promise. cubby/jblackgloves
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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear Free,
This is a sad piece. There were pictures to be seen within your words. it is sad that a little child died. There was nothing you could have done. You were working and that is understandable. You had a job to take care of. Anyone would understand that. I am assuming this is a true story. if it isn't you surely made a believer out of me. I feel for you. Stop beating yourself up. it wasn't your fault. Mel is a great character in this story. I assume it was you that the story was about. Anyway, good writing. You kept my attention and that is hard to do at times. cubby/jblackgloves
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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear saw94,
I just read the whole piece. It is sad that your mom had to pass away. There was so much that was going on with you at the time I hardly would think that school was a haven for you. But it was so that is that. You gave some beautiful pictures here of your siblings and also of your mom. This is a true story isn't it? I like to think not but then again I am just a reader of your piece. I don't know you all but it would have been nice to have met you personally. i wish you and your family well. May things change for the better to keep you all together. That would be what your mom wanted to have happen. GREAT JOB. Keep them coming and don't stop writing. You are good at it. cubby/jblackgloves
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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Sir William James,
I am assuming that the Darkness is the her in this piece. it is a good piece for sure enough. There are pictures that one can see within your words. You painted a dark picture though. The "clothed in silky dark" makes me think of it being the darknes of which you speak. You have done a good job. To bring pictures to life through the written word is a great art. You have a great talent. Keep up the good work. cubby/jblackgloves
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Review of Running Blind  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear AJ,
How true this piece is! You have done a great job with this piece. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. I liked what you said about the fear issue and also about faith. Faith is the substance of fhings hoped for the evidence of things not seen. The Bible tells us that IN Hebrews. You have done a great piece here. I believe every word of this to be truth. Great job. cubby/jblackgloves
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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear spidey,
I could see and hear the dog barking and the siren of the police car.. This is some good writing. You painted the picture so well i could see it and hear it. You didn't just tell the story you showed it. That is the great sign of a good writer. You have done it , Sir. You have done it well. I didn't see any mistakes in the piece. That was a definite plus for you. Good writing includes good grammar and spelling. You have done it and done a good job doing it. Thank you for sharing your story. cubby/jblackgloves
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Review of Remember the time  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear woodpigeon,
This was a sad piece. it is so bad when friendships have to end or just end. There was something else within the friend that made him want to leave you. it seems pretty cold. You painted a great but sorrowful picture here. it is sad when friends break up over something silly or personal. You are a great writer. Keep the good work coming. cubby/jblackgloves
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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is a great outreach program. I am thoroughally thrilled to be a part of the Angel Army. I didnt' know so much stuff was going on until I got the message tonight. I would love to review some of the works that people have done and would do just that if I had the chance. So, you can look out for me to do some reviewing for the Angel Army. This is a great piece here. You have done well.
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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is spelled out wonderfully. There is the acceptable and not the acceptable mentioned. I look forward to giving it a try in entering the contest. The prizes are worth the entering. i would love to earn a merit badge and the 5k in gps. at least. Thank you for this contest and informing me about it. I am but an humble member of the Angel Army. I remain, cubby Brickhouse/jblackgloves Please accept these 5,000 gps for to help with this cause. Thank you.
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Review of Disappointment  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with WDC Frontliners Group  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Ghost Shadow,
This piece was very good. You did it well. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. It was a sad piece. The structure was solid. It was a good read. You did a good job. I liked the line My actions were louder thanwhat I've spoken. That is the way it is with people their actions speak volumes. Be proud of this piece. You're a good writer. cubby/jblackgloves
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Review of It was  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Tiffani,
I just got through reading both pieces. They were good ones. It was no mistakes found in the whole piece. The structure was good and solid. It had to do something with love is all i know. It was something that had several pictures due to the words you used. Keep up the good work. All the best to you, cubby/jblackgloves
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Review of Solitary Road  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a sad piece. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did a good job. it was clear that Solitary Road was the place you were at. There were pictures to be seen through your words. The snow for one was a good picture. The heat was another. One could see the snow and feel the heat. You brought your work to life with the words you used. Good for you. Keep writing. You're good at it.
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Review of Forgiveness  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Yes God is the Answer to all our situations and problems. It is He that makes the difference in our lives. You are right there. it is right to pray for your enemies. You are to treat them as you wish to be treated. The Golden Rule applies to your situation and mine as well. it is so right to pray and ask God for the bubble of protection. You have attained that and it is good for you. It is good for me, as well. I dont' know what problems you face but God is the answer. all the best to you, cubby/jblackgloves
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In affiliation with Poetry Inspiration  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
You did a good job with this piece. It was something like I haven't read before. I didn't know you could take two words and put t hem together as you did. The structure was good. Your choice of words unique. But it made pretty good sense to know what was happening. The old man's house was on fire. It was due to the grandson and it being his fault. Keep writing. I am anxious to read another piece such as this one. You made perfect sense to me. Great job. Loved it. cubby/jblackgloves
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Review of Accept Me  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Very good piece. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. The structure was good and the piece flowed nicely. it is so hard to be accepted in high school as it is much more with you being 4'10" which is considered short. However, you are the size you are supposed to be. Being a freshman, is something that the upperclassmen had to go through with the first year of high school. They didnt' become an upperclassman right off the bad. So, it is clear that you should be most proud of you being a freshman. Some people don''t make it through grammar school or junior high without quitting. BE proud of your place in high school. I believe that you are and that is good. You go get them lady your days of being an upperclassman is yet to be. cubby/jblackgloves
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Review of The Journey  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a good piece. You have done well. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. It was a good one. There was the mentioning of you finding the man you were before. Does that same man have strength and caring? If so, then that man is what or who you should be. I liked the words or the line, "Out of the ashes like a phoenix I soar". That was a good line. There is true strength there and it is so very clear that you were on your way back to being the man you were before. I liked teh structure of the poem. You have a well written piece. You should be proud of it and then you should put it in your highlighted pieces on your port. You deserve so much for it. Praise I mean. You got my attention from beginning to the end. All the best, cubby/jblackgloves
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Review of Unperfect  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a sad piece. It tells more within the words than the words themselves. You are not loved and you are sorry for that. That you're not a size 10 and pretty as the other person wants. You can't be someone you're not. That wouldn't be you. You have to hold your head high and go on without the other person. The thing is that they dont' deserve you. You are much better than anyone else. You loved this person and apparently you still love them. Well, kick them to the curb. You are much better than themselves. Stand up and be counted. You have a right to be counted on for anything that you are able to do and be. I am all for you. Take care of yourself. Cubby/jblackgloves
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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a sad piece. There is so much within the short span of your piece. It is a well written piece. You have done a good job. There were few mistakes found in the piece. You may want to go back and read it over again and correct the piece with the spelling of some of the words. Other than that I didn't see anything wrong with it. You did a good piece. The structure was good too. It flowed nicely. All the best to you, cubby
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Review of Never Again  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a sad piece. There are so many things that happens in a relationship that can enhance it or destroy it. It is for sure that your relationship was destroyed. That is the sad part. I hate having to read such things but that they are part of life and life must go on. I am glad that you got your feelings out on the screen. All the best to you, cubby
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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is so very well spelled out to me. I know you are doing the right thing for Dawn. I would like to help with the remainiing four hundred gift points I have. I know what it is to being upgraded and keeping your port alive. I know what it is to have a need and then someone supplies that need for you. I know this isn't much but it is all I have in the hundreds anywayy. It is could not be used for any better purpose than this one. Thank you, Dean Harley for having this piece. Your student, cubby Brickhouse
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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This was a great piece. I appreciate how things were spelled out as to what kind of help a Newbie would be able to find in WDC. I am a Veteran now myself and a member of the Angel Army. I would like to help out anyway I could for a newbie or any other member of WDC. I think it is a great part of WDC to have this great group of individuals to be active in so many things. I have a brother that is a Veteran himself but still considered a Newbie for he has been with the site for less than a year. Thank you again for having this group. cubby/jblackgloves Here is 10,000 gps to help with anything that they could be used. I don't mind supporting the group at all. This is the best that I can do.
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Review of I Am By Nature  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
You are speaking about Nature and the way that we are taking care of it and also not taking care of it. There is much to what you say. Nature is cut down and burned to make new houses and fire wood for the heaters in people's homes. There is a wasted land that wasn't so many years ago. There is so much to your piece. I liked it. All the best, cubby
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