This was a touching story. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There was color within your words, too. It is about needing help. The knife and the gun was a bit drastic dont' you think? I am sure that it really didnt' happen but you made it convincing enough to believe it did. That is the sign of a good writer.To make people believe what you are saying. You made a believer out of me.
My overall impression is that this ia a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes fofund n the whole piece. You added colors to your words, too. I got it that this is in the past. One may ask if man ever learns from the past experiences. It seems possible with this piece.
This was an awesome story. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. you have done well. You have done a good job. There was color wiithin your words. too. it is so much like you said about him being so far away from home. Mu was his life partnerr and unlike the marriages of the Westerrn world there was something to theirs.
I love being a reviewee. I am putting up 20,000 gps for this cause. It is hoped that I can get on the next port raiid. I love to review. It is something that makes the days go faster and it is enjoyable. it is hoped that the 20,000 gps will be a big help in funding this worthy cause.
I wouldn't change a t hing. Everything seems to be in place. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. you have done a good job. You have done well. There was colors withing youw words, too.. I liked reading the comments afterward. Itr was a good piece. You did a great job with this. I noticed that it was for 18years or older.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There was color within your words, too. It is about being used. Used up until there is nothing left but the body to the thrown away. You made perfect sense of this piece.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There was color within your words, too. I was able to see the many things you described. It was sad that your wife left you to yourself. The children and grandchildren are missing alot of good things by not coming to see you.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You added colors to your words, too. It is something else to have chocolate cake for breakfast. it seems the whole family enjoys it. Sure must be something to wake up for. I don't know if I would want to have just chocolate cake for breakfast. I am fond of my eggs and bacon for breakfast.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You added colors to your words, too. It is about a lighthouse and a lover. The lover is giving a certain amount of light in the relationship.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the piece. There was color within your words, too. It is about anxiety. There are unanswered questions in the mind of the speaker.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There was colors within your words, too. It is about being strong and dying strong. This is only done with the help of the Lord Jesus. He gave us energy to do the things we do. KEEP WRITING. ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There were colors within your words, too. It is about a factured soul. There was much within the poem.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. There was one mistake i found in the poem. The word is should be are. This is when you were mentioning echoes. There are echoes not is. You have done well. You have done a good job. There was color within your words, too.
My overall impression is that this is a good piece., You have done well. You have done a good job. There were few mistakes found in the piece. There was color within your words, too. I agree with you that some people who have been found to have done a crime is rehabilitated should be again a good member of society.
Good but sad piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There were colors added to your words, too. It is hard to give love to someone and for it not to be returned. it seems that this is what has happened within this piece.
Good piece. I enjoyed reading it. It was a chronicle of the man being small at one time as a boy loving the ocean. Then he grows to be a teenager and then into an adult loving the ocean. It was a beautiful picture of a man loving the ocean. KEEP WRITING. ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
Great piece. I enjoyed reading it. There were no mistakes found in the piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There was the picture I saw of you being a little girl and being with your dad. Now, you are grown up and you are ready to show your dad that you aren't his little girl anymore. ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
PERFECT! My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There was color added to your words, too. It is about speaking to a family member that can hurt or help that individual. It is about not influencing another by just your words but by your actions. Words said in love go a long way. Words said in the heat of the moment are hurtful words that last a lifetime. ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** {bitem:1572181]
My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes in the piece. There were colors added to your words, too. It is about the sea. There are many things the sea does. Where the land and the sea make love is another way to looking at it. ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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PERFECT! I wouldn't change a thing. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. There was color within your words, too. It is about you and the climb you took to save the man who was on the edge of the rocks. I liked the story. ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ) ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
BEAUTIFUL SIG! The roses are a nice touch to the sig. it is a good one. There are so many uses for this sig. However, you are going to be using it for your addiction poetry. I think that is great. Did you do the art work yourself? If so, that enhances the beauty of it.
Short piece. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were colors within your words. It is about you. You're several things in this piece. The things you want to be aren't happening. ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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My overall impression is that this is a good piece. You have done well. You have done a good job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. The colors were there too. It is about you and the dream you had. It was rather scary to say the least. The picture was something again. The person that was laying beside you was unfamiliar to you, I take it. ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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