Love is a wonderful thing. It separates the loved from the unloved. In ways that are not easy to comprehend. Love is grand. It is something that the whole world needs today and in this life for it to be kind to the ones who have it. You did well in presenting this for review and I am glad I clicked it.
This is sad. Its about a train that will not stop or arrive for you. You hope it will. It does its thing and then it stops and the engineer steps off the train. You did well in preesnting this for review. You are a good writer. you kept my attention and that isn't hard to do but unusual. Keep on writing.
You have not got the Lord as I had known Him to be. It is some unknown god of your own making and it is clear that you are speaking to him about the woes and the pain of those around you and yourself. The Lord I know would not want hoopla being done in His name. This is my response to your piece and hope that it is well taken and not considered to be harrassment of any kind. You did well in presenting this piece for us to read. You are a good wriiter. I hope you will keep on writing. This is just my personal opinion.
Youwere right in what you said. She sees herself as getting older and she doesn't know how to cope with it. She is many things. You did well in presenting this for us to read. You are good writing and you have a great talent for it. I hope you will continue to write. you're good at it.
One such as I am has had a hard time to understand what you are speaking about. I am the problem and not you. So please don't take offense. I am happy that you are writing and hope you will keep on doing it. you did well in presenting this for us to read.
You're the first one I have given a 5.0 stars today. It is worthy of a lot of praise. You kept my attention which isn't hard to do but for it to be unusual. You did well in presenting this for us to read. You are a good wriiter. you must have studied writing somewhere. You did well. I hope you keep on writing. You're good at it.
I don't know what to say but good job on this piece. You did well in presenting this to us for us to read. There is no room for improvement that I can see. You did a good job. I hope that you will keep writing. You're good at it. There are words in here I didn't understand but that didn't take away from the reading.
WHEW! What a story? It is of an unborn fetus. The mother is having an abortion is what it seems to be to me. The crulest thing a mother can do is to have one of them. You write well. You kept my attention and that isn't hard to do but it isnt an often thing. Keep writing. You're good at it.
Your rhyming scheme is great. I liked it. I never heard of a goad before so what is it? I would be interested to find out what it is. You did well in presenting thiswork for us to read. You are a good writer. Keep on writing. I don't see any room for improvement.
This is good. It shows what can happen and will happen if a girl isn't careful. the plans that you had are gone and the future is now Sarah's live. If this is true then I sorry for you. I hope that it is fiction. The characters come out of without any problems and it is a happy ending forthe child. Keep writing. you're good at it.
This is a piece that is sad. You have all ideas of what the person is saying through your net you have made. It is a shame that the person doesn't love you anymore. I would be shocked to hear something like this as you were. You have done well in presentthis for us to read. Keep on writing. You're good at it.
How true! God is the only One that anyone would ever need in their life. You have hit the nail on the head so to speak. God is amaazing. God is fogiving and He is wonderful. You did well in presenting this for us to read. I wish I had come up with it myself But then again if I did maybe you'd be reviewing me.
I have to agree with you on this subject. The world is growing toofast and there is nothingto stop it. Humanity is lost in the shuffle. Humanity is really beauty as you said. You did well in presenting this piece for us to read. Keep on writing Y'ou're good at it.
Love is the richest when it is shared by two people. It seems that you love her very much and am happy with having her in your life. There is nothing but good things I can say about this piece. You have done well in presenting this piece for us to read. Keep writing. You're good at it..
Picturesque in nature and a great piece is this one. You have captured the ocean in this piece. You have painted this pictre well. You have done well in presenting this for us to read. I hope you will keep on writing. You're good at it.I will look to read more of your work when you have something new.
Love the key to this piece is the greates thing ever. You have captured it very well. Love is free. Love is grand. Love transcends all boundaries. you have done well in presentingthis for us to read. Makes me wish I had written this myself. Good job. Keep writing.
This happens to all us in writing. It is something to overcome and not fear it. You are like the rest of us in the writing world. I think you did a good job. You presented it well. I wish I had written this myself. Be proud of it. You didwell.
Great story. You really know how to tell a story. You had my full attention. Iwas seeing all of this happening You did well in presenting this to us. You're a good writer. To keep my attention you are doing a great job.You're a great writer. Keep writing.
Everything was great about this piece. The only way to improve it is to capitalize the nameGod. It means something special to have read this story. I would have been disappointed too if no one found my poetry to be of worth. I would have got to myself andstayed there. You did well in presentingthis piece for us to read. Keep on writing
Beautiful and so serene. You can picture the dove flying. You can see the man sittting waiting for something to happen. The man sits and gets no where. The dove flies free and away from here to another place. You did well in presenting this to us. Keep on writing. You're good at it.
The only thing I saw wrong with this piece isthat you didn't capitalize the pronouns referring to God. It as if you are crying out to God for the help only He can give You did well in presenting this to us. I liked what you had to say. Keep on writing.
Well, I am not disappointed in what I have read. It is a great story and one that give tribute to your love of your life. You did well in presenting this for us to read. I am happy that it is not the sappy stories that people tell. It isdeep with deep emotion. I am glad that I clicked this story. Thank you for writing it. Keep on writing.
This was very meaningful to me. I could understand it all and loved it. For it made me think of my own dad and how much he taught me. you did well in presenting this for us to read. I am glad that I clicked it. I hope you wlll keep on writing. You're goodat it.
What a story. This is a true account of your growing up and facing the darkness. I am glad to say that I am not afraid of the dark either. I have to have lights out for me to get some sleep. you have done well in presenting this to us. Keep writing. you're good at it.
This is a heartwarming story. The idea of him growing up to be what he is to day is gratifying. You have done welll in presentng this piece to us. I liked the story very much and ask that you keep on writing. The characters are real.The emotions are real. I am glad I ciicked it.
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