Metaphorially speaking this is a great piece. One gets the idea of life in general and how important it is to use it wisely. The anvil and the hammar things you'd find in a blacksmith shop are the tools used to beat out the metal. The metal being life is something great and fragile. You did well in presenting t his piece for review. You are a good writer and it shows.
I feel as though I have been on a journey with this piece. I almost touched the stars. I felt the sun pulling me in and the other things that you said in this piece was happening to me. You did well in presenting this piece for review. You are a good writer. How do I know? Because I just read one of your pieces and loved it. Keep on writing.
Beautful piece is this one. You are in another part of the world where Sping is in December. I never really knew about that sort of thing until I heard a missionary bring it up in his slides. You did well in presenting this piece for review. I liked it for it brought back memories of the good all days. I hope you will keep on writing. It is so important that you do we need good writers in this land of ours.
This is so sad. You trusted in someone who let you down. He was with a wife and a child. It is always bad when this happens to those unsuspecting You did well in presenting this piece for review. Iam glad that I clicked it. I am really sorry for your loss of having someone in your life and hope that the next one will be true to you.
What a beauiful piece this is. You have captured it all in the picture you have painted. The simplicity is the thing I liked about this piece. You did well in presenting this for review. You do well in writing. It shows in this piece. I am glad I clicked it.
Love is grand. The whole piece speaks of love of one that doesn't know the other. It is a beautiful piece of work. You have done well in presenting this piece for review. I liked it for the simplicty of the piece. It is straightforward and is a good job. Keep on writing. You're great at it.
I know this for a fact that words do hurt. I have been put down for my weight and other things along the way. I feel for the emphasies of the lines you used at the ending of this is just that reason and I don't fault you for using them. You did well in presenting this for review. You are a good writer. You are needed in WDC. So please keep on writing. You would be doing us a favor.
This has been another haiku that I have read from the many others that I used to read. It is very well done. You get the picture and it is soothing to see. The snowfall and the walking you are doing are just two of the picturess I have seen You did well in presenting this for review. You are a good writer and hope that you will keep writing.
This is really sad. You are giving your love to another and it may be that he or she has someone else that they love even more. You are left out in the cold trying to find your feelings and it is an awful thing to be without someone you love. You did well in presenting this for review. You are a good writer and I would love to see moreof your work. Keep on writing.
Sad this is very sad. You trusted someonewith your heart and got burned inthe end. It is goingto get better for you I just know it is. You did well in presenting this piece for review and its reading. I am saddened for you but glad that I clicked thepiece. I hope you will keep on writing. You're good at it.
This is a wonderful thing you are doing. It is so important tothe earth that we live smog free and other ways free of the usual I like the whole thing you have here. I may enter it myself. You did well in presenting this for us to read.
Everything is spelled out as to what is accptable andwhat is not.
This is a sad picture. You are mad at your mother for leaving you. It is so hurtful and painful to even comtemplate. But you got it all out in the open now and hopefully things are better. i sure hope they are. You did well in presenting this for us to read. I hopeyou will keep on writing. you're good at it.
This is a beauiful little piece. The rose is a metaphor or could be one. Life is a fleeting thing and with that life comes the responsibility of every man to be prepared to go to Heaven. I liked this piece and am so happy you presented it for reviewing.
This was very interesting. I am happy that you have shared some of your life with us in this piece. I was waiting for the ball to drop with you and your mate. But, you said it wasn't his fault about the situation. That was very gracious of you to not be upset. You didwell in presenting this piece for us to read. I am very glad that I clicked it Keep on writing. You'r good at it.
You have the first 5.0 stars for the day. It was very touching and very moving. I hope you haven't had to go through with something like this in your own life. But if you have then I fee for you and cry with you for i too have had to lose a brother for dying within a few days of his birth. I hope you will continue to write. you're good at it.
This is a good piece. It is full of love and romance. I am glad to have clicked it. It is telling me that the love of your life is nothing more than a dream. Well, no wonder you are happiest when you are asleep. I would be too. You did well in presenting this for review. I hope that you will keep on writing. You're good at it.
This was absolutely grand. I liked the whole piece. It was with excitement and also good times that you all four have had. I hope there will be a sequel to this piece. I am interested in knowing how things turned out. You did well in presenthing this for us to read. You are a good writer and we need them in our lives. Keep on writing.
This was a moumental task that you did in doing this piece. It a great one and one that I enjoyed reading. There are some typos and mispelled words that we will edit together. I should have done it before you put it up. I am sorry for letting you down. I could see the ship sinking and the iceburg plus the children and women getting on the lifeboats. It was like looking at it on the TV. You did well in coming up with this piece. I am glad I clicked it. Hopeyou will havea good day today. cubby
This is a good piece. I am glad I clcked it. Love is the key to hearts and souls that are out here wandering around looking for it. You have done well in presenting this piece for review. It is a good piece as I said earlier. I hope that you will keep on writing. You're good at it.
This is really sad. There are other pieces that I could have read but I chose this one. I am glad I clicked it. You have done well in presenting this for review. It is sad because there is no longer any friendship between the two of you. Keep writing. You're good at it.
What an imagination you have! I was pulling for the man to get back to civilization and for him to be on his merry way home. Now he is to be a wasp and a human at the same time. This is a good piece. you should be proud of what you have done. You did welll in presenting this for review. I enjoyed it.
Good piece here. I liked the imagery of the whole piece. The subject was melting and of the ice that formed. You did well in presenting this for review. You did a good job. You are a great writer. I hope that you will keep on writing. You're good at it.
This is a sad piece. The poor man wondered and didnt have any answers to his questions. This is rather sad. You did well in presenting this for review. I can see you are a good writer. I hope you will keep on writing. There was nb room for improvement.
This is great! I couldn't have done a better job myself. Not being pious am I? No seriously you did a great job and made me smile and then when I learned it was for chiildren he done his thing made me happy. You did wel in presenting this for review. I hope that you will keep on writing. you're good at it.
What a great thing you are doing. I sure wish we had it whenI was a newbie. I have been here for almost 2 years now and don't consider myself a newbie but will be glad to help you in anyway I can. You did well in presenting this for review. I am glad I clicked it. Keep on writing. I care about you and your group. Here are some gps to get you started. I hope these will help you get started right.
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