I have felt this for my ex-husband, and I had placed him above anything even my Lord. I was praying for him, and I thank God every day for allowing me to be with this man. Well sixteen years and three children later, he decided to find a woman just four years older than our marriage.
Now I am alone still waiting for that real love, and hope that I can have a healthy balance.
This was a wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida
This is a simple poem that is written in a very old fashioned and sweet way. I love it, and I know that the emotion in this peice can be related to every one that reads it.
I think that this is a very fluent peice that is an enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing this peice with us.
I like this poem because it reminds me of the many time that I thought that something in my life caused the world to stop existing for me. This is a really nice story that you took me into with very well-chosen words.
I know that if it weren't for the times that the world seems to just stop for me, the world would jsut be a boring place to live int. Then I realize that it is just being spiced to stop the bordem.
I love this poem, and it makes me miss so many people who has moved or I have moved from. This is well written that it took me into a walk through the lost faces of my heart. I can see your talent and skill in the words of this peice.
I love this poem, and I remember looking up to my dad. It seemed that I was just as tall as his waste, and he just seemed to be as tall as any mountain.
Well, I love my dad. He was a very hard man. He made me cry alot. He did so many things that was not right. My mind closed alot of them out, and I do not remember much.
THis is a wonderful poem, and I can certainly relate to it. I got married at twenty, and it lasted for sixteen year. I longed to be loved as a teenager, and still do to this day.
As your poem states this world is always looking to be loved even those who doesn't amit that they want to be married.
Thank you so much for sharing this with us. It was a great read.
This is a beautiful letter to a child from a loving mother. I have been there. I have three children. My daughter is thirteen. Her name is Charity, and I have two boys. Christian is twelve, and Noah is nine. These children are still my life.
I am living without a male in their lives, and that caused my daughter move in with her dad. I miss her, and I don't feel complete without her, but I must do the best for the boys. While I car for the boys, I still let my little girl know that I am sill here for her.
Thank you for sharing your love of your child with us. You will be a great mother.
My favorite part is, "Writing is a God given talent for us to read". This tells us that it is a privalige to read all the words that God has given others to write.
I think that the human nature is to express our selves to each other, and those words are sometimes so hard to speak so we write them.
I also think that our words are hiding in this world to encourage others even after we are gone.
Thank you so much for sharing these words with us.
This is a very great poem, and I love the twist ending. It was great to see that the family member made it home, and the return eased the heart of the children I'm sure.
I have missed a pet myself as a child, and worried about it when it was storming. My little one's have done the same. I love the way you caught this emotion in your poem.
Though you missed the happiest color of all (pink), I love this poem. I like to take a look at the colours around us. I think that this poem has a good flow, and you have taken us with you as you show us the beauty arounds. You have shown us how the different colors effect a person.
I think that yellow reminds me of a sunny bright day, and I can nearly here the birds singing. I also think that pink makes me feel happy, and blue is my color of the days I lay on my back watching the clouds.
I think that I may write some thing about colors becuae your peice is inspiring to me.
Girl I can relate to this poem. I am addicted to wdc, but in a good way. I have to have my friends around me, and my friendly family here have put up many prayers in my behalf.
You have written a very nice tribute to wdc, and before I forget, I got an email that said that the founders of this site is having a baby. I think that their id's are story master and story mistress. They are haveing a son with the name Jack.
Good things are here even rejoycing with each other int he good things in life and standing with each other during the bad.
Oh, how beautiful the story and song is. It is nice when we are visited by love, and I know that that love is still surrounding you. Indy did not choose to leave you, and I believe that God allows your baby to take care of mommy sometimes. Who knows, maybe God allows his little angel to sing that song to you later at night as he watches you sleep.
I will be back to read more soon, and thank you for sharing this part of your heart with us.
Ida
I have not read your poems yet, but I am about to do so now. The introduction to this folder nearly brings tears to my eyes, and right now that is easy to do. I know that I will enjoy them just from the titles, and I am sure that there is someone around you that has already felt every word that I am about to read.
Thank yout in advance for sharing these special peices of your heart.
Ida
This is a very good poem. I thought that it would be one about a angry man due to his girl's "silly" questions. I am so glad that as I read I found that it was told by a loving man who really was there for his girlfriend.
I hope that I will find the other part of my heart someday.
This is a very good read, and I certainly can relate to it today.
I am going through a deep depression, and I am turning to wdc as my cruch. I am having problems reviewing with this lap top, but I am giving it a good shot with the hopes that the reviews make to you.
I love the flow of the poem, and I think that it is a great and emotional peice of material.
This is a wonderful peice. I loved the emotion behind it, and the words of the paragrahs above were heart felt. This is a great peice, and I loved the flow and the message of the words. I can relate to them, and I can feel the love that is being waited for.
I was a little afraid to read this because I am very careful about reading things that might be totally against the Bible, but I loved it. It reminded me that God did bid and pay the ultimate price for each of us.
I loved this peice, and the message was so important as well as entertaining.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida
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