I love this story, and can truly relate to it. Since my divorce I have been looking for my Mr right, and when I was married I was praying that he was mr right.
My favorite part is:
April always thought it ironic, and just her luck, that her greatest professional successes were realized during times of the year that also served as a reminder of her greatest personal failures. Like her flowers, April's romantic prospects were all quick to bloom, and just as quick to wither and die.
I truly loved the last line because it summed up the last four years of my life since my divorce. One relationship after another started and withered away.
I was wondering what you drew your flower power from? Do you do flowers? Did you have a high school rival?
You really did a good job taking me into this story as well.
I love this story. You painted it so beautifully with just these few words. To me that shows true talent. It is so much like that life that I have been living. So full of anxiety and fear, but I think that my shoot finally is beginning to open.
I think that you have done a great job here, and I love the way you took me into the story.
My favorite part is:
"That's right," Annette confirmed with a satisfied smirk, as she moved to buckle Thomas into his car seat. "I spent all week looking for him and worrying. So now I'm returning the favor. Have fun chasing after him... and trying to get him to take his bath or brush his teeth when he won't let you near him!"
It reminds me of my life with my children.
You have created a story that leaves me waiting for more. Thank you for the oppurtunity of reading this peice.
This is very informative with a very few words. I agree that memories are what lives forever, and I hope that I can make the right decisions that can be passed down from my children to my grandchildren.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
I really enjoyed the read, and I will be back to visit your port.
This is an excellent peice, and I truly can relate to this. I am having problems with this becuase it seems that your enemies are in your own family.
This poem carries an inportant message with a great rhyme and flow. I think that the only way to real happiness is to forgive and let go of the bitterness.
Thank you for the great read.
Ida
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This is a wonderful way to help each other. I know that you have been doing so much for this community of WDC, and I would like to use this time to let you know how much it is appreicated. I know that it has encouraged me as well as a lot of writers here.
This sounds like an wonderful way to exercize your talent. I would like to know what the prompts are for the next few days. I could not figure out just where to find the prompts.
I would love to have the informations so that I can enter. Also I have a question.
Can a person enter as many days as they want?
This is an excellent opportunity. I also love trying to figure out the twists of stories and movies. I will enter this contest as soon as I get a chance, and hope that this computer allows me to summit an entry. It gives me problems.
This is a very good peice that leaves me wanting to read more.. The funny thing is that I have a piece in my port that starts out a little like this. I was going to enter it in another contest of the Outdoors. I have lost the address to enter it.
Hello, I am Ida, and I thought that I would stop by to see what you had for me to read.
These are the best parts that stick out for me:
I think that I loved this all. My favorite part was the poem Sex Me Again and Again.
I think that it was because it is something that is unexpected in a journal type writing, but it is something that most of us feel.
The message that I received from reading this item is:
I think that this is more of a writer's journal, and I think that it shows true talent on how to display feelings along with poetry. I think that (if you don't mind) I will use this type of out line to journal my self. This seems to be a quick and easy to do it.
This item needs:
This is great the way it is.
In closing, I truly found inspiration for something that I have been encouraged many times to do, but found it hard to keep doing.. journaling.
I loved this peice. It shows that we can see beauty and wonder in everything if we look. The best thing is that we can see worth in things that can go un-noticed most of the time.
This is very well written and was able to help me to look for worth in my days good and bad there is always worth.
I think that I would love to write a book about strength or Bible. I am going to take you suggestions to heart. I did want to write on about my life after the divorce, but I am having trouble keeping it right.
I have started on that project called When Happy Ever After Fails.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida
My words are ways to leave peices of myself behind for my children.
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This is so inspirational for me. I can not buy the book, but the fact that you are living with ADHD is so good for me to hear.
My son Christian has ADHD, anxiety disorder, and some other problems. I am going to talk to him tomorrow and let him know that there is a novelist that has made their dreams come true.
I am so encouraged with this that I can't wait to visit your port soon.
This was a beautiful story, and who could not keep reading with an opening like:
My deathbed has been waiting for me since the day I was born, out there fixed in time and space. My random meanderings through life have served to change none of this. Every step and misstep, that I have taken faithfully brought me closer to that inevitable end.
This is something that at one time or another we have all wondered. Where will we die? Who would be there?
I love how you took us to the store. The discription of the blood flow, the flowers, and even the gum. You have a talent to direct the story with words that nearly need popcorn to read.
This is a good poem, and it is much like the Court TV programs that I like. This is a nice way to explain other ledgens. I am not sure that I would use & instead of the word and though.
I found this to be a great read, and thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida
This story really is a good peace, and I think that the thought that you must use to read it helps us to keep our mind on the ups in our lifes that only our spiritual eyes can see. I find it does bring a little peice of light to my dim stresses right now.
This was a very captavating story, and it was very well written. I believe that it really takes the skill of writing to a greater level when you can keep a reader on track with all those "me's" in the dialog.
Thank you for sharing this with us, and I wish that I found it as easy as you seem to have keeping the correct tence throughout the story.
This is a great idea, and your list has some very positive people. Please send me more information.
I would love to be a part of this action. Lord knows that I need to be thinking on the positive side. This will help the one reviewed, and help me not feel so bad about this messed up computer.
Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
Ida
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