Hello, I am Ida, and I thought that I would stop by to see what you had for me to read.
This paints such a beautiful picture of where your mother is and what kind of person she is. I can see in your id here that you love her so much, and I hope that my little men and my daughter will love me that way. I would like to thinkt hat I have earned such admiration from them.
Thank you for a great poem with a great flowing rhyme, and I was taken through the whole story.
Hello, I am Ida, and I thought that I would stop by to see what you had for me to read.
These are the best parts that stick out for me:
I think that I loved this all. My favorite part was the poem Sex Me Again and Again.
I think that it was because it is something that is unexpected in a journal type writing, but it is something that most of us feel.
The message that I received from reading this item is:
I think that this is more of a writer's journal, and I think that it shows true talent on how to display feelings along with poetry. I think that (if you don't mind) I will use this type of out line to journal my self. This seems to be a quick and easy to do it.
This item needs:
This is great the way it is.
In closing, I truly found inspiration for something that I have been encouraged many times to do, but found it hard to keep doing.. journaling.
I loved this peice. It shows that we can see beauty and wonder in everything if we look. The best thing is that we can see worth in things that can go un-noticed most of the time.
This is very well written and was able to help me to look for worth in my days good and bad there is always worth.
I think that I would love to write a book about strength or Bible. I am going to take you suggestions to heart. I did want to write on about my life after the divorce, but I am having trouble keeping it right.
I have started on that project called When Happy Ever After Fails.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida
My words are ways to leave peices of myself behind for my children.
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This is so inspirational for me. I can not buy the book, but the fact that you are living with ADHD is so good for me to hear.
My son Christian has ADHD, anxiety disorder, and some other problems. I am going to talk to him tomorrow and let him know that there is a novelist that has made their dreams come true.
I am so encouraged with this that I can't wait to visit your port soon.
This was a beautiful story, and who could not keep reading with an opening like:
My deathbed has been waiting for me since the day I was born, out there fixed in time and space. My random meanderings through life have served to change none of this. Every step and misstep, that I have taken faithfully brought me closer to that inevitable end.
This is something that at one time or another we have all wondered. Where will we die? Who would be there?
I love how you took us to the store. The discription of the blood flow, the flowers, and even the gum. You have a talent to direct the story with words that nearly need popcorn to read.
This is a good poem, and it is much like the Court TV programs that I like. This is a nice way to explain other ledgens. I am not sure that I would use & instead of the word and though.
I found this to be a great read, and thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida
This story really is a good peace, and I think that the thought that you must use to read it helps us to keep our mind on the ups in our lifes that only our spiritual eyes can see. I find it does bring a little peice of light to my dim stresses right now.
This was a very captavating story, and it was very well written. I believe that it really takes the skill of writing to a greater level when you can keep a reader on track with all those "me's" in the dialog.
Thank you for sharing this with us, and I wish that I found it as easy as you seem to have keeping the correct tence throughout the story.
This is a great idea, and your list has some very positive people. Please send me more information.
I would love to be a part of this action. Lord knows that I need to be thinking on the positive side. This will help the one reviewed, and help me not feel so bad about this messed up computer.
This is a great poem, and I can relate to it because my life bounces around so much.
I have been in bad relationships, rude family, and loosing jobs since my divorce. I wonder if I will ever find what God has planned for me before live really kills me.
Thank you for sharing this with me.
Ida
My words are ways to leave peices of myself behind for my children.
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I think that we as humans, do a lot of damage to ourselves trying to make life easier. I really don't think that we realize what we are leaving for our kids.
This reminds me of an episode of Futurama. There was a large ball of garbage headed to Earth from a past time, and the solution was to create another to blast the first. At the end they realized that in thousands of years, future generations would have to deal with the same. The catching quoate was "Let them deal with it."
This is how we feel as we are wasteful. I am not an exception. I need to think of my children when I get wastful.
This would be so cute in a thyming picture book. I could see the conversation and it being drawn much as Alice in Wonderland. I think that I can relate to the moving around and wanting to. THis is what I am at now.
This is my favorite part:
I'll stalk in the night, thinking, ironically,
That it had been me who had wanted to leave
I find this what I felt when I got my divorce. I had prayed for my marriage, but he kept leaving me for others. I have found life so very hard since, but I think that it would have been much worse if the marriage continued.
This poem reminds me of my learning to paint. I write poems, short stories, and now I am painting. I think that this poem speaks to all who are creative.
It show real talent, and I really enjoyed this read.
This is a great poem, and I found it to be a great fluent read. Most importantly, I found this poem to be very inspiring for me because I am raising children, and hope to do as well as she did.
As I read this poem, I could see her strength. I felt as though I was introduced to a hero.
I like the smile that these peaces have given me. I do not quite know much about reviewing poems that are susposed to be bad. I like this a peace that gives good imagary.
Thank you for sharing this with us. I have enjoyed the read.
This is a great poem with a very good flow. I can relate to the flow of the day too. I have three children and the sound of my own days business drawns out the sound of the clock now.
I love the busy days that helps me keep up with the world around me, or my children will be another number of the divorced family. You know the families that children can't seem to find their way.
I pray that I have the strength to use the speed of the days to direct us to a fluent future.
Thank you for sharing this with us..
Ida
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