This story really is a good peace, and I think that the thought that you must use to read it helps us to keep our mind on the ups in our lifes that only our spiritual eyes can see. I find it does bring a little peice of light to my dim stresses right now.
This was a very captavating story, and it was very well written. I believe that it really takes the skill of writing to a greater level when you can keep a reader on track with all those "me's" in the dialog.
Thank you for sharing this with us, and I wish that I found it as easy as you seem to have keeping the correct tence throughout the story.
This is a great idea, and your list has some very positive people. Please send me more information.
I would love to be a part of this action. Lord knows that I need to be thinking on the positive side. This will help the one reviewed, and help me not feel so bad about this messed up computer.
This is a great poem, and I can relate to it because my life bounces around so much.
I have been in bad relationships, rude family, and loosing jobs since my divorce. I wonder if I will ever find what God has planned for me before live really kills me.
Thank you for sharing this with me.
Ida
My words are ways to leave peices of myself behind for my children.
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I think that we as humans, do a lot of damage to ourselves trying to make life easier. I really don't think that we realize what we are leaving for our kids.
This reminds me of an episode of Futurama. There was a large ball of garbage headed to Earth from a past time, and the solution was to create another to blast the first. At the end they realized that in thousands of years, future generations would have to deal with the same. The catching quoate was "Let them deal with it."
This is how we feel as we are wasteful. I am not an exception. I need to think of my children when I get wastful.
This would be so cute in a thyming picture book. I could see the conversation and it being drawn much as Alice in Wonderland. I think that I can relate to the moving around and wanting to. THis is what I am at now.
This is my favorite part:
I'll stalk in the night, thinking, ironically,
That it had been me who had wanted to leave
I find this what I felt when I got my divorce. I had prayed for my marriage, but he kept leaving me for others. I have found life so very hard since, but I think that it would have been much worse if the marriage continued.
This poem reminds me of my learning to paint. I write poems, short stories, and now I am painting. I think that this poem speaks to all who are creative.
It show real talent, and I really enjoyed this read.
This is a great poem, and I found it to be a great fluent read. Most importantly, I found this poem to be very inspiring for me because I am raising children, and hope to do as well as she did.
As I read this poem, I could see her strength. I felt as though I was introduced to a hero.
I like the smile that these peaces have given me. I do not quite know much about reviewing poems that are susposed to be bad. I like this a peace that gives good imagary.
Thank you for sharing this with us. I have enjoyed the read.
This is a great poem with a very good flow. I can relate to the flow of the day too. I have three children and the sound of my own days business drawns out the sound of the clock now.
I love the busy days that helps me keep up with the world around me, or my children will be another number of the divorced family. You know the families that children can't seem to find their way.
I pray that I have the strength to use the speed of the days to direct us to a fluent future.
This is a very good poem. It has a nice flow, and its words are words that most of us can relate to.
I have found these words flying through my thoughts many times since the end of my sixteen year old marriage. It should be all over by now, and we (as two adults) should be able to show growth. We should be able to see each other as the parents of our children, not as two children our selves that are caught up in the battle royal.
I really love this poem. I think that it is a great message to us that take the time to admire the beauty of the trees. I love the blossoms, the colors of the leaves, and even those that show their strength in their bare limbs.
I hate the thought of those that will not have these visions of peacfull beauty, if we don't take the time to make the cries of the trees heard.
Thank you for sharing this with us, and you may want to think about publishing it in some news papers.
I have three children, and I would love to teach them how to save the beauties of the world for many generations to come.
This day and time my children are teaching me more than I knew at their age to keep life around us a little more green and safer for us to exist in. I am now on my way to checking out the links that you have provided here on this page.
I love this poem. I have no idea if this is symbolic or real, but I can relate to it in either case. I have had best friends that have been behind litteral bars. I am sure that this poem describes their pain to the point.
I myself have not been behind the bars of the law, but I have lived in a darken room of my mind sometimes.
Thank you for sharing this with us. I really enjoyed it.
This is a very good poem that we all can relate to.
This is my favorite part:
When a pathway has led us the wrong way,
When we have said what we shouldn't say,
A word, a look, an act, a time or place,
Some bruises are the kind you can never erase.
I think that it is so true, and if a person could look into my heart they would see many bruises.
Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
Oh, I really love this one. I am a mother of three. A daughter that is 13 and living with her dad. I found it so hard to allow her to leave my home, but she missed her new brother. Her dad is far from religous about visiting his kids so I let her go.
My others are boys. They are 12 and 9. They can do almost anything as well as I can, and I realize that I find myself learning more from them each day.
I liked this poem. I was born near the last of the hippies. I was born in 1968. I got all the left over stuff. As I went to school, I wore those bell bottoms and tie dies t-shirts. I hated that look, but that was what was handed down to me.
Thank you for the memories.
My favorite part is...
"Make love not war!,
This would be a rule to follow today.
Thanks
Ida
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