Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
I like the message in this peice. I am a product of a marriage that ended in divorce.
My favorite parts!
"why me"
This is the question that I will never find out why I was traded in for a woman that is only 4 years older than my marriage. Why he didn't want any more children yet has a baby with her, and I will never give birth again.
Changes that I think should be made!
I don't see any changes need. I don't do checking gramer unless it is just out there. Most of the time if the rhyme and story catches me up, I don't see any of the other changes. This is a great job.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Ida
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
I love this poem, and I think that it reads much like the Song of Solomn. This is a compliment because the Song of Solomn is my fav read in the world (even if I misspell it most of the time.
My favorite parts!
When the grand design united us
I’ll hold him endlessly
I love him
I wanted this when I was married for sixteen years, and I still dream of it.
Changes that I think should be made!
I don't see any changes need. I don't do checking gramer unless it is just out there. Most of the time if the rhyme and story catches me up, I don't see any of the other changes. This is a great job.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Ida
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
This is very discriptive, and a very good read. I like it.
My favorite parts!
She was dead all along
This is how I feel quite often.
Changes that I think should be made!
I don't see any changes need. I don't do checking gramer unless it is just out there. Most of the time if the rhyme and story catches me up, I don't see any of the other changes. This is a great job.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Ida
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
This is a very good poem about the feelings of guilt, and I can not see any better discription of the word and its function.
My favorite parts!
I like the entire piece.
Changes that I think should be made!
It just left me wanting to see more, but this is a good and enjoyable read. I don't do checking gramer unless it is just out there. Most of the time if the rhyme and story catches me up, I don't see any of the other changes. This is a great job.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Ida
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
I think that sons and fathers have a hard time communicating, so some do use scarism to give attention.
I like this peice because it shows that fathers and sons (family members in general) need to find a way to communicate and create a since of belonging for each other.
My favorite parts!
Oh, HA HA HA very funny, don't you got someplace to be?"
Reminds me of how I would deal with my sisters or my brother. I am trying to get closer to them.
Changes that I think should be made!
I don't see any changes need. I don't do checking gramer unless it is just out there. Most of the time if the rhyme and story catches me up, I don't see any of the other changes. This is a great job.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Ida
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
I love the message of your peice. This reminds me of my life.
My favorite parts!
With broken spirit and swollen eyes, she will fake it through the day and barely make it through the night.
This is a statmate is a quote that is written dirrectly from my life.
Changes that I think should be made!
I don't see any changes need. I don't do checking gramer unless it is just out there. Most of the time if the rhyme and story catches me up, I don't see any of the other changes. This is a great job.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Ida
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
I like this, and the message it carries is so fun. I like the rhyme, and it is a very good read.
I enjoyed it with its story of a person struggleing to write something for a poem.
My favorite parts!
I hope to get reviews, although his I fear.
I think that we all get worried about getting reviews, and I am glad that you have covered it in your poem
Changes that I think should be made!
I don't see any changes need. I don't do checking gramer unless it is just out there. Most of the time if the rhyme and story catches me up, I don't see any of the other changes. This is a great job.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Ida
Thank you that you have given us the opportunity to be a part of your contest.
I would like to entry, but could you send me an email telling me the dead lines and the rules. I know that they are on this page, but my eyes are in such bad shape. It usually doesn't last every long, but for now I can't see the very fine print.
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
I think this is a very good poem with a funny ending, and I like the parts about the happenings around the poem. I read the poem as a poem then with them rest, and I think that it is funny both ways.
My favorite parts!
I do need to explain a tad more about what happened to my present of a poem and why I’m not sending it.
I think that this makes it even more interesting.
Changes that I think should be made!
I don't see any changes need. I don't do checking gramer unless it is just out there. Most of the time if the rhyme and story catches me up, I don't see any of the other changes. This is a great job.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Ida
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
This is a very emotional peice. I would equal it only to a good drama on the screen. It made me cry, and realize that things can happen when not expected.
My favorite parts!
She closed her eyes and tried to tell him she loved him back, but the air abandoned her lungs.
This was my favorite part because I pray for love to come to me that is that strong.
Changes that I think should be made!
I don't see any changes need. I don't do checking gramer unless it is just out there. Most of the time if the story catches me up, I don't see any of the other changes. This is a great job.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Ida
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
THis is a very good story with strong emotion, and I think that it makes a great first chapter.
My favorite parts!
I like where the man tell the girl to tell her boss that the only way that he would leave was for her to go with him.
Changes that I think should be made!
I don't see any changes need. I don't do checking gramer unless it is just out there. Most of the time if the story catches me up in it, I don't see any of the other changes. This is a great job.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Ida
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
This is a very good peice with the ablity to carry such a good message in such few line.
My favorite parts!
He walked upon sea shores with worlds between his toes
This statment reminds me of the picture I get when I read of Jesus walking by the sea of Galilee.
Changes that I think should be made!
I don't see any changes need. I don't do checking gramer unless it is just out there. Most of the time if the rhyme and story catches me up, I don't see any of the other changes. This is a great job.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Ida
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
This was a very good poem that paints a picture that carries the reader along with it.
My favorite parts!
free me, given time
This is what I think about the pain assoiated with being single again.
Changes that I think should be made!
I don't see any changes need. I don't do checking gramer unless it is just out there. Most of the time if the rhyme and story catches me up, I don't see any of the other changes. This is a great job.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Ida
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
THis is a great poem, and I think that you have covered a message that we all have in our dreams.
My favorite parts!
to fill my eyes with emptiness of rain
This is how I feel quiet often as I wait for the right person to be my forever.
Changes that I think should be made!
I don't see any changes need. I don't do checking grammer unless it is just out there. Most of the time if the rhyme and story catches me up, I don't see any of the other changes. This is a great job.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Ida
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
This is a great poem and the message. THis is a true for all of us.
My favorite parts!
When there is no Faerie godmother to make it all disappear.
This is how I felt in my heart when my divorce of 16 years happened. I am still waiting for the easy and happy way for life. Still waiting for my happy ever after.
Changes that I think should be made!
This is a very good poem, and I don't see any need for change.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Ida
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
This is a very good peice with a good rhyme.
My favorite parts!
I love how you talk about seeing the lust throught the glasses.
Changes that I think should be made!
Please forgive the few words in the review, but my eyes are so bad right now. THey are hutting, dry, and can not see, but I know that I want to stay in the habit of reviewing. I owe this iste alot.
Now I think that you have do a great poem, and I don't see any changes needed. Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Ida
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
It is a very good peice. I think that it is a very good read.
My favorite parts!
I like the whole thing.
Changes that I think should be made!
Please forgive this review if it is not what you expect. I am having a hard time seeing and my eyes are hurting. I need to keep in the habit of reviewing. Anyway this is a good poem, and I don't think there is nay need for changes.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Ida
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
I hVE BEEN here, I like this poem.
My favorite parts!
feeling my blood bleeding.
Changes that I think should be made!
Please forgive this review if it isn't what you want because my eyes are in shuch a bad shape. I can barely see, but I want to keep the habit otf reviewing. I like this poem the wau it is.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Ida
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
This is so good. I love the smell of a baby too. I miss it. This is a very good read.
My favorite parts!
Children don’t play
games with emotions.
This is so true, and it is hard to see the tears of their emotions.
Changes that I think should be made!
I love this poem, and I would not change anything.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Ida
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
I think that this is a poem that all parents should read and take to heart. It is a great read.
My favorite parts!
THE YELLING AND THE SCREAMING
OR THE SILENCE THAT FOLLOWS A CURSE
I used to hear my parents fight. It is something that my children never will see.
Changes that I think should be made!
This was an enmotional peice. I like it the way it is, and hope it touches others
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Ida
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
I love this, and I think that little notes like this make so much of a difference to a child.
My favorite parts!
Thank you! To my child with brown hair and eyes.
Not enough of us take the time to be thankful for our little teachers. Those who teach us real unconditional love, responsability, and patience.
Changes that I think should be made!
I would not make any changes to this.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Ida
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
I love it. It was an easy read. I think that it has a very good flow..
My favorite parts!
where the world below meets the world above
Changes that I think should be made!
I think that you did a very good job. I think that when we watch the waters we get inspiration. I don't see any need for change
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
Invalid Item This item number is not valid. #1375336 by Not Available.
I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Ida
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
This is a very good peice. I like the rhythem, and the easy flow.
My favorite parts!
death walks among us
and slips in between our thoughts
I think that this is a thought that runs through all our minds for the most part every day...
Changes that I think should be made!
This a great poem, and I don't see any need for changes.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
Invalid Item This item number is not valid. #1375336 by Not Available.
I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Ida
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