Thank you that you have given us the opportunity to be a part of your contest.
I would like to entry, but could you send me an email telling me the dead lines and the rules. I know that they are on this page, but my eyes are in such bad shape. It usually doesn't last every long, but for now I can't see the very fine print.
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
I think this is a very good poem with a funny ending, and I like the parts about the happenings around the poem. I read the poem as a poem then with them rest, and I think that it is funny both ways.
My favorite parts!
I do need to explain a tad more about what happened to my present of a poem and why I’m not sending it.
I think that this makes it even more interesting.
Changes that I think should be made!
I don't see any changes need. I don't do checking gramer unless it is just out there. Most of the time if the rhyme and story catches me up, I don't see any of the other changes. This is a great job.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Ida
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
This is a very emotional peice. I would equal it only to a good drama on the screen. It made me cry, and realize that things can happen when not expected.
My favorite parts!
She closed her eyes and tried to tell him she loved him back, but the air abandoned her lungs.
This was my favorite part because I pray for love to come to me that is that strong.
Changes that I think should be made!
I don't see any changes need. I don't do checking gramer unless it is just out there. Most of the time if the story catches me up, I don't see any of the other changes. This is a great job.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Ida
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
THis is a very good story with strong emotion, and I think that it makes a great first chapter.
My favorite parts!
I like where the man tell the girl to tell her boss that the only way that he would leave was for her to go with him.
Changes that I think should be made!
I don't see any changes need. I don't do checking gramer unless it is just out there. Most of the time if the story catches me up in it, I don't see any of the other changes. This is a great job.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Ida
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
This is a very good peice with the ablity to carry such a good message in such few line.
My favorite parts!
He walked upon sea shores with worlds between his toes
This statment reminds me of the picture I get when I read of Jesus walking by the sea of Galilee.
Changes that I think should be made!
I don't see any changes need. I don't do checking gramer unless it is just out there. Most of the time if the rhyme and story catches me up, I don't see any of the other changes. This is a great job.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Ida
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
This was a very good poem that paints a picture that carries the reader along with it.
My favorite parts!
free me, given time
This is what I think about the pain assoiated with being single again.
Changes that I think should be made!
I don't see any changes need. I don't do checking gramer unless it is just out there. Most of the time if the rhyme and story catches me up, I don't see any of the other changes. This is a great job.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Ida
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
THis is a great poem, and I think that you have covered a message that we all have in our dreams.
My favorite parts!
to fill my eyes with emptiness of rain
This is how I feel quiet often as I wait for the right person to be my forever.
Changes that I think should be made!
I don't see any changes need. I don't do checking grammer unless it is just out there. Most of the time if the rhyme and story catches me up, I don't see any of the other changes. This is a great job.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Ida
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
This is a great poem and the message. THis is a true for all of us.
My favorite parts!
When there is no Faerie godmother to make it all disappear.
This is how I felt in my heart when my divorce of 16 years happened. I am still waiting for the easy and happy way for life. Still waiting for my happy ever after.
Changes that I think should be made!
This is a very good poem, and I don't see any need for change.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Ida
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
This is a very good peice with a good rhyme.
My favorite parts!
I love how you talk about seeing the lust throught the glasses.
Changes that I think should be made!
Please forgive the few words in the review, but my eyes are so bad right now. THey are hutting, dry, and can not see, but I know that I want to stay in the habit of reviewing. I owe this iste alot.
Now I think that you have do a great poem, and I don't see any changes needed. Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Ida
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
It is a very good peice. I think that it is a very good read.
My favorite parts!
I like the whole thing.
Changes that I think should be made!
Please forgive this review if it is not what you expect. I am having a hard time seeing and my eyes are hurting. I need to keep in the habit of reviewing. Anyway this is a good poem, and I don't think there is nay need for changes.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Ida
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
I hVE BEEN here, I like this poem.
My favorite parts!
feeling my blood bleeding.
Changes that I think should be made!
Please forgive this review if it isn't what you want because my eyes are in shuch a bad shape. I can barely see, but I want to keep the habit otf reviewing. I like this poem the wau it is.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Ida
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
This is so good. I love the smell of a baby too. I miss it. This is a very good read.
My favorite parts!
Children don’t play
games with emotions.
This is so true, and it is hard to see the tears of their emotions.
Changes that I think should be made!
I love this poem, and I would not change anything.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Ida
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
I think that this is a poem that all parents should read and take to heart. It is a great read.
My favorite parts!
THE YELLING AND THE SCREAMING
OR THE SILENCE THAT FOLLOWS A CURSE
I used to hear my parents fight. It is something that my children never will see.
Changes that I think should be made!
This was an enmotional peice. I like it the way it is, and hope it touches others
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Ida
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
I love this, and I think that little notes like this make so much of a difference to a child.
My favorite parts!
Thank you! To my child with brown hair and eyes.
Not enough of us take the time to be thankful for our little teachers. Those who teach us real unconditional love, responsability, and patience.
Changes that I think should be made!
I would not make any changes to this.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Ida
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
I love it. It was an easy read. I think that it has a very good flow..
My favorite parts!
where the world below meets the world above
Changes that I think should be made!
I think that you did a very good job. I think that when we watch the waters we get inspiration. I don't see any need for change
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Ida
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
This is a very good peice. I like the rhythem, and the easy flow.
My favorite parts!
death walks among us
and slips in between our thoughts
I think that this is a thought that runs through all our minds for the most part every day...
Changes that I think should be made!
This a great poem, and I don't see any need for changes.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Ida
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
This is a very good poem, and I think that this a great picture.
My favorite parts!
You have taken the reader into a very lovely and peacful night.
Changes that I think should be made!
I think that this is great the way it is. I don't suggest any changes.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Ida
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
I think that this is beautiful, and I can relate to it. I have three children, and I have felt this with each of them.
My favorite parts!
You are my child and I will love you the same as your sister and have no different way to tell you or show you.
This is so real, and is so true.
Changes that I think should be made!
This is perfect, there is no changes needed.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Ida
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
This is a very good peice. I am able to see the picture that you are trying to show.
My favorite parts!
it scatters across the sky to
visit with the lonely stars
Changes that I think should be made!
I think that this is a very good peice. Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Ida
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
This is a very good peice, and this is a funny peice.
It have a good flow that makes it a very good read.
My favorite parts!
What if we found a cure for cancer?
Would another disease take its place?
This is my fav part. It makes me think of the many times that people have said that if I could be 16 again and know what I know now, I would love to go back. I always reply is always not me, I would just make different mistakes just as bad.
Changes that I think should be made!
I love this peice the way it is. I dont see any changes needed.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Ida
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
I think that this is true of most of us. I love this little poem, and it has a great flow.
My favorite parts!
Is the way you change sides so easy in the poem, and the way that you are able to grab the attention of the reader.
Changes that I think should be made!
No changes are needed.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Ida
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
I think that this is a great poem, and the mesage and flow is very good.
My favorite parts!
Evil glares are cast
in the shadows.
This is a true statment that we can see in our own lives on a daily basis.
Changes that I think should be made!
I don't think that there is any need of change.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Ida
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
This is a very good poem, and a message that we can relate to.
My favorite parts!
Then am I,
A happy fly,
If I live,
Or if I die.
I think that we all have felt that way...
Changes that I think should be made!
I think that this is a great poem, and I son't see any changes needed.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
Invalid Item This item number is not valid. #1375336 by Not Available.
I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Ida
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
I like this poem, and I think that this is a very fluent read. I loved it. I remember this when I was married for a long time, and he kept leaving.
My favorite parts!
Shut up
I'm sick of your lies
Shut up
This choice is mine
This is what I need to do to those in my in general. Those that push their orders and ideas on me. I wish I had this courage in my life since learning to talk.
Changes that I think should be made!
I dont think that it needs change.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
Invalid Item This item number is not valid. #1375336 by Not Available.
I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Ida
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