Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
I am going to read each of these above, and I am sure that it will help me understand the journey that I am about to take in the A1 courses.
My favorite parts!
I hope that I learn the words that are the titles of your items in this folder.
Changes that I think should be made!
I don't see any changes need. I don't do checking gramer unless it is just out there. Most of the time if the rhyme and story catches me up, I don't see any of the other changes. This is a great job.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
First I want to allow you the opportunity to check out an interesting place. I know that I just found it so interesting that I wanted to show you. I now that I was excited by it, and saw it as an opportunity to enhance my writing. I hope that you will enjoy it.
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I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Also if you have time could you check this out for me, I am entering it in a contest. Let me know my chances.
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
This is a very good poem with a great message of love gone array.
My favorite parts!
wiish I had known how it would be from the start
THis is a statment that we all have said and heard from others that have been hurt by love.
Changes that I think should be made!
First there is a typo wiith two time. I am sure that you meant with. I do a lot of that.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
First I want to allow you the opportunity to check out an interesting place. I know that I just found it so interesting that I wanted to show you. I now that I was excited by it, and saw it as an opportunity to enhance my writing. I hope that you will enjoy it.
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I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Also if you have time could you check this out for me, I am entering it in a contest. Let me know my chances.
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
This is a very good poem. You have caught my attention
I think that you have a vry nice and even flow. It was a good read.
My favorite parts!
Give rest.
Well met.
In slumber.
Lasting as long
as a dream
This is a statment that is so easy to relate to.
Changes that I think should be made!
I don't see any changes need. I don't do checking gramer unless it is just out there. Most of the time if the rhyme and story catches me up, I don't see any of the other changes. This is a great job.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Also if you have time could you check this out for me, I am entering it in a contest. Let me know my chances.
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
This is a very good poem that each of us can relate to. It is well written with a good flow.
My favorite parts!
Scars on my heart
And a bundle of broken promises
It way hard to pick a favorite part, but this is the other side of love that has visited me lately.
Changes that I think should be made!
I don't see any changes need. This is a great job.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Also if you have time could you check this out for me, I am entering it in a contest. Let me know my chances.
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
I wonder how you could have written about my life.lol
I think that it is very well written, and I can relate to the message that flows through its lines.
My favorite parts!
Have you ever really looked in the mirror
And despised what you see
I feel this way, and I am working to hard on getting better so that my children will not learn to hate themselves the way I do
Changes that I think should be made!
I don't see any changes need. I don't do checking gramer unless it is just out there. Most of the time if the rhyme and story catches me up, I don't see any of the other changes. This is a great job.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Also if you have time could you check this out for me, I am entering it in a contest. Let me know my chances.
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
THis was a very good peice, and you created a peice that all can relate to.
My favorite parts!
And found me waiting there
Outside of his stare
THis is where I was most of my sixteen year old marriage.
Changes that I think should be made!
I don't see any changes need. I don't do checking gramer unless it is just out there. Most of the time if the rhyme and story catches me up, I don't see any of the other changes. This is a great job.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Also if you have time could you check this out for me, I am entering it in a contest. Let me know my chances.
I can not believe that I have not reviewed this before this.
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
I love seeing the prayers and the answers, and I love being a part of it.
My favorite parts!
I think that watching a family come together, and see the threads of God himself sowing special people together to hold each other up.
Changes that I think should be made!
I don't see any changes need. I don't do checking gramer unless it is just out there. Most of the time if the rhyme and story catches me up, I don't see any of the other changes. This is a great job.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Also if you have time could you check this out for me, I am entering it in a contest. Let me know my chances.
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
Thank you for sending me the information on this auction, and I have added it's bitem to my reviews. I hope that it helps in the earning.
My favorite parts!
The points are for the use of those who need them.
Changes that I think should be made!
I don't see any changes need. I don't do checking gramer unless it is just out there. Most of the time if the rhyme and story catches me up, I don't see any of the other changes. This is a great job.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Also if you have time could you check this out for me, I am entering it in a contest. Let me know my chances.
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
THis is a very well written emotional poem. I think that it is a fluent good read.
My favorite parts!
I’m scared to know
Scared to feel
I have been here alot, but the Lord will give Peace to my heart.
Changes that I think should be made!
I don't see any changes need. I don't do checking gramer unless it is just out there. Most of the time if the rhyme and story catches me up, I don't see any of the other changes. This is a great job.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Also if you have time could you check this out for me, I am entering it in a contest. Let me know my chances.
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
This brought to my mind the feeling so long ago of the passionate love, and helps me dream that dream again. This is a very good read.
My favorite parts!
Don't give it up.
Don't lose it on the way to a happy ending
As a divorced mother of three this few words make a differnce in this sometimes lonely heart.
Changes that I think should be made!
I don't see any changes need. I don't do checking gramer unless it is just out there. Most of the time if the rhyme and story catches me up, I don't see any of the other changes. This is a great job.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Also if you have time could you check this out for me, I am entering it in a contest. Let me know my chances.
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
This is very well written. I can feel the dispair of the words.
My favorite parts!
The sweat burns my eyes
I think this truly describes the anguish that is felt by the person in the work.
Changes that I think should be made!
I don't see any changes need. I don't do checking gramer unless it is just out there. Most of the time if the rhyme and story catches me up, I don't see any of the other changes. This is a great job.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Also if you have time could you check this out for me, I am entering it in a contest. Let me know my chances.
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
This is a very well written emotional peice. I loved it. I think that it is a easy read with a message that we can relate to.
My favorite parts!
the broken shatters of a heart
How many of us have felt this ache in our heart when our love is just thrown out like the trash!
Changes that I think should be made!
I don't see any changes need. I don't do checking gramer unless it is just out there. Most of the time if the rhyme and story catches me up, I don't see any of the other changes. This is a great job.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Also if you have time could you check this out for me, I am entering it in a contest. Let me know my chances.
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
I love this poem. I think that it covers how all of us have felt at one time or another, and is written in such a very nice and creative way.
My favorite parts!
I see the words but
they all start to combine
I have had problems with me eyes, and this statment has been literal for me. Everyone here has been patient with me, and my eyes should clear completly soon.
Changes that I think should be made!
I don't see any changes need. I don't do checking gramer unless it is just out there. Most of the time if the rhyme and story catches me up, I don't see any of the other changes. This is a great job.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Also if you have time could you check this out for me, I am entering it in a contest. Let me know my chances.
This has been a very good read, and I look forward to reading more. I thinkt that I will check out the rest of your portolio, and I am sure that I will find a great read or three.
I love how you are able to cover any topic, and take the reader with you.
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
THis is a very well written piece, and I love the message that was at the end of the poem.
My favorite parts!
THe story of the poem is so special.
Changes that I think should be made!
I don't see any changes need. I don't do checking gramer unless it is just out there. Most of the time if the rhyme and story catches me up, I don't see any of the other changes. This is a great job.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Also if you have time could you check this out for me, I am entering it in a contest. Let me know my chances.
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
I think that this is the best of the three. I love this peice, and I can relate to the message.
My favorite parts!
Worth living life is not.
This is a feeling that I have been know to battle, but there is a dime shinning with hope in my darken heart from love so hard.
Changes that I think should be made!
I don't see any changes need. This is a great job.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Also if you have time could you check this out for me, I am entering it in a contest. Let me know my chances.
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
This is very good. I can see the confusion in love to.
Like a man leaving a family to be with a girl just four years older than his marriage.
My favorite parts!
Love, how you change
Yea and sometimes we do not see the change until the change leaves us alone raising children.
Changes that I think should be made!
I don't see any changes need. I don't do checking gramer unless it is just out there. Most of the time if the rhyme and story catches me up, I don't see any of the other changes. This is a great job.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Also if you have time could you check this out for me, I am entering it in a contest. Let me know my chances.
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
This is very deep, and it is a good peice to get you thinking.
My favorite parts!
I love the way you have caught my attention, and make me wonder if I really have the right thought about its message.
I feel that it is about children that are lost in a violent world with times that the violence is in there own home.
Changes that I think should be made!
I don't see any changes need. I don't do checking gramer unless it is just out there. Most of the time if the rhyme and story catches me up, I don't see any of the other changes. This is a great job.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Also if you have time could you check this out for me, I am entering it in a contest. Let me know my chances.
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
I think that this is a great write, and I think that it is so touching. It makes my heart go out to you. This was a good read with a gread flow.
My favorite parts!
You’ll have me on your side
until the end of time
This is how I feel about my mom, and I hope that my children will feel that way about me.
Changes that I think should be made!
I don't see any changes need. I don't do checking gramer unless it is just out there. Most of the time if the rhyme and story catches me up, I don't see any of the other changes. This is a great job.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Also if you have time could you check this out for me, I am entering it in a contest. Let me know my chances.
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
You wrote a great story of love in a poem form.
My favorite parts!
He will see her again this night
I can not wait until this will be true in my own life.
Changes that I think should be made!
I don't see any changes need. I don't do checking gramer unless it is just out there. Most of the time if the rhyme and story catches me up, I don't see any of the other changes. This is a great job.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Also if you have time could you check this out for me, I am entering it in a contest. Let me know my chances.
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
I love this and how you have it written. I love the fluent read.
My favorite parts!
I love the way you have this in a list.
One question how did you get the idea.
Changes that I think should be made!
I don't see any changes need. I don't do checking gramer unless it is just out there. Most of the time if the rhyme and story catches me up, I don't see any of the other changes. This is a great job.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
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I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Also if you have time could you check this out for me, I am entering it in a contest. Let me know my chances.
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
I think that I will try to cook this one day. This is the first time that I have reviewed a receipe. I think that it would be a good meal.
My favorite parts!
COOK PLENTY AND PUT IT IN SMALL TUPPERWARES
THis is a good idea when kids are in a hurry, and do not want to wait for a well cooked meal.
Changes that I think should be made!
I don't see any changes need. This is a great job.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
Invalid Item This item number is not valid. #1375336 by Not Available.
I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Also if you have time could you check this out for me, I am entering it in a contest. Let me know my chances.
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
I love this poem, and I can see strong family ties here. This is a great tribute to you and your family.
Good job there is not enough closeness in families anymore. You are a good example.
My favorite parts!
As we bowed our heads in prayer
This is being missed from most families lately, and I am working on fixing this with my family.
Changes that I think should be made!
I don't see any changes need. I don't do checking gramer unless it is just out there. Most of the time if the rhyme and story catches me up, I don't see any of the other changes. This is a great job.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
Invalid Item This item number is not valid. #1375336 by Not Available.
I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Ida
Hi my name is Ida and I am here to review your work. I am sure that I will love each and every word that is written. So with an open mind and kind heart here we go!
My comments about this poem/story!
This is a good poem, and it has a great message. I can see the world and our fears in it.
My favorite parts!
rusty ball and chain
This is probably what ran through my ex husband's head when he left for a 21 year old. lol
Changes that I think should be made!
I don't see any changes need. I don't do checking gramer unless it is just out there. Most of the time if the rhyme and story catches me up, I don't see any of the other changes. This is a great job.
Thank you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to visit you. Ida
I would like to introduce you to a new contest, and this guy does get the poem.
Wes Hall has started a poetry contest called the Mended Heart. This is the first round of the first contest. You may be the first winner of the first contest of Wes Hall, a very talented writer, poet, reviewer, and I know fair judge.
Invalid Item This item number is not valid. #1375336 by Not Available.
I can see that you have met the challenge. This is a very good read.
Thank you for sharing your work with us, and check out this new contest.
There is also a forum that is ran by some very faithful prayer warriors, and you can leave a request without leaving a name. The place is The Open Door to Grace or the Prayer Hotline.
This group is a very new and is growing every day. Each person prays for the needs of others. Sherri b is called to keep the little prayer wheels turning. They are there when you need them.
Ida
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