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I liked the original theme of this piece. You have touched on a subject that can easily be frowned upon in the modern world. The heart of this woman in question must be very sore as she had no choice but to marry. I thought this was very dark but a good topic. I liked the flow and the way you wrote this piece. Great work..
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WOW....
This was perfectly written. A wonderful flowing feel, great rhymes and rhythm too. The romance was great. I liked the depth of this poem too. This is by far the best piece I have read today. You have done an amazing job of this poem. Hats off to you for perfecting this piece.
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I thought this was very well written. Short and direct for the reader. I loved your poetic sway in this writing. I think you are a great little writer. There seemed to be a little bit of teasing here in this poem, the way you wrote it. Overall, good work and keep going...
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I thought this was a deep take on love. I liked your perspective here. The size of the poem was great, you managed to say a lot in a few lines. This writing from you was very poetic and powerful. I found it a little addictive to be honest. Great work and keep going.
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I thought this piece was beautifully written and displayed. The simplicity of true love was very evident here. The poems overall effect on me was very sweet and caring. I couldnt help but feel sweetness oozing. Such a loving piece of work. I enjoyed the effect you gave me here. My heart melted.
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I thought this was a great little piece of writing. You made me laugh at the end. The presentation was good and the flow was original. I liked the sweetness of the story you told. Sometimes poetry can be very heavy on the heart, but this piece was lovely. Great work.
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I thought this piece came together perfectly. Superbly written and displayed. The story in the words was sad yet powerful. The rhymes were splendid. I really enjoyed reading this through. I loved the title, it was very unique. Overall, a great and lovely piece of writing. Great work and keep going.....
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I thought the story you told was sweet and simple for the reader. There was good imagery coming from the words and lines. I would have loved to have read more of this piece. Overall, a nice heart warming tale of two young lovers. Great work.
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I thought this was very well written. It was very powerful to read through. There was a lovely poetic pull to this piece. The flow was great and I enjoyed the rhythm too. This was also a very noble piece of writing, quite haunting in parts. Great writing and keep going.
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I think you told a lovely story here in this piece. I was gripped to each line and word. This was easy to follow and understand. I enjoyed it all very much. I liked the presentation too, nice big letters. I thought this was a great read and very warming. Great work.
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I thought this was a simple and inspiring piece. I enjoyed reading it through. Your message was clear and easy to understand. God of my Universe was a great title and drew me into the poem. I would have loved if this was written longer. Great work.
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I thought this writing from you was very sweet. It was so simple yet poetic. I read it aloud and it flowed along perfectly. You simplified the night, the sun and stars very well. You took me on a lovely little journey as I read this through. Nice work, simply executed. Well done...
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There were some great rhymes and rhythm in this poem. I particualary liked the opening lines, they held mystery for me. The imagery coming from all the lines was great. I liked the part where you said the women change into animals, this part was very special to me. I know women are awesome humans and back then, they were even better. Powerful, noble, inviting, strong and mysterious. You captured the whole essense of a Celtic woman perfectly. Great writing.
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I thought this piece of writing from you was beautiful and warming. The amount of imagery coming from the words and lines was incredible. The romance oozed from every word. The scene was beautiful. I loved it all so very much. My world moved as I read this through. A perfect piece of romance. Great work.
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I felt quite saddened for you or your character. The mind is a complex thing and will never be fully mastered. I liked your story telling here. I was gripped to each line. I enjoyed reading this through. Great work.
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WOW, I loved it so much. The cleverly designed rhymes were special. I loved how what you wrote had a begining, middle and end. I loved every line and smiled as I read this through. This is one of the best inspiring pieces I have read today. Fantastic work.
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First of all, you have every right to be upset. You had made plans first. Then they go without you. They should have taken you along with them. Frustrations is a very good title for this piece of writing from you. But I think you have a point and are in the right. Keep going....
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I thought this was a rather mystical piece of writing. I liked the mystery you provided in each line. Romance was evident here. I enjoyed reading this through. I found no way of improving the item. The structure was good as was the flow. Good work and write on !!
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I thought this was an excellent piece of writing. I absolutely loved the biblical tone set in each line. There was wisdom, power and strength in your writing here. I really enjoyed reading this through. The rhymes were great and made the writing a joy to read and follow. Great work and write on !!
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I loved the amount of spirit in this piece from you. The simplicity, the glory and the power was all very evident here. I smiled to myself as I read this through. I felt this piece said a lot of deep things to me. I liked the tone of the words and lines. Overall, a nice, special piece of work.
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I liked the depth of this poem. I liked the serious tone you set. The poem started brightly and twisted into darkness. The flow was good and the whole story was gripping. I found no way of improving the item. You did a fine job here with this. I enjoyed reading it through.
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Aww. I loved the heart-wrenching story in this piece. This made me very sad. I am a dog lover and related well to what this poem mean't. A simple yet powerful tone to this work. I loved the sentiment. A very powerful piece of writing. Well done!!
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I thought this was a lovely poem to read through. The rhymes, the flow, and the consistancy were all perfect. There was a lovely poetic sway about this piece. I liked the overall feeling you gave me. I found no way of improving your work. Great writing and keep going.
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I liked this piece from you. I liked how you wrote this poem. I found no way of improving this work. The title was simple and matched the writings content. A nice poetic feeling came across me as I read this through .... great work....
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You could have taken the words right out of my mouth with this piece from you. I work in a yacht club as a cleaner, 6 days a week. I related very well to what had written down here. There was a nice flow of humor to this piece and it was enjoyable to read through. Good work and write on !!!
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