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I thought your writing here was great. There was an aged, heroic feeling to this poem. There was good imagery coming from each word and line. You write rather well seeing English is not your native language. I enjoyed reading your writing through. Good work.
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I really liked the tone of this writing, it seemed to match the seriousness of the subject and theme. Caring parents for the child. Good usage of the prompt. I found no way to improve this gem of a poem. It was a good little read. Fine job. Write on!
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I thought this was a lovely piece of writing and needs no improvement. You have done a fine job here with this poem. I also related well to everything you wrote out. The essence of true love was very evident here. Good work and write on!
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I enjoyed your story telling and found it quite gripping. Your grammar was fine and easy to understand. The story held a little dark twist with the robber being a family member. It would be interesting to know the full story. Good introduction. Write on!
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A lovely little poem. The meaning of this poem was special and rewarding to me. Nicely written and displayed on the page. The sentiments were awesome. It must be nice to be able to look back on love and see positives. Good work and write on!
I liked the originality in the way this piece was written. I liked the title too. I am guessing this was written for an old flame of yours? I liked the emotion in the words and lines. There was a calling here. You are good at expressing yourself .... Write on!
This was well written and expressed. It is odd that I related to everything you wrote out here. It is odd that this writing could have been written about me. The person who you wrote this for has you in their life and this piece of writing too. So show them this piece and help them believe. You can be their safety. Nice work and write on!
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I liked the sense of running and even hiding here. The title was very inviting and made me smile. There was a truth about this writing from you. There was good emotion in here. I have heard that at night it is harder for a female than male to empty their heads from grime of the day. You expressed yourself so very well here. I hope you find that place. Write on!
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I loved this little poem from you. You managed to say so much in just a few lines. There was also great imagery coming from the words and lines. To me, this could be a prompt for a short story. The writing was sweet and I enjoyed every word. Write on!
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I thought this was well written. The message was very clear to me. I liked the simple way you expressed yourself here. There was an emotional power over me as I read this poem through. Nice writing and one to remember. Good work and write on!
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Nice flowing rhythm, good structure. I enjoyed reading this through. The rhymes made the poem a joy. I liked the theme of this writing, it made me think of the character and her devilish ways. Good work and write on!
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I found your writing here to be so very emotional, loving and beautiful. You have such a big heart here in this piece from you. Your family is a loving, kind and respectful family. I liked the title, it was very fitting for the words and lines. Thank you for sharing such an emotional and warming piece of writing.
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I thought the love here in this poem was powerful. This was defining true love at its very best. Lovely rhymes and lovely rhythm. This is a fine piece of writing from you, great work, great writing. Pat yourself on the back for exacting the power of love. Write on!
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Great presentation, nice rhymes and rhythm. Well executed, well structured too. I think you used the prompt very well here. There was also good imagery coming from each word and line. Nice writing and well done!
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I found the words and lines to be very emotional to me. The way you built the words up with the starting comments. There was a beautiful feeling over me as I read this through. The love was deep and true. Keep expressing yourself and write on!
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I enjoyed every word and line you wrote out. There was good imagery from this writing. I liked the simplicity of your writing style here. You also expressed yourself so very well. The Moon is always a good source for poetry. You did a fine job here. Good work and write on!
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I really enjoyed this poem from you. It was written perfectly. Great rhythm, great rhymes and flow. I related well to what you had written, you summed up the food very well. Oddly enough, there was good imagery coming from each word and line. I could even smell the dumplings. Oh they are so tasty. Good work and write on!
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I thought you were right on the money here with this poems words. I am from the United Kingdom but still related to what you had written. Nice presentation, centered on the page. You managed to say so much in just a few lines. Nice writing and write on!
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I liked the flowing story line, it was very simple to follow. There was good imagery coming from each word and line. I was able to see the lady under the mistletoe, kissing him. Nice presentation. (I guess) The shameless kiss was a message to all other women who dared want her man. Nice tale and write on!
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Nice presentation, centered on the page. I thought this was a very different piece of writing to your other pieces. You are right in saying that we cannot be something we're not. And we can only be ourselves. It is human nature to try though. Nice philosophy used here. Good work and write on!
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I enjoyed reading this through. It was well written and nicely displayed, centered on the page. I think you spoke for millions of people here, I related very well to what you have written. I liked the title too. You reminded me just how sweet the Lord truly is. Great work and write on!
I liked the clever way you wrote this out. The punctuation was not there, so I read this all in one breath. The feeling of breathlessness was all across me as I read this through. Very clever. Good flowing lines, nice length, not too short and not too long. Certainly a dark piece well written. Write on!
I thought this writing from you was very revealing. If you really do listen to THEM, you are not alone. I liked the depth and inviting feel to this poem. I also realted very well to your poem. Good presentation, looks good on the page. Good flow and good rhythm. The spirit world is there for all to witness, its just if you look in the right places and at the right time. Write on!
Nice writing here. The rhythm was great and made the reading a real pleasure to me. I liked the tone of this poem, there was a reality in your work here. I also related to how you have lived your life so far. I enjoyed reading this through. Keep going and write on!
Great writing from you here. Great flowing rhymes, great rhythm too. The picture above the writing was a good touch and presented the poem perfectly. Your creativity was good here. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this poem. Good work and write on!
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