Sadly I couldn't see the picture above your words. This did not take anything away from your lovely writing. I thought this was a very special piece of writing from you. The rhythm was great, the flow was great too. The seemed to be an historic feeling with this writing. I felt transported to another time. The font you used was pretty, making the words and lines so much more attractive. I loved the poetic sway of your work here. Very special writing indeed.
I thought this was a deep piece of writing. It flowed along very well. I like how you mixed in love with the weather. Your descriptions were great. "Hiding" is a good title and matched the writings feeling. I found no way of improving the writing here. I enjoyed reading it through. I think you are a good writer. Thank you for sharing this here.
I thought your writing here was very simple and direct. Sometimes it is a wise move to lay everything on the line. Telling someone you love them is very special. I enjoyed reading your poem through. I liked the honesty you held in this piece. I hope the love is returned to you and you are not wasting your time. Love is a deep emotion and makes good writing like yours. Thank you for sharing and write on !!!
I thought your poem here was lovely. I love Christmas time in the snow. You painted a lovely picture here. The mentioning of the illuminated houses was full of imagery for me, the smoking chimney was great too. I found no way of improving this poem. I think Christmas is such a beauitful time of year, everyone coming together. Children excited. I loved the freedom your words gave me. Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece.
I thought your writing here was really refreshing to read through. The amount of self-help in this piece was great. I liked the flow. I liked the rhythm too. To me this was a deeply written poem. Strong in the broken places was a nice line to write. A caring poem, a thoughtful poem. A clear message to the weak and weary. I enjoyed reading this through and enjoyed reviewing this too. Great work and thank you for sharing this work here.
I thought your poem was very painful to read through. Love can be very hurtful at times. I felt the anguish in this poem. The rhymes were good, the flowing lines were refreshing to me. Love is a very, very common theme for poets. Talking of love will never fade away, love has too many sides to work out. I really liked the last stanza most. This stanza summed up how you were feeling when you wrote this piece. Thank you for writing a nice poem and sharing it here.
I thought you wrote a splendid piece of poetry here. I loved every line and every word. I am not familier with the form you used but the flow was great, the rhythm was great too. The rhymes made the writing flow perfectly, making this such a joy to read through. Not only is this poem technically perfect, it holds a great sense of well being. Your descriptions of life at the beach was sublime. I related well to everything you wrote down. The mention of gritty hands while eating was a memory that I can share too. The salty sea breeze was a line I smiled at. Thank you for writing and sharing a poem that made me feel so full of joy.
I thought your writing here had a nice flowing feel to it. The rhymes were good, the rhythm was good too. This was a deep philosphical piece of writing. Your poem here was very original by theme and meaning. It did seem like you wrote this from experience rather than just for a contest. There was a realness about this piece of writing. I enjoyed reading it and enjoyed reviewing it. Thank you for sharing.
I found your writing here to be very poetic and lavish. The love was evident. Women can be very secretive when they need to be. Seeing as you called this poem "Butterfly", it could so easily be understood for being about a butterfly, maybe it was. Your genres stated this was romance. I enjoyed reading this through. It was fun to read and review. I found no way of improving your poem here. Thank you for sharing.
After reading your piece through, I was left feeling numb and shocked. Shocked at the reality of what you had written. I see this was written many years ago, I found it in the random read page. At times of a passing there is nothing we can do but wait. You described these horrible notions very well here. I have to admire your honesty here. I felt the full power of this writing from you. I am sorry for your loss. God bless and thank you for writing with utter truth.
I was gripped to every line of this piece from you. The darkness was awesome, but I felt for the hurting woman. I loved the poetic sway of this piece. The loss of love can be very cruel for women and men. I think this was a very dramatic take on a females pain. I loved the form you wrote this with. The picture above the writing was a creative touch. A great read for me. Thank you for sharing.
I liked the positivity of your piece here. I would love to know what kind of light you are writing about. I am thinking it is God's light you are refering to. The title was fitting for the words and lines. I would have loved to have read more of this writing. There was a good amount of mystery in this poem. Keep expressing yourself. Good work.
I thought your writing here was very simple, sweet and easy to follow. I liked the size of the poem, it wasn't too long nor too short. The theme was good, the flow was good too. I think you spoke for many people here in this writing. Here in the UK it is cloudy most of the time and any break in the clouds is a real treat. Good writing and thank you for sharing ....
I would like to offer my sympathy for your loss. I see this this was written several years ago. I hope by reviewing this, I don't awaken any pain. I will say that I found this writing from you to be very, very beautiful. You summed up the meaning of loss, love and a mothers way all in one poem. I couldn't help but feel your emotional pull as I read this through. I am touched by the poetic beauty of your writing here. I will remember this poem for many weeks now. It was very powerful and very sweet. My heart aches.
I thought this writing from you was excellent. There was a very poetic feeling over me as I read this through. The flow was good, the rhythm was good too. I think this writing was very noble and powerful to me. The singing wind was a lovely title and matched the writing very well. I loved every line you wrote down. There were too many favourite lines to mention. This writing reminded me of one of my favourite songs called.... "Where the Rose is Sown".... Such powerful poetry. Thank you for sharing.
I thought you wrote a really nice piece here. Summing up the wonder of summers delight. I too see the beauty of a summers eve and have tried writing a few pieces on this subject. I loved the flow of this writing. I loved the mentioning of the porch, this part held good imagery for me. I found your writing to be very poetic and sweet. A nice refreshing read. Thank you for sharing.
I see that you have shared your feelings after seeing an old photograph. This can lead to a very emotional piece of writing. I see that your writing here was just that. A lovely yet sorrowful piece of writing. You opened your feelings very well here. I hope there are no scars in you. I enjoyed reading your writing and felt humble by the honesty of your piece. A great, heartfelt piece.
I related very well to your writing here. I once lived in a loft conversion and when it rained the rain could be heard very clearly. Some nights when raining, it would send me to sleep with such harmony. I also find the rain to be romantic at times. Your poem was very factful to me. I would have loved your poem to be simply titled..."Rainfall". I understood why you called it "Snuggle"..... Overall this was a nice read, thank you for sharing.
I like how you made this dragon seem like a friendly dragon. I loved the sweet innocense of your writing here. I loved the line...."And from his contented burps, there will be no reprieve"....I could just imagine the greedy dragon burping and this made me smile. Nice refreshing writing.
I really enjoyed the nature story you told here. I like how you said that the flowers will cry. This was a very poetic chain. I enjoyed the flow of these poems. There was a nice feeling over me as I read these through. Good refreshing writing.
I thought your writing here was very simple and easy to follow and understand. I know exactly how you feel here. Love is very powerful. You have expressed yourself very clearly here and I enjoyed reading how you feel. I hope everything works out for you. Good writing and well done.
I thought you expressed yourself very well here. You described the feeling of anxiety very well. I liked the title, it seemed to capture my attention. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. This was a powerful piece of writing. Thank you for sharing and keep going....
Aww. This writing was so very sweet. The beauty of father and child together, bonding. This was a very thoughtful piece of writing and it touched my heart deeply. The flow was good and the rhythm was good too. I would have loved to have read more of this piece. I loved the meaning, the sentiment, the heart warming story. Thank you for writing and sharing this lovely piece.
I liked this writing from you. It was very real and direct. I think some men forget that women carry life inside themselves. Therefore control future generations. I think women have some much more to offer this world than men. Your writing was well delivered and completed. I enjoyed reading it through. Thank you and write on !!!
I thought your little poem here was sweet and direct. I liked the sentiment and power this writing gave me. It was very nice. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. This was very heart felt and warm to read through. A well thought out piece of writing. Great work and keep going...
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