I thought your poem here was special and very rewarding to read through. I loved your philosophy used here in smiling in the shadows of life. I thought the theme was very original and wonderful. This is one of the best poems I have read today. Great work and write on!!!
I thought your poem here was cute. I liked the innocense at the ending. The size of the poem was good. It kept my attention levels up high. I would however loved to have read more of this writing. A fresh piece of writing. An original theme too. Good work.
I thought your poem here was very sweet and very simple. I liked how you ended each stanza, this gave the writing a nice edge to it. The title was fitting for the poems contents. A simple but very effective piece of writing. Good work.
A lovely poetic feeling came across me as I read this through. You are no stranger to writing. This is another sweet piece from you. Your words and lines seem to have a very light feeling to them. Your writing is very good. I loved this work from you.
I think you are a very good writer. I am so glad I found your work. This is another beautiful piece of writing. You have a very poetic insight. I loved this writing so much. The sweetness was lovely. A nice sized piece of writing too, it didn't drag on and on. You kept my attention levels up high. Great, great writing.
I thought your poem here was lovely and very fresh. This is one of the best pieces I have read all day. The sweetness of the purity of each line. You captured the beauty of the shore very well. I was very humbled after reading this through. I live just 15 minute walk from the shore and the next time I go there I will think of this poem. Great writing. Well done.
I thought your little piece of writing was lovely. Such a lovely little message of hope. I also thought the words and lines were very sweet. The simplicity of this piece was uplifting and inspiring. I would have loved to have read more of this piece. Great, positive writing.
I thought your little piece here was very sweet and comforting to read through. Such a simple little message to read. I also found it very humbling to me. A positive message and full of hope. I would have loved to have read more of this piece.
I thought your writing here was great. I loved your creativity in this piece. There was a nice flowing feel to this writing. I enjoyed reading this through. I liked how you ended each line with "This is me"....very creative. Well done.
I thought this writing from you was good and powerful. I liked the heroic words and lines. You painted a nice picture with your words. The flow was good, there were also great rhymes in this piece. I enjoyed reading this through.
I thought this poem was really sweet and powerful to me. The cuteness of the rhymes and the message the writing held was very clever. I have read a few of your works and you are a great writer. I liked the mentioning of a mothers advise, yes, they always know best. Great writing.
I liked the expressions in this poem. I liked the tiny story too. This little poem sparked my romantic side to come alive. I thought this was a clever piece of writing. I would have loved to have read more from this bitter sweet poem. Overall, a great read.
I liked the creativity from you in this piece of writing. There was a good poetic feeling about this work. I think you covered the subject of changing relationships very well. I would have loved to have read more of this piece. Good expressions here. Well done.
I thought your poem here was excellent to read through. The story was brilliant and made me smile. The rhyming was perfect and flowed along really well. This was a well executed piece of writing from you. One of the best poems I have read In a long time. Great writing, well done.
Aww. I loved this poem from you. It was a real treat to read through. The rhymes were fantastic and made the writing special. The little story was beautiful and rewarding. I couldn't fault your writing here. Such a poetic wonder. Great writing. Thank you for sharing.
I thought your writing here was very simple and easy to follow. I liked the meaning of this writing too. I enjoyed reading this through. The flow was good and the rhythm was fine. The overall effect was good and powerful. Great work.
I thought your poem here was beautiful and a delight to read through. To write about any soldier is rewarding and honorable. The rhymes and flow were perfect. While reading this through, I paused for a moment and remembered. A lovely tribute, a lovely poem. Great, great writing. Thank you.
I thought this was a lovely little piece of writing. Grandchildren are awesome. I can't help wondering who is missing from your day? You painted a lovely picture with your words and lines. I enjoyed reading this through but felt there was a little pain too. Thank you for sharing.
My lady friend is an avid horse lover too. I liked the simplicity of this writing here. There is a mysitc feeling around me when I read about horses. I enjoyed reading this through. I liked the notion of being as one together in harmony. This was very poetic. Good writing and well expressed.
I thought your little poem here was very philosophical to me. I liked the wisdom used here. I read this a few times to get the full effect and I loved it. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. Well done for the good creativity. Thank you for sharing ...
Awww.... I loved the sentiment in this writing. The way you ended the poem was very heartfelt and deep. I thought your writing was very poetic and held a good message. The whole poem was sweet and I enjoyed reading it through. The overall effect was very special. Thank you for sharing.
I thought your writing here was very factful and real. I agreed with everything you wrote down. I specfically agreed with the very last line. My mother is very supportive of me ... even now. I know I can never repay her for her mothers power. A lovely read and thank you.
I thought your poem here was very sweet and cute. I loved the world that you and your friend/lover created. The writing was clever. The theme was clever too. I liked how you both were caught up in each other too much to care about the outside world. After all those years you still know this person. Yes, that is very cool. lol. A lovely read and I enjoyed it all. Good writing.
I thought your writing here was very poetic and rolled along nicely. The theme was very original. I don't think I have read a piece about handicapped people before. This was rare and fresh. So very thoughtful of you. I found no way of improving the poem. Great work.
I was gripped to the details of this lady in question. She sounds like a very clever woman. A woman who knows the ropes of life. Then..... I discovered the lady was your mother. I thought this was so sweet to read. I melted at this point. A lovely accolade for your mother. I see this was written several years ago. I loved it.
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