I loved the last several lines of this poem. They had great momentum as you depicted the true glory of the oceans. There was a unique blend of wisdom in this poem. I loved it all. Nice flowing lines. This poem to me was a real treat to read through. The mentioning of the stars, the earths ballance was a lovely touch. Great writing.
Seeing as you are female and wrote this from a mans point of view, I would say that the man in you is very romantic and lustful. This was a clever piece of writing. The romance was very nice. Some woman will never know of the beauty they hold in their being. Some men lust just for sex and some just lust for romance. Your poem here covered the fact that he is searching for both. I enjoyed reviewing your poem. Well done.
I would love to know if the shadow girl is a real woman. However, I think you summed up women very well here. This was a good read and I enjoyed it all. There was a nice poetic sway with your words and lines. I found no way of improving your item here. Good expressions.
I found this writing to be very uplifting. You described a scene very well. The story you told was one of beauty and the beautiful essence of nature, both human and the elements. I liked the size too, it kept my attention levels up high. The poetic sway was lovely. This was well written. Great work.
I really loved reading this through. Your descriptive lines and words were fantastic to me. I really enjoyed this world you created here. There seemed to be an air of emotion in the way you wrote this piece. Fantasy or not, it really hit home the hustle of walking the streets. This was a real treat to read through. The purity of each line was gripping. I think you told an amazing story here. Thank you for the great read.
I loved this little poem from you. All three lines created so much imagery for me. I could feel the cold snow on my face as I read this through. The smoking chimney made me feel warmer. A simple but very effective little piece of writing. Great work.
I had to laugh at this poem. A big smile on my face. A simple yet very effective piece of writing. This could easily be written about real life occassions. Baldness is not funny to most men but you made me laugh. Good writing.
I loved this writing from you. It was so much fun to read through. You crafted this piece very well indeed. I could never be as creative as you have been here. For a brief moment in time I was captivated by the purity of this writing. Great for children. Good work.
I loved the theme of this writing. This made me smile as I read it through. The beauty of friends came alive in this poem. I can see that you were very thankful for this moment in time. Another well presented poem from you. You write very well. Thank you.
I thought your writing here was very sweet and very simple. There was a nice, fresh feeling comming off these words and lines. I would have loved to have read more of this writing. It feels good to write about places we love and admire. Good work.
I found your writing here to be very philosophical and deep. This to me was a poets poem, well written, well described scenery too. You managed to cover many aspects of nature and love here. I liked the overall feeling of this writing. I would have loved to have read more.
I found your writing to be very special indeed. To see the light from the darkness is a wonderful skill you and your husband have created. All kids like fun times and play times. If my son were autistic I would play with him every hour, every day. But I know this tiring. I do not know enough about this condition to comment so much. I am however, delighted you have seen a way forward. Thank you for sharing this writing here and I wish you and your family the very best in life. Stay strong and keep going.
I actually quite liked the simplicity of this piece from you. The descriptive lines made this a poets joy. I really liked the 3rd from last line.... "Birdsong, wind murmurs".... Such an adorable line. I would have loved to have read more of this writing. Keep going.
I thought your writing here was very clever indeed. The theme was very original to me. Your philosophy was excellent. I was ever so surprised at the meaning of this writing. This is for thinkers to delve into. A positve but different take on life. This was a very decent piece. Thank you.
I liked the size of this little piece here. It kept my attention levels up high. Horses are magical animals. I like their photogenic appearance. I know some horses are very proud to have a rider and some just won't allow anyone to ride them. The angle you wrote this from was unique. Simple and effective writing. Thank you.
I thought your poem here was great. It was a joy to read through. Your rhymes were special and made the writing flow so much easier. The theme was great too. I found no way of improving the writing. You have done a wonderful job here. Great writing, keep going.
I thought your writing here was excellent by theme. The funny look at dancing made me smile. Your whole poem was a delight to read through. Your rhymes were fantastic through the whole poem. The rhythm was great too. A lovely little piece of writing. Well done. Great work.
I thought you wrote this perfectly. The rhymes were great. The flow was great too. The whole piece was a delight to read through. The tone of the writing was pleasant and peaceful. I am guessing there were horses named in this piece. I liked the overall feeling this poem gave me. Thank you.
I liked your poem here. The writing was very simple, explaining the life of the ocean. It is a shame there are parts of the ocean that we can not see and you mentioned this in your poem. I would have loved to have read more of this poem. Overall, a nice little refreshing read. Thank you so much.
I thought your little poem here was rather funny. I don't know, I just laughed as I read this through. A sweet little piece and a look inside a childs mind at bed time. I would have loved to have read more of this piece. Nice writing. Keep going...
I found your poem to be very nice and rewarding to me. I pictured the scene in my mind as I read this through. Flowers, petals, nature all make such wonderful writings. I liked the pink coloured font to symbolize sweetness. Great writing and keep going...
I found your writing to be very powerful and clear. I liked the urgency the words and lines gave off. The whole poem was a positive piece. You seemed to help me shake off any doubt I may have. I found no way of improving the item. I really enjoyed reading it through. Thank you.
I found your writing to be very inspiring indeed. This was written very well. A nice flowing way to this poem. I appreicated every line and every word. I found no errors and no way of improving your piece. The art of poetry is truly something special to everyone. Thank you for writing and sharing this lovely item here.
I thought I would visit your port after reading the first poem.
You have the most refreshing take on God I have read for many weeks now. I find your writings to be very uplifting. You simplify the meaning of God's great work. There is a humble feeling to your writings. Thank you for sharing your gift here. Keep going....
I thought your poem here was amazing. As reading this through I had shivers down my spine at the way you wrote this and the things you said. This was a lovely read to me. You painted a scene very well. A very well expressed piece of writing. I loved it and found it to be inspirational. Keep writing great pieces.
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