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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello.

WOW!!!

What an amazing piece of writing this truly is. Such great rhythm, such great flowing rhymes. If this had have been written this year I would have nominated this for Quills. Not only is the structure perfect the meaning was so beauitful. There was a deep chord struck in me as I read this writing through. There was lots of empathy and emotions running here in your writing. This has to be one the finest pieces I have read in the last year. The thing that made this writing have a deep imapct was the ending quote that your poor niece took her own life. I find this hard to bare too. And I am sorry for the loss. Great, special, rewarding, clever writing. Amen.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello.

I liked the rhythm used here in this poem. I did feel an emotional sway in these words and lines. I dont know who the woman is or was you wrote this for but she sounds very wise. I liked the length of this piece, it kept my attention levels up high. Nice writing, good style.

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Review of I am the Flame  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello.

I thought your poem here was excellent to read through. I liked the angle you wrote this out. The writing looks good centered on the page. It seems to me that you have a great spirit and won't give up the fight. There was good imagery coming from the words and lines here. You also expressed yourself so prefessionally. Great writing and keep your head up.

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Review by First Light Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello.

I liked the positivity that came along with this piece from you. It is true that worrying seems to be a waste of time. There is no time to be sad or low. I liked the length of this poem, it kept my attention levels up high. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. Your Papa was very wise to share this wise philosophy. Great work and write on!!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello.

I enjoyed reading this writing through. You have done a fine job here. You wrote this very sweetly and I found no way to improve the item. I really enjoyed the flowing rhymes and flowing rhythm, it made the poem a real joy to read. I also liked the wisdom that was inside this work. There was a good amount of imagery here. Great work and write on!!

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Review by First Light Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello.

It has been a while since I popped in.

I thought this acrostic was perfectly written and perfectly displayed. Great rhymes, great flowing rhythm. I have never written an acrostic before, maybe I should. I think you are a great writer and have come along so well since joining WDC. Keep posting little classics. Write on!!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello.

Welcome to writing.com.

I enjoyed reading your little story through and really liked the ending. I could see her sipping her scotch as the life went on around her. The imagery was good. There were no spelling mistakes and no other issues here. Your story telling and grammar were excellent. Nice writing.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello.

Fact or fiction this was a good slice of life's realities here. There was an unexpected turn in the item. This turn hit quite emotionally. Life goes on no matter what happens. A good thinkers poem and was a lesson to its readers. I enjoyed the poem. Thank you for sharing. Write on!!

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Review by First Light Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello.

I liked the reality of your writing here. I liked the theme too. Nice presentation on the page. You did a fine job here with the given prompt. There seemed to be good imagery coming off the words and lines. There was a scary truth in the last stanza. Nice work and write on!!

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Review of Dawn  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello.

I really loved the very last line of this item from you. It was so simply stated and aired. It was also a matter of fact. A good structured poem, well written and thought out. I liked the creative writing here. I enjoyed reading this through. Nice work and write on!!

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Review of True Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello.

I liked this piece from you. The start was very promising and rewarding. I was a bit suprised to read that the beauty didn't last long. Nice presentation, centered on the page. Nice length for a poem, it kept my attention levels up high. Overall, an interesting item. Write on!!

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Review by First Light Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello.

I thought your writing here was lovely, rewarding and beautiful. Nice words and lines here. This sounds like true and real love to me. The positive way you wrote this out was great. Good rhymes, good flow and good rhythm. Great writing, write on!!!

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello.

I really enjoyed reading this clever piece through. Nice structure to your writing. A good accolade for the woman in question. I also found this item to very positively written. Nice lines of hope and winning ways. I enjoyed the flowing words. Good work and write on!!

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Review of Hungry Lurker  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello.

I thought your writing here was funny and also cute. Life through the eyes of a tick. A great, original theme. Nice flow, nice structure. A different type of poem than I am used to but great all the same. Keep writing and posting. Write on!!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello.

I thought your writing here was special and heart warming. Your emotions were powerful and the meaning of this letter was very sensitive. Your expressive manner was great. I did feel emotional as I read this through. Nice writing and I am sorry for your loss. Write on !!

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Review of Any Longer  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello.

I felt the emotions running high in this poem from you. The sadness was strong. You wrote this out very well. The structure was good, the flow was good too. Nice font used. I am sorry for your loss if this is the case. Nice expressive tone to your work. Write on !!

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Review of WINNING  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello.

I liked your writing style here in this piece. The flow and rhythm were great. I couldn't help but feel a kind of philsophical power here, a mind conditioning. A nice length for a poem, it kept my attention levels up high. You are good at writing positive poems. Good work and write on!!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello.

I thought your little piece here was nice. I liked how you ended the item. It was indeed very positive. A nice poetic power here. Great size for a poem, not too long and not too short. I smiled as I read this through. Good work and write on !!!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello.

I liked the theme of your item here. I could feel the positivity coming from each line. A mini speach of hope and glory here. I also liked the poetic power from this piece. The title is very rewarding and gives me a sign of wonder and posibilities. Nice creative theme. Good work and write on!!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello.

I thought your writing here was very expressive indeed. I related very well to everything you wrote down here. Isn't life fun? The darkness in your poem here was inviting to me becuase I have very troubled times too. I fight a war a cannot win and it goes round in circles, every day, every year. The art of writing helps the mind unwind and you wrote a very clear message here. Keep expressing yourself, others will read your work and comment.

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Review by First Light Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello.

I thought your poem here was beautiful. It was so emotionally written I nearly cried. A beautiful flow, great rhymes and rhythm. You expressed yourself so very well here. I enjoyed reading this through. The last two lines were very clever indeed. Great work and write on!!!

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Review of WOUNDS  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello.

I thought this was a great piece of writing. I liked the inspiration coming from the words and lines. Nice structure, nice flowing rhythm. You have done a fine job here. I enjoyed reading this through. I found no way of improving the writing, it is fine the way it is. Good work and write on!!!

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello.

I thought this item from you was very gripping indeed. Fact or fiction, it is a very meaningful piece of writing. There was deep feelings and inspiration over me as I read this through. Dark? yes, but very harrowing and special. Your grammar was perfect. Great writing and well executed. Write on!!

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Review of Ruby Throats  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

Yes, I loved this little poem from you. Great writing style. I liked the poetic way this hit me. Good imagery came from the words and lines. I am going to award this little beauty with a ribbon. I am enjoying your port so far. Write on !!

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Review of Random Thoughts  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello.

I think you used the prompt very well here. You nailed it. Good work. I liked the intelligence you used to write this poem. I see you have written many 8 lined poems. You have a neat portfolio. Keep up the good work and write on!!

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