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Review of blooming dreams  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wisteria Author Icon

I thought this was a lovely little poem from you. Great flowing rhymes, great rhythm too. There was a poetic power to your poem here. The title matched the poems words and lines so very well. I really enjoyed reading this through. I liked the philosophy used in this poem. Good work and write on!!!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
JCosmos Author Icon

I thought your little piece of writing here was interesting. The originality of what you decided to write about was great. A believer will welcome this poem from you, as do I. The philosophy that time repeats itself. A nice spiritual feeling came across me as I read this through. Good work and write on!!!

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Review by First Light Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Prosperous Snow celebrating Author Icon

See, this poem from you is why I come to writing.com. When I review, I hope to find a beauitful piece of writing. I did just that, I found this poem from you to be swift, lavish, pretty and special. The rainfall does have a scent and it brings life to the world. A beauitful poem from you. I loved the poetic power.

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Review of Musical Frisson  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
LeJenD' Author Icon

I thought your poem here was nice, I enjoyed the flowing rhythm. The poem had good structure and was well ballanced. I think you described the love of music quite well here, I particually liked the knee slapping line. Music can heal and roll along side our pains very well. I enjoyed reading this through, good work.

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Review of Flexibility  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Sumojo Author Icon

I related so very well to your writing here. At 51 I feel I am decaying too. A good, original theme for a poem. I liked your honesty here. A nice length for a poem, keeping my attention levels up high. I enjoyed reading this through. Good work and write on!!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
bob county Author Icon

I thought the first stanza, the introduction, was beauitfully written and displayed. I loved the inspiration you gave me here. The twilight, the shadows and night was lovely. A sweet little piece of writing and I enjoyed reading this through. For a brief moment in time I was taken away from daily life. Good work and write on!!!

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Review of Long Distance  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Soup Author Icon

I liked your expressions here in this piece from you. The love was real and it seems like your partner is committed to you. As long as you are both nice to each other you both will be fine. Nice rhythm to your writing here. I related to what you had written out. Nice work and write on!!

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Review of SON  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
BUSYBEE Author Icon

I thought there were some honest lines in your writing. Addmitting that mother-hood can be a test. The love for your son here was evident and rewarding. I liked the simplicity of this poem from you. The title was fitting for your words and lines. I enjoyed reading this through. Good expressions.

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Review of Forest Sunset  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Beholden Author Icon

I thought your writing here was rather good. I thought the picture with the words and lines was lovely. Nice desriptive words. I liked the length of the poem, it kept my attention levels up high. I enjoyed reading and reviewing your poem and wouldn't change a thing. Good writing, nice work.

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Review by First Light Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Detective Author Icon

I liked the original theme of this piece from you. I liked the way you wrote this out too. The spooky feeling was real and vivid. Good inspiration came from this piece. A simple and easy poem to follow and understand. I liked the overall effect. Good work and write on !!

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Review of Alone In The Dark  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
GERVIC Author Icon

I liked the scene you set here in this piece. The imagery was great. The length of the poem was good because it kept my attention levels up high. There was a sweet, poetic pull about this piece. The words and lines could easily be a prompt for a story. Nice work and write on !!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
AmyJo-Downhill slide begins! Author Icon

I thought you expressed yourself very well here. Summing up and describing a low day. Nice flowing lines and words. Good rhythm. Your poetic grammar was clear and easy to follow and understand. I enjoyed reading this poem through. Good work and write on !!!

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Review of WINTER WALK  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Maria Mize Author Icon

I enjoyed reading this poem through. You set the scene so very well. You reminded me of the magic that comes along with soft snow. The imagery was great. Nice form and good presentation. I loved the poetic power this piece gave me. Good writing.

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Review of Gym Split  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Than Pence Author Icon

I thought your comical poem here was great, I loved it all. Nice clear story telling in poetic form. The flow was good and the rhythm was good too. I salute you for being able to write a comical piece, I take life too seriously to even try. Good work and write on !!!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
💙 Carly: poems & novel Author Icon

I thought this was a nice poem, summing the road of life up very well. Nice presentation center of the page. Good rhymes and rhythm. The poem was well rounded off with the mentioning of time moving on. I liked the philisophical feeling of this poem. Good work and write on !!

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Review of Forbidden Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
KimE Author Icon

I felt the anguish and suffering of a bruised heart and soul. Nice length of a poem, it kept my attention levels up high. As "Phill Collins" said, "You can't hurry love". Your writing has good ballance and good structure. There seemed to be a lot of reality in your poems. Good work and write on !!!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
KimE Author Icon

I related so very well to this poem from you. Funny enough, I live by the sea too and visit the water and shore when I can. The refreshing feeling and spiritual pull of the waves and scents is sublime. The ocean always makes great poetry, I think every poet has written about the ocean. I did spot something in the poem that could use some attention. The 3rd line from the end seems to have a higher syllable count to the rest of the poem. I thought this distracted the beauty from this poem. It is just my preference and you dont have to take my advice. But I would take a look at shortening the line. I hope you are not offended. Other than that, this is a lovely poem.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
KimE Author Icon

I decided to visit your portfolio and read some of your expressive poetry.

I liked the title. I liked how you expressed yourself here. To me there were no signs of a Bi-sexual writer. I think your words were straight from the heart and feelings. Your writing held good emotions and you have a heart worth gold. Love works best when we don't push it. I step back and let the real feelings shine through.

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Review of Memorial Day 2022  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Jay O'Toole Author Icon

Hi, your poem was selected by the random read page, here is what I thought..

I enjoyed this poem from you. For me, there was excellent imagery here. The noble and powerful way you wrote this was great. I liked the cutting edge this poem gave me, a heroic feeling. Good writing and great work.

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Review of Welcome Autumn  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Sumojo Author Icon

Hi, your item was selected by the random read page, here is what I thought..

I enjoyed reading this through. I also related well to what you had written. Nice presentation and even stanzas made this attractive to the eye. A good theme and a nice flowing rhythm. I liked the imagery that came along with this poem. Good work and write on!!

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
winklett Author Icon

Hi, your item was selected by the random read page, here is what I thought..

I thought you wrote this in a clever way, as though speaking for the planet itself. I found it poetic and interesting. Nice word crafting. I liked the length of the writing, it kept my attention levels up high. A good read and I enjoyed reviewing it.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Carol St.Ann 👓 Author Icon

Hi, your poem was selected by the random read page, here is what I thought..

You manged to say a lot in just a few lines. Great presentation on the page. I found the little twist in the last line summed the item up perfectly. There was a nice poetic sway to this poem and it was enjoyable to read and review. Nice work.

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Review of RAIN  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Naomi Author Icon

Hi, your item was selected by the random read page, here is what I thought...

I think this is a lovely little story from you. The words to the song are very special and heart warming, I felt the romance. You have a big heart and proved it here by singing your favourite song. Love always makes good tales and is healthy for the spirit. This was a lovely read, thank you for sharing it here. God Bless you!!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Kaya Rechelle Zerwis Author Icon

Hi, your item was selected by the random read page, here is what I thought...

I admired your honesty in writing and posting this piece. I wouldn't worry too much, it seems like you are a very sensitive person. It is ok to care and have feelings. You are thoughtful and honest and that is something to be proud of. Just don't let anyone rule your feelings.

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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Stay True Author Icon

Hi, your writing was selected by the random read page, here is what I thought..

I thought you expressed yourself very clearly. There was an emotional power over me as I read this through. I liked your honesty here, you were not affraid to empty your feelings onto the page. I guess this is why womem wear make up, so they can be spotted in a crowd. An interesting item.

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