I thought your writing here was very deep and very special. I liked how you made me feel when reading this through. I have thought these thoughts too. I agree with everything you wrote down here. Life is too short to hold something against another. This was a very nice peace offering and a chance to love your friends, family and aquaintances again. This was very deep and powerful. Well done. Keep going.
I loved the deepness of this writing from you. From your writing I achieved the thought that we're all part of a master plan and life is out of our control. I felt your cenerity and soul reaching in this writing. This is a thinkers poem and it certainly made me think too. This is one of the joys of writing, it can delve deep and leave us inspired, just like this poem from you. Great deep work. Keep going.
Aww, I loved this poem from you here. It was such a gem to read through. This is a very simple yet powerful poem here. I loved the poetic sway of each line. Nice flowing feel to this writing too. I think your writing style here is very orginal and rewarding. Thank you for writing such a nice piece of work.
This was a nice little piece of writing. I liked the rhythm here. I loved how you mention earth and other planets while sleeping. I think this was a very poetic gain. I enjoyed reading this through. I found no way of improving the poem. Well done.
I have noted that all your poems are very poetic and rhyme perfectly. Your rhymes give your poetry good rhythm and timing. I think you are an underestimated writer. I love your writings and will always read them. This one was very sweet and I liked the question you raised: What if I couldn't speak, this line frightened me. Good work and write on!!!
I agree with everything you wrote down here. Mothers have an intuition that defies belief. I like how you said that mothers can be dads and granddas too. I think this quote was very touching and revealing. I enjoyed reading this through. Nice entry and well done.
Yes, liers have to watch their backs every single day. I enjoyed reading your work through. You used some good philosophy here, fact even. You also expressed yourself very well. There was a serious tone to this writing and I loved it all. This is a thinkers poem. Great expressions. Well done.
It is a sunny day here in the UK and reading your peom really resonated that special feeling of nature. This was a very poetic piece of writing and I loved it all very much. I think you did a fine job here on this writing. I found no way of improving the poem. Great work and thank you.
I loved the periodic feel to this story. You desrcibed the lives and ways of these women very well. I think France brings the best out of women and their behavour. The ladies were very close to each other, sharing jokes throughout the museum visit. A nice refreshing story conveying the etiquette women. Thank you.
I feel this writing would suit that of a womaniser. I liked the depth of your writing here. The poem had good momentum and good flow. The structure was very good. The title was very fitting for the words and lines. There seemed to be a powerful undertone to this writing, it was very real and direct. Good work and thank you.
This was a very confident piece of writing and I loved the positivity coming from you. I liked the words you used. Each line was something new and rewarding. Your writing was strong and you seem to have a soul and personality that defies defeat and loss. The title matched your writing very well. I enjoyed reading this through. Thank you and write on !!!
I thought your writing was very good. I liked the powerful love pull. I couldn't help feel the painful tug of a fading love. I liked the expressions used in this piece. I would have loved to have read more of this writing. It was well written and displayed. Good work and thank you.
I thought your writing here was great. The theme of time was obvious here. This was a nice descriptive piece of work. There were some great lines in this piece. I was a little shocked at the ending line. I only hope the ending was fiction. I found no way of improving the poem. Great work and thank you.
I thought your writing here was pretty good. The rhymes were good, the flow was good too. I couldn't help feel the sorrow of the meaning of this poem. I stopped and thought of all life passing by. I enjoyed reading this through although a little sad. Good work and thank you.
I thought your writing here was nice. I am sorry for your loss all those years ago. I know the pain never leaves and we learn to deal with it daily. I liked how you spoke the truth and didn't sugar coat the writing in any way. A good read and thank you.
I thought your writing here was special. I loved the meaning of this piece. You have cleverly crafted a good item here. The rhythm was good and the flow was good too. I liked your philosophy here in this piece of writing. Good work and keep going.
I thought your writing here was quite good. I also thought it was quite dark. I liked the writing style you used here. The flow was good and the rhythm was good too. The title was a good match for the writing. I enjoyed reading this through. Well done.
Yes, this was an excellent piece of writing. I laughed really hard while reading this through. The rhymes were perfect and made the poem flow perfectly. Your humor was brilliant and well expressed. This was so funny. Great writing, well done. 10 out 10.
I enjoyed reading this through, it was brilliant to me. I loved how you set a scene of unkown quantity, a blank canvas. I was gripped to each word. The story was exciting and rewarding. Yes, you did manage to scare me a little bit. I think this could progress into a really good thriller or horror. Good work.
I really liked the nostalgic view this writing gave me. Covering all aspects of life and peoples conditions. The mixture of a flower blooming still, was very poetic and rewarding. Reading this through and processing the aftermath, it made me feel kind of sad. You wrote a very thought provoking piece here. A very deep piece of writing. Thank you for sharing.
I thought this writing was very interesting to me. It must be hard moving around a lot. I like how you managed to free yourself from the chains of moving towns. This was a nice insight into your world. I am glad you have strength to see new beginings. A well expressed and well displayed piece of writing. Great work and well done.
I thought you wrote a very sweet and interesting piece here. The thrill of performing music to a crowd can be very nerve tangling, I am glad you all got the applause you deserved. I play the guitar and have written a few songs, so I can relate to the tune-up phase. I loved the theme of this writing. I found your poem to be quite exciting. Thank you for sharing.
Welcome to writing.com. Here you will find all you need to enhance your writing skills. There is also plenty of stories to read through. I hope by reading peoples stories you will expand your knowledge in the readers and writing world. Good luck.
I liked the simplicity of your writing here. I also liked the twist in poem at the end. The last stanza resonated very loudly to me. A good theme and a very original one too. You expressed yourself very well here. I would have loved to have read more from this writing. Nice read.
Aww. This writing from you was so very thoughtful and inspiring to me. Your writing made me think deeply about time and how it passes us all by. I couldn't help feel emotional when reading this through. Your thoughts are very powerful and caring. I really enjoyed this piece from you. Great work.
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