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I thought you wrote a deep, honest piece of writing here. I liked how easy it was to read and follow. I liked your descriptive self-awareness lines. I loved the title. After reading this work through, it does seem like you are a person worth knowing and making friends with. Thats what I got from your item. You are a lively character. I could be wrong. lol.. Overall, excellent writing.
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I thought this was a lovely piece of writing. The rhymes and story brought me much joy reading this through. The flow was good too. I liked the harmless fun you wrote of. You did make me feel cold though. lol. A nice Christmasy poem to get your readers in the festive mood. Good work.
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A well written piece, good flowing rhymes, great rhythm. The humor was good too. I liked the times font you used, it made the writing easy to read. I think it would be quite hard to write a comical piece about the devil, I don't think I could achieve it. So well done for the creativity. Write on !!
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I thought your writing here was a little bit funny. Funny because writing about wrinkles is very rare and made the poem stand out tremendously. The original theme was excellent. You expressed yourself very well here. My overall feeling for this writing from you was great. Write on!!!
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I thought this was very deep and expressive through out. There was great poetic power in this piece from you. However beautiful the writing was, I couldn't help feel sad as I read this through. There seemed to be an undertone of sorrow to me. It was like you were calling mankind to be more thoughtful and kind. I could be completely wrong in my translation here. The overall feeling was powerful. I enjoyed reading this through. Great writing.
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WOW !!!
I loved this piece of writing from you. Your word crafting was perfect. There was humour in this piece. You wrote this very well. I smiled as I read this through. I think this is a very clever piece of writing. The flow was great, the rhymes and rhythm was perfect. I loved the whole item. Thank you for writing this wonderful piece. Great writing.
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I loved the philosophical power this writing gave me. The fact filled writing was superb. There seemed to be good advice here too. The flow was good, the rhymes and rhythm were good too. You certainly made me think as I read this through. I found no errors and no way of improving the item. Great work.
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I actually quite liked your word crafting. I liked the deepness of each line. I also liked the positive twist in the writing. It seems to me that women are much more romantic than males and the woman in your writing was very lavish and poetic. I enjoyed reading your writing through. Overall, it was very gripping to me. Thank you for sharing this here.
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Yes, a lovely poetic sway about this piece. The combining of summer love, summer season and the flowers was a real delight. I am not surprised this piece was a winner. The imagery coming from the summer night was amazing. I felt freedom from this piece. The title was a perfect match for your writing. Great writing and great expressions. Thank you for sharing this here.
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I thought this was a lovely piece of writing from you. There was spirit, heart, soul and kindness in the writing. I loved it all and would love to have read more from you. The overall effect of this writing was humbling and powerful, a real sentimental treat for the reader. The last stanza said it all, so rewarding. Great writing.
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Aww. I loved the sentiment here. The philosophy was scary and made me think. Time does speed up as we grow older day by day. You wrote this very well and I found no way of improving the writing. I loved the title too. The last two lines were very special, they held power over me, spiritual and strong. Overall, a great read and I really enjoyed reviewing this item.
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I thought this was very well written. I liked the facts of life you used. Nice expressions and nicely presented. The title was pretty and expalined the poem very well. I couldn't help feel slightly saddend by the realness of growing older. Just as you said, the beauty of colour changes as we become frail. Overall, a nice thought-provoking piece of writing. Well done and write on !!!
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Awww. I absolutely loved this piece of writing from you. It was so Christmassy and warming. To me, you really caught my imagination here. A lovely view from the animals at Christmas. I actually found this quite emotional as I read this through. Silent night, all is bright and well. A lovely little piece of writing. Thank you for making my night as I review. God bless and write on.
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OMG, The pain in this piece was hard to deal with. Fiction or non-fiction this poem was really sad. The ending was so shocking and really made me think sadly. I really felt for the woman in this piece. Sadly this writing could easily be truth, some women do stay in relationships that are sour. The theme was good and I enjoyed readin gthis through. Interesting work. Thank you for the experinece.
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I thought this was a lovely little piece of writing. I loved the style you wote this in. Your word crafting was great. There was a lovely poetic feeling about this piece from you. I found no way of improving your writing here. There was also great imagery coming from each line written. I loved it. Well done and write on !!!
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I loved this piece of writing. I found it to be very poetic and lavish. The romantic sway of well chosen words was a real joy to read. The way you wrote this was very clever and thrilling for any romanticist. Your word crafting was excellent throughout. I found no errors and no way of improving this piece. I loved it all, well done and write on !!!
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Great theme for a poem. The positivity coming from each word was great. You wrote this very well. The philosophy was special and the tone of each line really hit home. The deepness was great too. I also found this piece to be quite humbling and made me think. This was very enjoyable to read through. Thank you for sharing this here. Great work and write on !!!
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I loved this piece of writing. I loved the simplicity of each admission you made. The call for God's love, advice and direction was sublime and honest. I liked the calling, it was very spiritual to me. The title was fitting and the whole piece made me smile. I really enjoyed reading this through. I found no way of improving the item. Overall, a lovely little piece of writing. Write on !!!
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I liked the flowing rhymes and flowing rhythm. This all made the writing a good experience for me. I liked how the words and lines were all very truthful and realistic. This is obviously a real event in your town. The overall effect was good and I enjoyed reading this through. Great writing and write on !!!
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I liked the title, I liked your depth and honesty. The details were raw and heartfelt. I loved how you expressed yourself so simply. The overall effect of this writing was quite strong. This is what is so great about writing, we get to off-load our inner beings, our inner feelings, and you did a fine job of that. Great writing and write on!!!
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I thought your expressions were amazing here. There was a lovely feel to this writing for me. I liked the honesty, the ballance, the feel. A well written piece of writing. I also liked the depth you went to here. The flow was good, the rhythm was good too. I found no way of improving your work here. Overall, a great, deep expressional poem. Great work and write on !!!
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A lovely poem about the sun. Such poetic power in this work from you. When I start work it still dark, so I see the sun rise in the morning. So, I think you have described the scene so very well. You wrote this with such detail. The imagery was great. This was a lovely read and I enjoyed every part of it. Your word crafting was excellent. Well done!!!
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I thought this was well written. The poetic power coming from each line was great. I liked the way you wrote this piece. It was a very powerful indeed. There was also good imagery coming from the words and lines. I live near the sea so I related well to everything you wrote down. Overall, a nice read and worthy of 5 stars. Thank you for sharing this here.
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I liked the writing and I liked the original theme. You described this ladys art very well. I had great imagery coming from the words and lines. I found your writing to be very creative and real. I found no way to improve the work and I liked the form you used. Overall, a very nice read. Great work.
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Your creativity levels were fantastic here in this writing. There was a lovely poetic feel too. I liked the rhythm and the flowing rhymes, this made the poem a real joy to read through. The positivity of each stanza was great. The ending line brought me back down to Earth. Overall, I loved it all. Great work.
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