I came across your writing here in the random read page, here is what I thought ...
This was a very worrying piece of writing. I think you are very brave to share this information with everyone here. I am sorry for your troubles that were not your own doings. You have been through a lot in a short space of time. You are indeed, a strong woman. Keep writing, keep sharing your feelings here. Keep expressing.
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I thought this was a lovely piece of work. The joyful flow was superb and made the writing fun to read through. I liked your writing style here. The feeling you gave me was of a soft delight, a wonder, a joy. This was a nice accolade for all the writers in the world. Great writing. Write on !!
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I liked the feel of love in this piece. The love of a child. The story you told was sweet and very well executed. I really enjoyed reading this through. The amount of heart in this piece was lovely. A nice, warming poem to me. Great work.
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I thought this was a lovely little piece of writing. Your poetic skills were finely on display. The imagery from each line was fantastic. I loved the way this writing made me feel. The ending was sad and made me think that the heart can be a dark place without love. A great read and I loved it all.
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I loved this writing from you. I loved the deep, dark, poetic power this gave off. The meaning of the poem was great and made me think so deep. The flow was awesome. This was well written and displayed. The sorrowful theme was impressive and meant something to me. A lot of thought went into this piece. Great work and write on !!
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I liked the title, it summed up your thoughts very well. There was a nice poetic feeling to this work and I enjoyed the philosophy you used. The human mind is a very complicated thing and writers like you and I can write deeply. I liked the depth of your work here. There was a nice flow to this writing. Great work and write on !!
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I thought this was well written and the story you told was excellent. I loved the little twist at the end. I thought this was fun to read through and I enjoyed every word. Nice flowing lines. Good rhythm made this easy to follow. A good read and well done.
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I thought this was a very sweet piece of writing. I loved the cute story and the way you told it. There was a lovely sense of innocense in this poem. The rhymes were great, the flow was great too. I also found that there was good imagery coming from the words and lines. I used to keep mice, so I know what it is like when they sleep. They are cute. Good work and write on !!!
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I thought this was a lovely piece of writing. I loved the calling for freedom again. The freedom that being young gives us. I related to everything you wrote here. I guess you could say these were the best days of our lives. I enjoyed the peace this writing gave me as I read it through. There was a sense of belonging. I liked the spirit of this piece. Well done and great work.
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I was gripped to each line. I liked the depth of this writing. You wrote this very well. You said you were proud to be a parent, this line cleared up the whole piece perfectly. Kids, youths, always ask difficult questions and have a deep mind. I loved the quirkiness of your writing here. Good work and write on !!
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I thought this piece from you was very touching and insightful. I really loved your bravery in writing such a deep and honest piece. The originality of your writing here was great. For once I was humbled by the realness that a life is similar to the way I sometimes feel. I related to everything you wrote down here. There was depth and power in each line. I now know that all poetry does not have to be rosy and sugar coated. I loved the raw feeling you gave me. I enjoyed reading this through. I hope all is ok with you. Overall, a very good piece of writing, I loved it.
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I thought this was a lovely, sweet rhyming piece. I could not help but feel such sadness. The whole piece was a joy to read through. The closeness between you and your horse was beauitful. The descriptions of riding the trails was perfect. If you visit my portfolio header, you will see my friends horse, "Cassie" who is sadly no longer with us. I related well to the sorrow. Great writing.
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The title drew me in. It caught my eye. The actual writing was very gripping and interesting. The story was well told and understood. I felt sorrow and discomfort as I leaned the reason for writing this piece. I felt solitude too. Life goes on and nobody see's the pain. I am sorry you were driven to write about your mothers pain.
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I thought this writing was quite funny. I do not know if you mean't to be funny. The story you told was very different to me. I liked the sarcasm you held here. The title said it all and matched the writing well. A good piece of writing and made me smile. Write on !!
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I thought this was a deep piece of writing. I actually quite liked the imagery coming from the words and lines. My favourite part was when you wrote : "My gaze to the sky turned flaming red"..... This part gave me a lot of imagery, it reminded me of a lyric from a "Pink Floyd" song. You managed to say a lot in just a few words. Great work and write on !!
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I feel a lot of thinking and decisions went into this piece from you. It is a very thoughtful item. I loved the originality of the writing. There was imagery coming from the words and lines. I felt for the littel people with no hearts. I liked the depth of this piece too. Great work and write on !!
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I thought this writing came from the heart. I liked the historic feeling you gave me as I read this through. Luckily we are living in times of less war. I couldn't help feel your cry out for peace here. I also thought there was a serious tone to each word and line. There was a noble feeling to this work. Write on!!
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I thought this little piece was great and very rewarding to read through. It was sweet and to the point. The title said it all, matching the poems words and lines. As a believer, I always look to the positives and not the negatives, so I related well to what you wrote. I thought this was a simple yet lovely piece of writing. Well done!!
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I admired your honesty, your openess. I am glad you are in touch with your inner self and have great self awareness. Your rhymes were great and this made the poem easy to read and follow. There seemed to be a poetic pull coming from this piece from you. It had great balance through out. It seems that your heart is your defender and protecter. Overall, I thought this piece was very soulful and meaningful. Great work and write on !!!
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I loved the originality of the theme of this piece. I thought it was very cute and warming. I too have a special pen I use, it is a stainless steel pen and is very flash. It cost me £20. Luckily I have refills for the pen. I thought your writing was very humbling because I thought I was the only one with a special writing pen. So, thank you for writing this refreshing piece. Great work.
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I liked this poem. I liked the philosophy of it all. The second line was very inspiring to me and held great imagery. The title was simple and matched the writing well. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing this poem from you. Great work and write on !!!
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I loved this small, simple piece of writing from you. Night time or early dawn is my favourite time of day and I think you captured this time very well. The title says "Dark Thoughts" and again this captured the moment very well. I really liked the imagery coming from this piece. Great writing and good expressions. Write on !!
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I loved the depth of this piece. I loved your word crafting. The message was powerful. I thought the prompt was a difficult one to execute but you did a very good job here. I liked the overall effect of this poem on me. It was great. I enjoyed reading this through. Good work and write on !!
I came across your writing here in the random read page, here is what I thought...
A very simple piece of writing. Good rhythm and good flow made it easy to read aloud. I liked the depth, the sorrowful lines. You have probably spoke for many youngsters in this piece of writing. I would have loved to have read more of this work. Good work and write on !!
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Once again, your rhymes are superb, the flowing lines were great. I found no way of improving this writing here. The theme was quite important. You are right, we have made this world what it is today. Greed, hate and lies do not make the world go round. Overall, a thought provoking piece of writing. Well done...
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